Unit10Ifyougotothepartyyoullhaveagoodtime!课时4Writing（教师版）八年级英语上册讲义（人教版）

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagoodtime!Writing知识精讲知识精讲话题分析本单元的话题谈论生活中遇到的困难及其引发的感受，会提出合理的建议。并对未来的生活有规划。写作目标能描述青少年在生活中遇到的困难及其引发的感受和事情的后果，能针对问题提出建议。1．能用if引导的条件状语从句谈论事情的结果；2．能正确使用情态动词should提出建议。词汇积累(一)烦恼与问题类短语1．和某人吵架________________2．失去所有乐趣________________3．上课迟到________________4．丢失钱包________________5．没有足够的时间学习________________6．犯粗心错误________________7．感到害羞________________8．成绩不好________________9．起床迟________________10．在某方面有麻烦________________(二)解决问题类短语1．讨论你的问题________________2．告诉你的父母________________3．分担你的问题________________4．什么都不做________________5．向老师寻求帮助________________6．向某人道歉________________7．为英语考试而学习________________8．计划做某事________________9．环游世界________________10.接受教育________________11．上大学________________12．从专家处得到建议________________13．从……逃离________________14．与某人交谈________________15．要求某人更细心________________16．解决问题________________(三)其他短语1．太……以至于不能________________2．拥有丰富的经验________________3．最后________________4.感觉一样________________二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿1．Ifweaskpeopletobringfood，they'lljustbringpotatochipsandchocolatebecausethey'llbetoolazytocook.【asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事；too…to…太……以至于不能】一些家长常要求孩子努力学习，但他们因为太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正烦恼。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.InEnglish，wesaythatsharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.【动名词在句中可以作主语、表语、宾语、定语等】逃避问题会使你感到更糟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)用“if”推理下列行为的后果，并提出合理的建议。1．Mikedecidestoworkwithoutfinishinghiscollege.Ifhedoes，________________________________________________________________________Ithinkheshould________________________________________________________________________2．Ilostmywalletlastweek，butIamstillafraidtotellmyparents.Ifyou________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________3．SuMei'sbrothercan'tdowellinEnglish.HeplanstogiveuplearningEnglish.If________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________(三)给下面青少年存在的问题提出合理的建议。1．Bettyalwaysrunsawayfromherproblemsandtellsnobody.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________2．Linglingisheavy.Someclassmatesoftenlaughather.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________【答案】一、词汇积累(一)烦恼与问题类短语1.getintoafightwithsb.2.missallthefun3.arrive/belateforclass4．loseone'swallet5.nothaveenoughtimetostudy6.makecarelessmistakes7.feelshy8.haveproblemswithschoolwork9.getuplate10．haveproblemswithsth.(二)解决问题类短语1.discussyourproblems2.tellyourparents3.shareyourproblems4.donothing5.asktheteacherforhelp6.saysorrytosb.7.studyfortheEnglishexam8.plantodoaroundtheworld10．getaneducation11.gotocollege12.getadvicefromanexpert13．runawayfrom14.talktosomeone15.asksb.tobemorecareful16.solveproblems(三)其他短语1.too…to…2.havealotofexperience3.intheend4.feelthesamewayas二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿1.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard，buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren'srealtrouble.2.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.三、篇章训练设想一下，将来你会成为一名什么？如果成为一名教师，律师，运动员……，你觉得有何好处和坏处？工作环境怎样？请根据提示写一篇60—80左右的英语短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文对自己未来的职业和生活作了展望，属于记叙文写作。作者先明确未来要做演员，接着介绍当演员的好处和未来生活；最后是自己的感受IthinkIwilllivehappily。【佳作展示】MaybeIwillbeeanactor.IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.Iwillworkwithmanypeople.IfIactTVplaysormovieswell,Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.Manyyoungpeoplewatchmeallthetime.IwillbuyabighouseinBeijingorJinanandaskmyparentstolivewithmetogether.Iwillalsogivesomemoneytoschoolsinpoorareasandcharities.IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.【名师点评】例文点评：这篇习作先写未来的职业再谈感受，属于“总分式”结构；以一般将来时为主，用第一人称叙述；内容充实，想象合理，描述细致，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。高分亮点：高分短语：TVplays,workwith,beableto,makemoney,alotof,allthetime,asksb.todosth.,livewith.高分句型：1).IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.（条件状语从句）2).Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.（并列结构）3).IthinkIwilllivehappily.（宾语从句）【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文最后用含有宾语从句的if条件句IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.说出了自己的感受，显示出较好的语言功底。能力拓展能力拓展1．书面表达设想一下，将来你会成为一名什么？如果成为一名教师，律师，运动员……，你觉得有何好处和坏处？工作环境怎样？请根据提示写一篇60—80左右的英语短文。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．书面表达时间都去哪儿了？这是许多成年人的感慨，也是一些中学生的烦恼：没有时间做作业，没有时间从事个人爱好……其实，时间就在我们的掌握之中，关键是能否合理利用。请根据提示，以＂Howtospendourtimeproperly＂为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你的看法。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HowtospendourtimeproperlyWherehasourtimegone?Howshouldwespendourtimeproperly?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifso,I’msurewewillliveahappierschoollife.3．书面表达假设你是David，你的好朋友Toby非常喜欢体育运动，但是他的父母不允许他花费太多时间在运动上，为此他很苦恼。请你根据下面的提示给他写一封信，针对他的问题，提出你的建议，并给他一些安慰和鼓励。提示：1.WhatshouldDaviddoinhisstudy？2.WhatshouldDavidtalktohisparents？3.WhatshouldDaviddotohisparents？要求：1.语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2.70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearToby，I’msorrytohearthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，David参考答案1．MaybeIwillbeeanactor.IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.Iwillworkwithmanypeople.IfIactTVplaysormovieswell,Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.Manyyoungpeoplewatchmeallthetime.IwillbuyabighouseinBeijingorJinanandaskmyparentstolivewithmetogether.Iwillalsogivesomemoneytoschoolsinpoorareasandcharities.IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.【详解】1.题干解读：本文对自己未来的职业和生活作了展望，属于记叙文写作。作者先明确未来要做演员，接着介绍当演员的好处和未来生活；最后是自己的感受IthinkIwilllivehappily。2.例文点评：这篇习作先写未来的职业再谈感受，属于“总分式”结构；以一般将来时为主，用第一人称叙述；内容充实，想象合理，描述细致，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点：高分短语：TVplays,workwith,beableto,makemoney,alotof,allthetime,asksb.todosth.,livewith.高分句型：1).IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.（条件状语从句）2).Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.（并列结构）3).IthinkIwilllivehappily.（宾语从句）【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文最后用含有宾语从句的if条件句IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.说出了自己的感受，显示出较好的语言功底。2．HowtospendourtimeproperlyWherehasourtimegone？Howshouldwespendourtimeproperly？Asstudents，itisimportantforustostudy，soweshouldmakeaplanforeveryday．Mostofall，weshouldlistencarefullyinclass．Forhomework，weneedtomakealistandworkouthowmuchtimeweneed，andthenfinishthemonebyone．Hobbiesarealsoimportantinourlivesanddifferentstudentshavedifferentkindsofhobbies．Theycanmakeusfeelhappyandconfident．Butwedon’tneedtospendsomuchtimeonthem．Soweshouldachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandourhobbies．Inotherways，weneedtime，too．Forexample，weoftenspendalotoftimetalkingwithourfriendsatlunchtimeandwatchingTVattheweekends．Ifso，I’msurewewillliveahappierschoollife．【解析】这是一篇关于怎么利用我们的时间的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读