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Persuasivewriting:letterofadviceForm格式Structure结构Handwriting—neatandclearDearXiaoDong,I’msorrythatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First/Firstly….itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucanalwayshelpotherswhenevertheyareintrouble

Yours,MissWangDearXiaoDong,I’msorrythatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First/Firstly….itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucanhelpotherswhenevertheyareintrouble.Second/Secondly….

Yours,MissWangPersuasivewriting:letterofadviceForm格式Structure结构Handwriting—neatandclearStructure结构PurposeSuggestions

WishorhopePurposeIamwriting

thislettertoexpressmyviews/ideas/opinionson/aboutyourproblem/situationIwouldliketosuggestthat…Iwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestions/advice….Herearesomesuggestions/tips/piecesofadvice

tohelpyou

BeginningparagraphsI’msorrytohearthatyoufeltquitelonelysometimes,youknowifapersondoesn’thaveanyfriends,justastheplantsdon’thavethesunshine.I’dliketotellyoumyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Structure结构PurposeSuggestions

WishorhopeSuggestionsWhattosay——

Ideas观点

Howtosay——

Tone语气：协商性，委婉性Whattosay——Ideas观点

1.brainstorm2.makealistofideasaccordingtotheirimportance3.keywords,phrasesorsentencepattern4.connectionwords连接词

5.grammaticallycorrectConnectionwordsFirst,second,third,last…Firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally…Firstofall,next,then,lastWhat’smore,besides,inaddition,moreover,alsoIdeasfrombrainstormingItwouldbeagoodideaifyoujoinaclub.Introduceyourselftoothers.Tryyourbesttoletthemknowyou.Showthemthatyouarehappytomakefriendswiththem.Inaclubyoucanmakeyourowncircleoffriends.Bydoingthis,youcangetalongwithotherpeople.Youwon’tfeellonely.Whynotplaysportswithyourclassmates?Smilingisthebestlanguage.Whynotstudyingroupsorstudywithyourclassmatessothattheycanknowyoumore?Youcantakeanactivepartinsomeactivities.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucanworkhardsoyoucanbeoneofthetopstudents.Ithinkifyouareexcellent,youwillbepopularinclass.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyouchatwithyourclassmatesonline.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucanrememberyourclassmates’birthday./ifyoucanhaveapartyinyourhouse.Themoreyoutalktothem,themorefriendsyouwillmake.Asforyourproblem,Ihavesomeideas.First,youmustbebraveanddaretoaskothers.Afriendwhohasthesamehobbiesismucheasiertogetalongwith.Almosteverypersonlikestohangoutwithsomeonewhoishumorousandeasy-going.Lifehasitsproblemsandfrustrations.AcircleoffriendsIhopeyouwillfindtheseideasusefulanddonotfeellonelyanylonger.smileat,positiveYoushouldnevercomplainaboutwhatyourfrienddid.Youaresupposedtobeanicelistener.Beconcernedabout

gratefulTone语气Youshoulddo…Isuggestyoudoing…Iadviceyoutodo…Youaresupposedtodo….Youhadbetterdo…IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…

Itwouldbeagoodideaif….Tone语气Whynotdo….Whydon’tyoudo…Don’tyouthinkitisagoodideaifyoucouldDon’tyouthinkso?Isn’titagoodidea?Wish/HopeIhopeyoucanfollowmyadvicetakemyadviceacceptmyadviceIhopetoseeyourimprovementsIbelieveyoucanconquerthedifficulties/solvetheproblemsIbelieveyoucandoitbetterCorrectinganymistakesinthefollowingsentencesYoushouldsuggesttohaveapicnicwithyourclassmates.WhynottojoinindiscussionsTherearesomeadvices.Remember:beafriendlyfriend.Beanhonestfriend.Beafunnyfriend.Beadevotedfriend.Don’tforgetthatsmilingiscontagious.Whensomeoneissmiling,he/shelightensuptheroom,changesthemoodsofothers,andmakethingshappier.2008北京书面表达假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊，电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestionstohelpyou.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyouwillbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.

Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.