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考点19应用文写作:推荐

信、告知信(解析版)

【命题解读】

书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、申请信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道

歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。

以下对推荐信、告知作提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。

推荐信

【考情分析】

1.推荐物

推荐电影,书,歌曲,说明你喜欢的理由。

2.推荐人

推荐历史人物,老师,主持人,学生会主席,受尊敬的人等,介绍人物,并说明你推荐的理

由。

3.推荐事(行为)

推荐来中国旅游(景点,线路,特色)、来中国留学、过中国节日等,说明推荐理由。

【布局思维导图】

1.词汇

能力:haveagiftfor,beskilledin,beexperiencedin,beanexpertin,speakfluentEnglish,

creative,aboywithgreatability,efficient,intelligent,etc.

经历:graduatefrom,beagraduatefrom,majorin,gain/win/getthefirstgradescholarship,

getgoodgrades,anall-aroundstudentwithexcellentgradesin,excellentgradesinallsubjects,be

giventhetitleof,gain/winthefirstprize/place,winagold/silver/coppermedal,etc.

性格:outgoing,easytogetalongwith,enthusiastic,enthusiasmispartofhischaracter,etc.

2.经典句型

(1)Heisanall-aroundstudentwithexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Hehasbeengiventhe

titleofthe"excellentstudent".

(2)Asaboywithgreatpotential,heisgoodatsolvingdifficultproblems.

(3)LiMing,agraduatefromPekingUniversity,majorsincomputersoftwaredesign.

(4)Hehasenjoyedthereputation/titleoftheExcellentGraduate.

3.写作套路

开头:

(1)Iamwritingtorecommendtoyou...

(2)Iwouldliketorecommendtoyou...

(3)Itisagreathonorformetorecommendtoyou...

(4)Itakethepleasureinrecommendingtoyou...

结尾:

(1)Ifhecanjoinyourcompany,hewillgivefullplaytohistalent.Andyourcompanywill

alsobegreatlybenefited.SoIstronglyrecommend...toyou.

(2)Inaword,hewouldbeagoodchoice.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldliketoconsider

myrecommendation.

(3)Ihopeyoucangivehimachance.Ibelievehewillmakeagreatcontributiontoyour

company.

(4)Ihopethatyouwouldtakemyrecommendationintoconsideration/account.

【写作模板】

Dear(称谓)

Inresponsetoyourrequestfor(推荐事由),Iwouldliketorecommend(具体

推荐事项).Irecommenditmainlyforthefollowingthreereasons.

Initially,(推荐理由一).Additionally/Asidefromit,(推荐理由二).Plus,

(推荐理由三).Ifyouwantdetails,please(联系方式).

Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyappreciated/expected.

Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【写作实操】

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jimmy,由于C0VID-19不得不宅在家里,所以他想利用这

段时间学习汉语,想让你给他推荐一个汉语老师。请你给他写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐他

推荐的情况。内容包括:

1.表示关心;

2.介绍汉语老师的情况。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【模板套用】

DearJimmy(称谓)

InresponsetoyourrequestforaChineseteacher(推荐事由),Iwouldliketorecommenda

candidate,whoIthinkisthebestsuitedforyou(具体推荐事项).Irecommenditmainlyforthe

followingthreereasons.

Initially,heisopen-mindedandeagertocommunicatewithpeople,especiallyfromdifferent

backgrounds(推荐理由一).Asidefromit,hismajorisChinese,whichguaiantensyouwillget

professionalhelp(推荐理由二).Plus,healsowantstolearnEnglish(推荐理由三).Ifyouwant

details,pleasecontacthimat(联系方式).

Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyexpected.

Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【仿写训练】

假定你是李华,你校美国交换生Peter打算在某小区租房子并向你求助。请根据以下提

示给他回复邮件。要点如下:

1.推荐某个小区;

2.说明推荐理由(至少三条);

3.表明提供帮助的意愿。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

【模板范文】

DearPeter(称谓)

Inresponsetoyourrequestforrentingahouse(推荐事由),Iwouldliketorecommenda

neighborhoodcalledGardenCommunitytoyou(具体推荐事项).Irecommenditmainlyforthe

followingthreereasons.

Initially,itissoconvenientwithavundergroundnearbytha[youcangoanywhereasyoulike

(推荐理由一).Additionally,it'sverybeautifUl,Deacefiilandcleantoliveinbecauseof[he

wonderfulserviceoftheCommunityCenter(推荐理由二).Plus,thisCommunityiswell-known

foritshighlevelofsafety(推荐理由三).Ifyouwantdetails,pleasecontactme(联系方式).

Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyappreciated.

Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

首段告知内容(原因、背景等)

段落要点

正文告知具体事宜(时间、地点等)

结尾表达期待愿望

【写作模板】

Dear(称谓)

Awareofyourenthusiasmfor/Delightedtolearnthat______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),

I'mwritingtoextendmy(看法、关心、欢迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevant

information.

(活动信息).Tobeginwith,(要点一).Furthermore,(要点二).Tosum

up,(要点三).

Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【高频词句】

【常用词汇】

1.informsb.ofsth.告知某人某事

2.introducesth.tosb.向某人介绍某物

3.providesomeinformationforsb.为某人提供一些信息

4.workoutmyschedule制订我的计划

5.asfollows列举如下

6.showsb.around...带领某人参观某处

7.haveatry试试看,尝试一下

8.signupfor..报名参加

9.wokas/serveas/actas.任……职,当……

lO.mean/intendtodosth.打算做某事

11.sparesometimetodosth.抽出时间做某事

12.takeacourse参加一门课程

13.payavisitto.....去参观

14.makeadifference有影响;起(重要)作用

15.hesitatetodosth.犹豫,有所顾虑

16.bescheduledat/on...被安排在

17.makepreparationsfbr..为...准备

18.makeanarrangementforsth.为...做安排

19.beintendedtosth.打算,意图

【常用句型】

1.Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.

2.Youaresupposed/expectedto...

3.Youshould/You'dbetter...

4.Therewillbealectureon....

5.Thelecturewilllast3hours./Thelecturewillbeginat...andendat...

6.Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.

7.Pleasegetthereontime./Pleasegeteverythingreadyaheadoftime.

8.Don'tmissthechance./Don'tbelate.

9.Everyoneiswelcometo.......

10.Isincerelyinviteyouto...

【写作实操技巧】

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,

内容包括:

1.比赛信息;

2.赛前准备:

3.表达期待。

【模板范文】

DearChris(称谓)

Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium

(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣).I'mwritingtoextendmyexcitement(看法、关心、欢迎等)and

informyouofsomerelevantinformation..

Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2P.M.andlastforroughly3

hours(活动信息).Preparationsshouldbemadeinadvance,rangingfromdoingregularexercise,

keepingpositiveattitudetopresentingyourselvesaheadoftime(要点一).Furthermore,itis

necessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou(要点二).Tosum

up,Iwishthatwithjointeffortsandexcellentteamwork,wecouldliveuptotheexpectationsof

ourschool(耍点三).

Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【仿写训练】

假定你是学生会主席李华,你校的交换生Bob已学习中国象棋长达一年,特发邮件向你

询问将由学生会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:

1.举办比赛的目的;

2.比赛的时间和地点;

3.建议他报名参加并说明理由。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:中国象棋大赛ChineseChessContest

【模板范文】

DearChris(称谓)

AwareofyourenthusiasmfortheChineseChessContesttobeheldbytheStudents'Union

(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣),I'mwritingtoextendmyopinion(看法、关心、欢迎等)and

informyouofsomerelevantinformation..

Firstandforemost,Aimedatraisingstudents'awarenessoftraditionalChinesecultureand

developingstudents'loveforChinesechess,thecontestwillbeheldattheStudentCenteron

September8出(活动信息).SinceyouhavelearnedtoplayChinesechessforayear,Isuggestthat

youshouldparticipateinthecontest(要点一).Furthermore,Iamconvincedthatyour

participationwillsurelymakeadifference(要点二).Tosumup,throughthecontest,no\onlycan

youimproveyourskillsofplayingChinesechessbulalsoyoucanmakefriendswilhother

excellentplayers(要点三).

Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

,经要好题]

【真题1】2019年3月高考真题天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的”读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展

以"LeTsRead”为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一

种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:

(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;

(2)推荐的理由。

参考词汇:

科幻小说sciencefiction侦探小说detectivenovel魔幻小说fantasy

传记文学biography科普读物popularscience

注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;

(3)内容充实,行文连贯;

(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。

【参考范文】

Let'sRead

Knowingthatduring"ReadingMonth^^inourschoolEnglishSocietywillholdan

activitynamed"Let'sRead"onWechat,I'dliketosharesomethingaboutmyownexperienceand

feelingwithallthestudents.

IhavebeencrazyaboutreadingsinceIwasachild.Myfavoritetypeofbookisalways

sciencefictions.Sciencefictionisbasedonthelatesttechnologyanddiscoveryandtellingusa

fantasystorythatwillpossiblyhappeninthefuture.Inthepastdecades,sciencefictionhasbeen

moreandmorepopularwithteenagers.Therefore,ithascomeintoanewstyleandevenaculture.

Whilereadingsciencefictions,Inotonlyfeelshockedandamazedabouttheunknownfuture

madeupbytheauthorbutalsoknowmoreknowledgeandinformationaboutthedevelopmentof

science.

I'msureeveryteenagerwilllikesciencefictionandbenefitfromit!Lookingforwardto

gettingyoutotakepartin"Let'sRead”!

【真题2】2018年3月高考真题天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的外国学生发的帖

子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给Chris留言:

(1)鼓励他来中国留学;

(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);

(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

【参考范文】

Hi,Chris.Tvelearntfromyourpostthatyou'reconsideringwhethertostudyinChina.Asa

Chinesehighschoolstudent,Tdlovetooffersomesuggestionstohelpyoudecideonthismatter.

Firstofall,IwouldencourageyoutochooseaChineseuniversity.Chinaisanationwitha

longhistoryanddiversecultures,whichIthinkyou'llbeinterestedin.Afterfouryearsofstudy,I

believe,youwouldknowalotaboutChina.AndwiththedegreeyougetandtheChineselanguage

youpickup,youwillprobablyfindagoodjobandhaveabrightfuture.Besides,Chinesepeople

arefriendlyandkind.You'llfinditeasytomakefriendsandenjoyahappyandmeaningfullife

here.

So,don'thesitate.Tmwillingtoofferfurtherhelpifyouneed.

【真题3】2016年北京卷

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很

感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:

1.该人物是谁;

2.该人物的主要贡献;

3.该人物对你的影响。

注意:

1.词数不少于50;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

【参考范文】

DearJim,

It'sgreattohearfromyou.IfeelproudknowingyourinterestinChinesehistory.Asformy

favouritefigureinChinesehistory,itmustbeWeiYuan,agreatthinkerinthelateQingDynasty.

He,inhisbook,HaiguoTuzhi(MapsandRecordsoftheWorld),introducedmoderntechnologies

andideastoChina.Thatopenedoureyestotheworld.Infact,heinspiresmetomajorinEnglish

incollegetobeabridgebetweenChinaandtheworld.

Interestedinknowingmore?Icanfindyousomebooks!Justletmeknow.Cheers!

Yours,

LiHua

【真题4】2014浙江卷

学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书

馆最需要购置科普类图书(popularsciencebooks)和文学类图书(literarybooks)。请你用英

语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。

注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。

DearMr.Wang,

Yourssincerely

LiYue

【参考范文】

DearMr.Wang,

Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,Tdliketogivesomesuggestions.

Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasic

principlesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjects

betterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.

Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyI

recommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Classicworks,writtenbymasters,present

greatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,

butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.

PHbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.

Yourssincerely,

LiYue

【真题5】(2019•天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期

一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座

内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);

(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;

(3)希望从中有何收获。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯:

(3)开头和结尾己给出、不计入总词数。

DearChris,

I'mLiJim>astudentatChenguangHighSchool.

Thankyouforyourtime.

Yours,

LiJin

【参考范文】

DearChris,

FmLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.Igotthenewsthatyourschoolwillsend

teacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange.Duringtheactivity,youwillgivea

lectureonWesternart.Youwanttoseekforadviceonwhattopicthelecturewillbeabout.From

mypersonalnote,musicismypriority.

1aminterestedinallkindsofmusic,amongwhichJazzismyfavorite.Iwanttoknowabout

thehistoryofjazz,andsomefamousjazzsingers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanaddsome

sessionsofenjoyingjazz.

Thankyouforyourtime.

Yours,

LiJin

【真题6】(2018•全国卷1)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发

邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:

1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

DearTerry,

Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendand

confusedabouttheChinesecustoms,1amwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.

Firstly,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyouarrive5to10minutesearlier,whichiscommonin

Chinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldbringsomeappropriategiftswithme,

suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.Besides,tablemannersarealsowhatyoushouldpay

attentionto.Forexample,youarenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Instead,

layingthemonyourdishisasmartchoice.

Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme.

Yours

LiHua

【真题7】(2017.全国卷1)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写

封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:

(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意:

1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

DearLeslie,

IamveryhappythatyouhavemadegreatprogressinlearningChineseandyouareinterested

inChineseculture.Now1*11tellyouthenextlearningprogramme.OnJuly20,wearegoingto

learnpoemsoftheTangDynastywhichyouareinterestedinintheLectureHall.Asaforeign

learner,itisdifficultforyoutounderstandthetruemeaningandthecultureofthem.Therefore,

beforeclass,youcanreadsomebooksrelatedtothehistoryoftheTangDynastytobetter

appreciatethepoems.

BesuretogototheLectureHallontime.Youcannotmissthewonderfulpoems.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【真题8】(2017•天津卷)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。

近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;

(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如

深入了解天津等);

(3)希望她有机会重访天津。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:第十三届全运会the13thNationalGames

DearMrs.Green,

I'mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiJin

【参考范文】

DearMrs.Green,

I'msogladtohearfromyou.WhileithasbeenmorethanayearsinceyoutaughtusEnglish,

I'vemissedyoualot,thinkingaboutthosehappymomentswhenwestayedwithyou.Actually,

I'vebeendoingprettywellinmystudiesaswellasinmylife.Apartfrommyacademicstudies,I

alwaysmanagetofindtimeforwhatFminterestedin.Forexample,Ihavesuccessfullygot

admittedasavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames,whichisscheduledtobeheldattheendof

thisAugust.Togetadmitted,Ihavemadegoodpreparationsbeforehand,tryingtoknowasmuch

asIcouldaboutmycity,Tianjin.

Bytheway,it'smysincerehopethatyoucansparesometimeforavisittoTianjinagain,

whichhaschangedgreatlysinceyouleft.

PleaseletmeknowifyoucometoTianjin.

Yours,

LiJin

【真题9】(2019年新课标全国卷H)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队

友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:

1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。

注意:

词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

DearChris,

Howiseverythinggoing?Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.Avolleyballmatchisgoingtobe

heldinafewweeksandourteamwillparticipate.

Asforthedetailedinformationofthematch,therewillbeprobablydozensofteamswhich

aregoingtomakearevolvingcompetition.Additionally,notonlycanthetopthreeteamseachbe

awardedamedalbutalltheotherteamstakingpartinitwillgetarewardaswell.Whatwillbethe

mostattractiveisthatitwillbeagreathonorforthetopthreeteamstoreceivespecialvolleyballs

thathavethenameofthemostpopularvolleyballplayeronthem.Therefore,wemustdoenough

preparationsbeforethematch,suchastrainingasfrequentlyaswecan.

SoexcitedamIthatIcan'twaittojoininit.Howaboutyou?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【模拟检测1】(2022•福建泉州•模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Terry在厦门中

学生助手微信公众号里发邮件询问你今年暑假的安排,请你在公众号中回复邮件,内容包括:

1.当社区志愿者;

2.为大学生活做准备。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearTerry,

Yours,

LiHua

DearTerry,

Learningthatyouwanttoknowmyplaninsummerholiday,IamwritingtotellyouwhatI

willdo.

First,Iwillbeacommunityvolunteer,becauseIwanttohelppeopleinmycommunity.Ican

dosomecleaning,talkwiththeold,andteachthemhowtosurftheInternet.Besides,sinceIwill

entercollege,Iwillmakefulluseoftheholidaytodosomepreparationsformycollegelife,

whichcanmakemebetteradapttothenewlife.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给新西兰笔友Terry回复邮件,告诉他你今年暑假的安

排,内容包括:当社区志愿者;为大学生活做准备。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

①暑假:summerholiday—summervocation

②大学:colleger-university

③此外:Besides—>Inaddition

④充分利用:makefulluseof-takefulladvantageof

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:Icandosomecleaning,talkwiththeold,andteachthemhowtosurftheInternet.

拓展句:Icandomanymeaningfulthings,whichincludedoingthecleaning,talkingwiththeold,

andteachingthemhowtosurftheInternet.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Learningthatyouwanttoknowmyplaninsummerholiday,Iamwritingtotellyou

whatIwilldo.(运用了非谓语动词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Besides,sinceIwillentercollege,Iwillmakefulluseoftheholidaytodosome

preparationsformycollegelife,whichcanmakemebetteradapttothenewlife.(运用了since弓I

导的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【模拟检测2】(2022•湖北省罗田县第一中学模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter

得知你校开设了名为“心灵小屋(SoulHouse)”的心理咨询室,来信询问其具体情况。请你

给他写一封回信,内容包括:

1.开设原因和目的;

2.具体实施情况;

3.效果及反馈。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

参考答案:

DearPeter,

DelightedtoknowthatyoushowaninterestintheSoulHouseinourschool,Tmhonoredto

informyouoftherelevantdetails.

Withagrowingnumberofstudentsfeelingstressedout,ourschoolsetuptheSoulHouse,

aimingatrelievingstudents?pressureandensuringtheirhealth.Itopensfrom5:40p.m.to6:40

p.m.onweekdays.Apsychologistisondutyintheroomandheprovidespsychologicalexpertise

andguidanceforstudentsandhelpsresolvetheirmentalhealthissuesandconcerns.Asitsname

suggests,t4SoulHouse“hasbecomeaplaceofpeaceforoursoulsandplayedanimportantrolein

ourmentalhealth.

Hopemyaccountcancontributetoyourunderstanding.Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,

don'thesitatetoturntome.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封信,介绍你校开设的名为“心灵小

屋(SoulHouse)”的心理咨询室的相关情况,内容包括:1.开设原因和目的;2.具体实施

情况;3.效果及反馈。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

高兴的:delighted—>glad

荣幸的:honored-privileged

相关的:relevant—related

在...中起重要作用:playanimportantrolein—>playanimportantpartin

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:Withagrowingnumberofstudentsfeelingstressedout,ourschoolsetuptheSoulHouse,

aimingatrelievingstudents'pressureandensuringtheirhealth.

拓展句:Withagrowingnumberofstudentsfeelingstressedout,ourschoolsetuptheSoulHouse,

whoseaimistorelievestudents,pressureandensuretheirhealth.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]DelightedtoknowthatyoushowaninterestintheSoulHouseinourschool,Ttn

honoredtoinformyouoftherelevantdetails.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,don'thesitatetoturntome.(运用了if引导的条件

状语从句)

【模拟检测3](2022•河北石家庄・二模)假定你是李华,你校四月份举办了“世界读书日”

系列活动。请给你的笔友Adam写一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况。内容包括:

1.活动目的;

2.活动内容;

3.你的收获。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearAdam,

Yours,

LiHua

参考答案:

I'mLiHua,writingtointroduceaseriesofactivitieswhichwereheldinmyschoolonWorld

ReadingDay.

BasedonthethemeoftheReadingDay—ReadingChineseClassicsandInheritingChinese

Culture,alltheactivitiesareintendedtoraiseourawarenessoftraditionalChineseculture.

DiverseactivitiessuchasReadingSalonandBooksExchangetookplaceonthatday.Ibenefiteda

lotfromtheactivities,whichenrichedmyknowledgeabouttraditionalcultureandhelpedme

developagoodreadinghabit.

Ihopewecanshareourreadingexperiencesomeday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Adam写一封电子邮件介绍你校四月份举办了

“世界读书日”系列活动。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

一系列:aseriesof—achainof

目的是:areintendedto—areaimedto

多样的:diverse—various/avarietyof

希望:hope—►wish/beeagerto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:DiverseactivitiessuchasReadingSalonandBooksExchangetookplaceonthatday.

拓展句:DiverseactivitieswhichincludesReadingSalonandBooksExchangetookplaceonthat

day.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]BasedonthethemeoftheReadingDay—ReadingChineseClassicsand

InheritingChineseCulture,alltheactivitiesareintendedtoraiseourawarenessoftraditional

Chineseculture.(运用了非谓语动词做状语)

【高分句型2]Ibenefitedalotfromtheactivities,whichenrichedmyknowledgeabout

traditionalcultureandhelpedmedevelopagoodreadinghabit.(运用fwhich引导的非限制性

定语从句)

【模拟检测41(2022.山东荷泽•二模)假定你是李华,你校外教Tom来信说因疫情(the

Covid-19pandemic)不能按时返校参加读书节活动。请你给他回封邮件,内容包括:

1.表示遗憾;

2.做好防护;

3.表达愿望。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考答案:

DearTom,

ExtremelysorrytogetthenewsthatonaccountoftheCovid-19

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