2023学年完整公开课版新闻报道writing

人教课标高二必修5Unit4本单元的话题是“新闻”，是对最近发生的重要而新鲜的事件进行报道或评述。新闻报道是应用文的一种。一般分为四部分：标题、导语、主体、结语。1.新闻报道的第一句往往是全文的中心句(topicsentence)，因此这个句子中常包含四大元素：what(事件)，when(时间)，where(地点)和who(人物)，而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节，往往包括why(原因)和how(具体过程)等。2.新闻报道的关键在于语言客观平实，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。3.时态常用过去时和一般现在时。◆写作指导1.It’sreportedthat.../Asisreported.../Accordingtothereport...2.It’ssaidthat...3.It’slikelythat...4.It’sagreatchancefor...◆常用表达新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面:即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院（SunshineNursingHome）开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。要求：1.时间，地点，人物，活动。2.老人们的反应。3.简短评论。第一步认真审题(analyzetherequirements)第二步谋篇布局(drawupanoutline)第三步联句成篇(organizethesentences)第四步锦上添花(getthearticlepolishedup)第五步查漏补缺(checkthemistakes)审主题students,___________________

审体裁________审人称________审时态____________

审要求time,place,persons,activitiesreactionoftheelderlybriefevaluationdidvoluntaryworknewsthethirdthepasttense｛标题(headline)StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshineWhatwouldbetheheadlineofthiscomposition?导语(lead)LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,________SunshineNursingHomeand________________________.wenttodidsomevoluntarywork正文(body)They_________theelderly_____flowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,__________________and________________.Everythingdone,theysatintheyard____________________________.presentedwithcleaningthewindowssweepingthefloorchattingwiththeelderlypeople评语(evaluation)Whattheydidhasbrought____toothersand________theirownlives.joyenrichedTheygaveflowersandfruitstotheelderly.They_________theelderly____flowersandfruits.高级句式离不了presentedwithTheysaidthestudentshaddonesomuchforthemandtheywouldneverforgetthem.Theysaiditwas_____abeautifulday_____theywouldrememberitforever.suchthat高级句式离不了Whentheyarrived______theirarrival短语远比从句俏UponTheystartedworkingatonce,________thewindowsand________thefloor.2._______________,theysatintheyard________withtheelderlypeople.

巧用分词cleaningsweepingEverythingdonechatting名词性从句要用得妙

Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.Theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits._____theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor._______________,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.合理过渡离不了ThenEverythingdoneOnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.

Upontheirarrival,

LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.WhenItwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave,theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.Theysaid