高中英语书面表达学习教案

1、会计学1高中英语书面表达高中英语书面表达第一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 山东山东2007年高考考试说明年高考考试说明 第第II卷书面表达部分的解读与例证卷书面表达部分的解读与例证关于写作关于写作 “写作写作的词数要求提高到的词数要求提高到120150词汇，词汇，既要求表达事实信息，又要陈既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点述个人观点，相对以往试题而言，思维和，相对以往试题而言，思维和表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花大力气表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花大力气进行有关训练。进行有关训练。” 第1页/共38页第二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。齐鲁晚报齐鲁晚报2006年年12月月19日日B2

2、版版 例证例证当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：短文：第2页/共38页第三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。看电影：省时、有趣、易懂看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著：细节更多、语言优美读原著：细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由我的看法及理由注意：注意：1、词数：、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。给出（不计入词数）。2、参

3、考词汇：、参考词汇：original work 或或 book in the original （原著）（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.第3页/共38页第四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than

4、to read the book in the original.bad beginningsa. I dont think seeing a film is better than reading a book.b. As for me, c. Others hold the view that bad conclusionsa. I think both films and books have their advantages.b. I have no preference between the two.c. I first watch a film , then read the b

5、ook. 第4页/共38页第五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Good ConclusionsGood Conclusions：我的看法及理由：我的看法及理由：Revised film is just like one tree in the original works forest. I prefer to go across the forest rather than enjoy only one tree.Through reading, every reader will have a different Hamlet in mind. So dont give up readi

6、ng. Lets taste the original flavor of art. Books introduce us into the best society.By reading a book, we hear what they said and did; we see them as if they were really alive; we sympathize with them, enjoy withthem. 第5页/共38页第六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 给出的参考答案给出的参考答案 Some of us think that it is better to s

7、ee the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usuallymore interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the

8、original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.第6页/共38页第七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Personally, I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better under

9、stand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original workis better than to see the film based on it.第7页/共38页第八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 第8页/共38页第九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第9页/共38页第十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第10页/共38页第十一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第11页/共38页第十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第12页/共38页第十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第13页/共38页第十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三

10、分。第14页/共38页第十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第15页/共38页第十六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第16页/共38页第十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的优点之一的优点之一). Besides -（的优点之二）（的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides. The

11、 negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一个缺点的第一个缺点)To make matters worse, -(的第二个点的第二个点)Through the above analysis, I believe that the positiveaspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法我的看法)第17页/共38页第十八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第18页/共38页第

12、十九页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 Studying AbroadAttending schools abroad has many advantages. Firstly, by looking at our own country form outside, we can widenour vision and broaden our minds. Secondly, we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local people.thirdly, we can use the foreign langua

13、ge quickly. However, there are also some disadvantages in attendinga foreign school. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most students do not have adequate knowledge of language spoken there. On arriving there, they find it difficultto understand what the teachers are saying. Furthermo

14、re, thecost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-time job to support themselves. On the whole, it is a good thing to study abroad. However,one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.第19页/共38页第二十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 On punctuality Punctuality means obse

15、rving regular or appointed time. There is no doubt that punctuality is of great importance inmodern world, and to be punctual is not only a good quality, but it is also to show respect for others and to win trust.As far as I am concerned, failure to be punctual in keeping ones appointment is invited

16、 to a dinner and arrives later than the appointed time, he keeps all the others guestswaiting. This is great discourtesy towards both the guests and the host. As a proverb says, “ Time flies never to berecalled”, this is true. If we lose something, we may find it again. But lost time can never be re

17、gained. In fact, timeitself is life. Therefore, wasting others time is the same as taking away time from others lives.第20页/共38页第二十一页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 Is the only way out to go to collegeWe had a discussion about whether it is the only way outfor senior students to go to college. Views vary from perso

18、nto person. The majority of students consider it necessary to go to college. They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation. Very few students think it unnecessary to go to university, because the tuition is too high f

19、or their family to afford. Whats more, its rather hard for collegegraduates to find satisfactory jobs. Thirty percent of the students, however, believe “ All roads lead to Rome.” Therefore, it doesnt make any difference whether they go tocollege or not. In my opinion, we can receive a better educati

20、onat college so that we can sever our motherland.第21页/共38页第二十二页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第22页/共38页第二十三页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第23页/共38页第二十四页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的a.a.主谓一致主谓一致 Twenty percent of the students in our class is Twenty percent of the students in our class is from t

21、he suburb.from the suburb.b. b. 人称、指代要一致人称、指代要一致 Bring your books here tomorrow and I will Bring your books here tomorrow and I will return it to the library.return it to the library.c. c. 平行平行( (对称对称) )关系要一致关系要一致 My teacher, Mr Wang, is patient as well as My teacher, Mr Wang, is patient as well as

22、imagination. imagination. d.d.时态（语态）的起点要一致时态（语态）的起点要一致 Mary got up and dressing quickly.Mary got up and dressing quickly.第24页/共38页第二十五页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。第25页/共38页第二十六页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。eg: Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits._, bad eating habits are still very common among

23、 us students. ( 2006 福建卷福建卷)_ you didnt speak clearly, _ I didnt listen well.However, others prefer to go out for traveling, _ it can increase their knowledge and broadentheir horizons. (2006陕西卷陕西卷)However, this change has bad _ good effects, especially dependence on the Internet. (2006 广东卷广东卷)_ he

24、got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” (2006 辽宁卷辽宁卷)Howeveras well assinceEitherorWhen第26页/共38页第二十七页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。 主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。1. 段落开端段落开端: 后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the ori

25、ginal. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting and it is easier to follow.2.段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主 题句加以概括。题句加以概括。 Im a high school students in Beijing, where the Winter Asian Games will start. My

26、 spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. And I have other virtues. I like sports and Im familiar with Beijing. So I think Im suitable for serving the WAG. 第27页/共38页第二十八页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。二二写好段落主题句的三原则写好段落主题句的三原则1.概括全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围概括全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围 如：在一段

27、介绍如：在一段介绍“我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化”的的 段落中，主题句应该是：段落中，主题句应该是： My spoken English has improved a lot. Great changes have taken place in my English study.2. 有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。3. 以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用 复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。 第28页/共38页第二十九页，编辑于星期三：六点

28、 五十三分。请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句。请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句。_ Firstly, the tuition is reasonable. Secondly, the university can help the students get a sum of loan from the banks, which reduces the load of peasant families like mine. Thirdly, its program in computer is recognized as the leader in the country

29、.A. Why do I choose to major in computer science in this university?B. There are several reasons why I have decided to attend this university.Learning a foreign language has changed. Not so long ago students would sit with pens in hand, writing the basic formsof a language, and the learning structures they would neverbe able to speak. In that same classroom today, pens and notebooks have been put away. The spoken sounds of foreignlanguage fill the room第29页/共38页第三十页，编辑于星期三：六点 五十三分。扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意以下三点以下三点:1.扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容。扩展句是主题句的扩展句要紧扣文章