2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专题复习经典1

1、2020-2021 年中考英语书面表达专题复习经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1. 书面表达假如彳是Amy,德国的交换生 Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中， 她询问如下信息：1.你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3.她要承担的家务劳动；4.现在，你 就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！ 要求： 1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 字数约 110 词。Dear Sara，I m glad to heafrom you yesterday.Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I m gla

2、d to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bo

3、wl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it's our duty to help

4、 our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. Love,Amy【解析】 【详解】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 be

5、 glad to ， hear from ， unlike in the West ， on the table ， a sign of ， help sb. do ， do some housework ， wash the dishes， clean the room ， make the bed ， take care of， how to do 等。而复杂并列结构InChina, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. 和 If you feel uncomfortable w

6、ith this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达 更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既

7、不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2 书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy 发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy 回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（ physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（ 1 ）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（ 2 ）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，

8、没时间。（ 3 ）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少 80 词。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Billy,ll tellIt s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail. You wanted to know abou t my usual

9、 exercise. I it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is go

10、od for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如

11、：I ambusy ；because i have，Doing exercise can help , So I -advise you to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3.书面表达Dear B

12、ellyfI like reading a Hooks very much. But my parents anti teachers tire ugtiinst it. They don 7 allow me io read any eRao& From then on, tny life is not interestai alL What can / do ? Could you give me some advice ?I am looking forward to hearing from you soonYoursLucy假设你是某英文报纸“Teenager升目的编辑Bet

13、ty,日前收到了 Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a p

14、roduct of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides

15、, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books a

16、re beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 in recent years, as a product of, live in , more and more , so that for example , do harm to , be harmful to , in my opinion , take the place of, instead of 等。同时 For one thin

17、g, / For another,/ However, 等使短 文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are soconvenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and proper

18、ly instead of reading over. 等复 杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意 总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富 有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。4.书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1 .喜

19、欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2 .喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面 的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程木米梦想1 .希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2 .每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】 Zhang Yang is a student

20、 in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his

21、 pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like read

22、ing ， more than ， all kinds of ， spend time doing ， enjoy doing ， the number of ， twice a year， be the chief engineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. 等多

23、种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样 化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。5 （题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1.定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120 ）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要

24、求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80 词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时 emergency 紧急情况ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I' d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I'

25、; d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What' s more, it can

26、deal withenomsemor example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I ' m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文

27、中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing , I' d like to dointroduce sb. to , all of you , at home , do some washing , at a fixed time, have a chat, play chess do exercise, deal with, a great help, in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elde

28、rly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。6.书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，

29、班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计 划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能（或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼（或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然（或自拟一点）汪思：1.表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming

30、holiday. That s all. Thank you.【答案】 Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least on

31、e skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it's a good idea to join in some cha

32、rity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chan

33、ces to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I'd like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least ， be interested in ， during theholi

34、day ， plan to do ， join in ， be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ， be close to nature ， search the Internet 等。而 First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activiti

35、es because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使 短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。7. ( B)根据要求完成大作文,词数：80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为 What We Get from Spor

36、ts 的短文 ,应该包含以下要点 ：1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2 .多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己 .3 .男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4 .女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条 .5 .你对运动的观点.6 .注意 :文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字7 .短文开头已给出,不计入词数.8 .参考词语 :keep slim （保持苗条）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】 Student

37、s in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of s

38、ports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from s

39、ports. 【解析】 【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括： 1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 have fun ， in order to ， as for， in my opinion 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意 思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。9 书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声

40、，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文 介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2 .短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺 ；3 .短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】

41、How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happines

42、s and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn 'do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn ' t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Ther

43、efore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题：结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和 一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用

44、。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文 意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达 出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only - but also, help a lot, share happiness and sadness, do well in , give up, besides, so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj., therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密；文章 的最后 I hope

45、 one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了 自 己愿望与想法， 使文章增色不少，值得学习。9. 2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现 爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。某网站正在开展以向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。提示词语： pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示问题： What should you do in your daily li

46、fe? Why do you do so?As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more