辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信1．假定你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提示，请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。1.认真计划好自己的时间；2.不要放弃自己的爱好，但也不要忘记学习；3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物合适。请你根据下列要点回复，并表示感激。1.感谢他尽己所能去帮助残疾儿童；2.说明自己决定和他一起去；3.建议送些水果或儿童书籍等，并说明理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你的朋友尼克近来沉迷于游戏《王者荣耀》（KingofGlory）不能自拔，你在得知此事后非常担忧。请你给他写一封信予以劝说，要点如下：1.你对他的担心；

2.游戏的危害；

3.摆脱游戏的办法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。DearNick,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHua4．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到了很大的影响，他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一份回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。1.改变生活习惯，合理安排时间。2.经常锻炼，增强体质。注意：1、词数80左右；2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJohn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua5．假如你是李华，你在网上获悉“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试（the“ChineseBridge”ChineseProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents）将在下个月当地电视台举办。你的外国朋友Frank正在大学学习中文，你建议他去试一试，并表示可以提供帮助。报名时间：5月20日截止；报名地点：所在大学的学生会。注意：1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearFrank,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假如你是李华，你校将在校内给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗活动，请写信通知你的外教David，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.注意事项；3.建议参加。参考词汇：疫苗：vaccine；接种疫苗：getvaccinated注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假设你是李华，有外国友人到你校参观，想了解你们英语学习的情况。请你代表学校用英语发言，要点如下：1.表示欢迎并简要介绍学校情况；2.说明英语学习情况(课堂、活动等)；3.征求对方学好英语的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dearfriends，Welcometoourschool!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.8．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他在自学英语时，发现汉字的读音很难掌握。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.表示理解2.提出建议注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．假定你是李华，你校将开展音乐选修课课程。即将来校学习的英国交换生Peter不知如何选择，请你给他写信提供建议，内容包括：1.选修课种类介绍。2.你的建议及理由。参考词汇：选修课：optionalcourse

民乐folkmusic注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。请你给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导，内容包括：1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容；2.请她编写英文字幕；3.询问对拍摄的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：字幕subtitle；纪录片documentaryDearMissEvans,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua1．DearSimon,Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomeworkIthinkyou'dbetterplanyourdaycarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Don'tgiveupyourhobbybutdonotforgetaboutyourstudy，either.Youshouldkeepabalancebetweenstudyandbobby.IhopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyouYourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写信给自己的沉迷于篮球而忽略学习的朋友Simon一些建议。【详解】词汇积累感谢：thankyou/thanks/Ireallyappreciateit足够的：enough=adequate建议：suggestion=advice有价值的：beofvalue=bevaluable句式拓展简单句变为复合句原句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework拓展句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework，whichbothersyourecently.【点睛】[高分句型1].Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.（运用了it充当形式主语的固定结构，和省略that的定语从句）[高分句型2]Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.（运用了定语从句）2．DearDavid,I’mgratefulthatyouwanttohelpthedisabledchildren.Readingyouremail,I’msomovedthatI’vedecidedtoseethedisabledchildrenonChildren’sDaywithyou.Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,it’sreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.I’dliketorecommendsendingthechildrensomefruitsorsomebooks.Ontheonehand,fruitsaregoodforchildren’shealth,anditisalsoconvenienttocarry.Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.Anyway,whateverpresentsyouchoose,you’llbeappreciatedbythosedisabledchildren.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物合适。请你根据题干中提供的要点进行回复，并表示感激。【详解】1.词汇积累礼物：present→gift感激的：grateful→thankful对……有好处：begoodfor→benefit无论什么：whatever=→nomatterwhat2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.拓展句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy,sobooksmayalsobeagoodchoice.【点睛】[高分句型1]Readingyouremail,I’msomovedthatI’vedecidedtoseethedisabledchildrenonChildren’sDaywithyou.(运用了现在分词及so…that句型)[高分句型2]Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,it’sreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)3．DearPeter,I'msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtoKingofGlory.Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesisnotonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomakesyouisolatedfromtherealworld.Ithinkyoucantryotherthingstodistractyourattention.Forexample,youcanplaybasketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcanimproveyourfitnessandstrengthenyourfriendship.It’salsoagoodchoicetocommunicatewithyourparentsandfriends,sharingyourhappinessandsorrow.Besides,youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime.Longingforgoodnewsfromyou!Yourssincerely【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友尼克写封信，陈述沉迷游戏的坏处，然后提出一些建议，帮他远离游戏。【详解】1.词汇积累健康：health→fitness加强：deepen→strengthen扩大：widen→broaden对……有害：bebadfor=beharmfulto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime.拓展句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime,whosecontentinterestsyousomuchthatgamesareoutofyourmind.【点睛】[高分句型1]youcanplaybasketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcanimproveyourfitnessandstrengthenyourfriendship.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesisnotonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomakeyouisolatedfromtherealworld.(运用了动名词短语作主语，notonly…butalso…引导的并列句)4．DearJohn,I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehadabadinfluenceonyourhealth.Knowingyouworryaboutitverymuch,I’mwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,suchasgettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.Besides,youshoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamesandformahealthylifestyle.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一份回信，就他沉迷于电脑游戏使健康受到了很大的影响，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。【详解】1.词汇积累影响：effect→influence增强：buildup→strengthen摆脱：getoutof→getridof期待：expect→lookforwardto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,youshoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.拓展句：Besides,itisimportantthatyoushoulddoregularexercisetostrengthenyourbody.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehadabadinfluenceonyourhealth.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hear的宾语和由which引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,suchasgettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.（运用了由sothat连接的结果状语从句）[高分句型3]Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamesandformahealthylifestyle.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语）5．Onepossibleversion:DearFrank,IreadontheInternetthatthefirstroundof“ChineseBridge”ChineseProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents—annotedinternationalChinesecompetitionwillbeheldinthelocaltelevisionstationnextmonth.IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseintheuniversity.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwellyouhavelearnedChinese.Ifyouwouldliketotry,youarerequiredtogototheStudentsUniontosignup.Don’thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.AndthelastthingIwanttoremindyouofisthedeadline—March31st.Maysuccesswaituponyourefforts.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Frank写封信，建议他参加下个月当地电视台举办的“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试（the“ChineseBridge”ChineseProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents）。【详解】1.词汇积累举办：hold→host尝试：try→attempt杰出的：outstanding→splendid提醒某人某事：remindsb.ofsth.=remindsb.todosth.2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseintheuniversity.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwellyouhavelearnedChinese.拓展句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseintheuniversity.SoIthinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwellyouhavelearnedChinese.【点睛】[高分句型1]IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseintheuniversity.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Don’thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.(运用了祈使句及whenever引导的让步状语从句)6．Possibleversionsone:DearDavid，Bymeansofthisletter,I’dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbeaCOVID-19vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool’sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyoucanbrowserelevantinformation.Onceyou’vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtipsshouldbeborneinyourmind:checkupifyou’reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30minutesaftergettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.Istronglysuggestyouseekvaccination,whichnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.Yours,LiHuaPossibleversionstwo:DearDavid,I’mwritingtoinformyouoftheCOVID-19vaccinationarrangementofourschool.Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschoolclinic.Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou’reallergictothevaccine.Ifnot,thencheckwiththeprovidertomakesureyoubringanyneededdocuments.Aftergettingtheinjection,it’srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyoudonothaveaconcerningreaction.Istronglyadviseyoutoseekvaccination.Thisnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.Sincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信通知外教David学校给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗的活动。【详解】范文11.词汇积累通过：through→bymeansof公开/通知：announce→release决定：decidetodo→makeupyourmindtodo记住：remember→bearsthinyourmind排除/删除：cutout→exclude2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Bymeansofthisletter,I’dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.拓展句：NowI’mwritingthisletter,inwhichI’dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.【点睛】[高分句型1]Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbeaCOVID-19vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool’sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyoucanbrowserelevantinformation.（该句中“fromwhosewebsiteyoucanbrowserelevantinformation”运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句。）[高分句型2]Onceyou’vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtipsshouldbeborneinyourmind:checkupifyou’reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30minutesaftergettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.（该句中“Onceyou’vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated”为“once(一旦)”引导的时间状语从句。）范文21.词汇积累通知：notice→informsb.ofsth弄清楚：findout→figureout建议：suggest→recommend停留：stay→remain2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschoolclinic.拓展句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,whichwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschoolclinic.[高分句型1]Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou’reallergictothevaccine.（该句中“whetheryou’reallergictothevaccine”为whether引导的宾语从句。）[高分句型2]Aftergettingtheinjection,it’srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyoudonothaveaconcerningreaction.（该句中使用了“it”作为形式主语，构成“it’srecommendedtodo”结构，真正主语为动词不定式“toremainatthesitefor30minutes”。）7．Dearfriends，Welcometoourschool!Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool，whichcoversanareaofabout200，000squaremeters.Thereareabout300teachingstaffandover3000studentsinourschoo1.WehaveoneEnglishclasseachdayfromMondaytoFriday.EveryThursdayafternoon，wecangototheEnglishComer，talkingfreelyinEnglish.Eachsemester，weholdoneEnglishdebateandoneEnglishspeechcontest.WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish，butwewouldappreciateitifyoucouldgiveussomevaluableadvice.That’sa11.Thankyou.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表学校向外国友人介绍英语学习情况，并征求学好英语的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累简要介绍：introducebriefly→giveyouabriefintroduction占地：hasanareaof→coversanareaof学期：term→semester感激：begrateful→appreciate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：EveryThursdayafternoon，wecangototheEnglishComer，talkingfreelyinEnglish.拓展句：Inorderthatwecanapplywhatwe’velearnedinclasstoourdailylife,wecangototheEnglishComereveryThursday,talkingfreelyinEnglish.【点睛】[高分句型1]Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool，whichcoversanareaofabout200，000squaremeters.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish，butwewouldappreciateitifyoucouldgiveussomevaluableadvice.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)8．Onepossibleversion:DearJohn,KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn’tmatter.Afterall,it’sdifficultforforeignerstograspit.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreathelp.Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossachallengingChinesecharacter.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasingpopularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethepronunciation.IknowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.Itiswelcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John回信，对学习汉字读音很难掌握表示理解并提出建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）havetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation;itdoesn’tmatter;practicalapproaches;refertoXinhuaDictionary;someChineselearningapps;makemuchprogress第三步：连词成句1.KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn’tmatter.2.Afterall,it’sdifficultforforeignerstograspit.3.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreathelp.4.Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossachallengingChinesecharacter.5.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasingpopularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethepronunciation.6.IknowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.7.Itiswelcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,(供参考)3.表转折对比关系：However4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn’tmatter.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasingpopularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethepronunciation.(运用了with的独立主格结构)9．DearPeter,Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingtomakesomesuggestions.Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playinginstrumentsandsoon.ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolkmusic.Inclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.

Inaddition,youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments,whichisagoodwaytolearnaboutChineseculture.

Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply！Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给交换生Peter关于如何选择音乐选修课课程提出建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，关于如何选择音乐选修课课程提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对对方有用。要求：1.说明写信的原因：关于如何选择音乐选修课课程给Peter提出建议2.提出具体的建议：①选修课种类介绍：民族音乐、合唱、乐器演奏②建议选择民族音乐：学唱民族歌曲，欣赏民族乐曲3.希望建议对对方有帮助第二步:列提纲（重点词组）wonder；makesomesuggestions；playinstruments；beinterestedin；folkmusic；enjoymusicpieces；playwith；traditionalinstrument；learnabout；afeastforone’sears；behelpfulto第三步：连词成句(1)Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingtomakesomesuggestions.(2)Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playinginstrumentsandsoon.(3)ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolkmusic.(4)Intheclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.

(5)Youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments.(6)ItisagoodwaytolearnaboutChineseculture.

(7)Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.(8)Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.

提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇表递进关系：inaddition【点睛】[高分句型1]Learningthatyouarewond