2024年新高考英语I卷小作文讲解课件高三英语一轮复习

2024年新高考英语I卷小作文对标B2U4HistoryandTraditions:视觉、听觉、触觉、嗅觉等描述景物选B1U3FascinatingParks：景点及对景点的感受选B3U1Art艺术价值和意义第三部分

写作（共两节，满分40分）新课标I&II卷假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括：1.你的作品内容；2.你的感想。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua巧谋篇，拟提纲：三段式第一段(导入段)：写信目的第二段(主体段):

时间、地点、人物、事件（已给出）；

事件的发生和发展；感受第三段(结尾段):

表达期待Para1LastSaturdaywitnessedourschool’s25-kilometerhiking,aimingtoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Theaimistoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.背诵活动模板第一段Para2你的作品内容Whatpicturedidyoudecidetodepict?Whatdidyouwanttoexpress?1.公园本身自然环境（整体环境优美、生机盎然的树木、芬芳扑鼻的花丛、波光粼粼的湖）2.公园路人及行为(年迈夫妻互相搀扶、一家三口散步)3.师生互动（教师悉心指导，学生聆听）4.。。。。。。作品类型：绘画、雕塑、手工......作品内容：大自然的美平淡的幸福对老师的感激/加强师生联系Para2你的作品内容：公园本身自然环境1.

一走进公园，我就被安宁且优美的环境吸引了。ThemomentIenteredthepark,Iwasdeeplyattractedbythepeacefulandbeautifulsurroundings.2.因此我选择去描绘公园本身，着重于茂密的森林、五彩的花丛、以及点缀着些许睡莲的池塘。SoIchosetodepicttheparkitself,focusingonthethickforest,colorfulflowersandtheponddottedwithseverallilies.画：draw/paint/sketch描绘：describe/depict/portray记录：record/capture/catch着重于：focuson/concentrateon/highlight/stressWhatameaningfulactivityitwas!

Notonlydiditsharpenourperseverancebutitalsopromotedourbondwitheachother.Para2你的感受：背诵模板最后一段替换表达：回忆必修2Unit5Music背诵句子refreshinguniqueunforgettablefruitfulwonderfulperfectexcellent音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球，给我们的生活带来色彩。Musicistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.Whatameaningfulactivityitwas!

Notonlydiditsharpenourperseverancebutitalsopromotedourbondwitheachother.Para2你的感受：背诵模板最后一段替换表达：enrichmyschoollife1亲身欣赏并领略大自然的美2培养对艺术的兴趣3提高绘画技巧4意识到艺术的力量去表达情感和捕捉时刻5激励我探索艺术天赋6丰富我的校园生活appreciateandexperiencethebeautyofnaturepersonally/inpersondevelopourinterestsinartenhance/improvepainting/drawingskillsrealizethepowerofarttoexpressemotionsandcapturemomentsinspiremetoexploretheaptitudeforartArtistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.

Throughtherefreshingandmeaningfulclass,notonlydiditenhancemypaintingskills,butitalso

providedmewithaninsightintothebeautyofnature.

Para2问候：期待回信I’meagerlylookingforwardtohearingfromyou.范文I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Theaimistoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.ThemomentIenteredthepark,Iwasdeeplyattractedbythebeautifulsurroundings,soIchosetodepicttheparkitself,focusingonthethickforest,colorfulflowersandtheponddottedwithseverallilies.//内容Duringtherefreshingandmeaningfulclass,Iwastotallyburiedinthepeacefulatmosphereofthepark.Whatanunforgettablea