专题25读后续写常用细节描写解密（2）(人物描写环境描写)（讲义）（新高考专用）

专题25读后续写常用细节描写解密(人物描写+环境描写)(2)01专题网络·思维脑图02考情分析·解密高考03高频考点·以考定法考点读后续写常用细节描写解密(2)考点读后续写常用细节描写解密(2)【高考解密】命题点03人物描写命题点04环境描写【技巧解密】【考向预测】04核心素养·微专题微专题读后续写实用的4大修辞手法05创新好题·分层练卷别来源体裁原文字数话题主题2023年新高考全国I卷记叙文324邀请参加写作比赛人与自我浙江卷1月记叙文349救助蜂鸟人与自然2022年全新高考全国I卷记叙文317患病男孩的奔跑人与自我浙江卷6月记叙文330社区志愿者活动人与社会浙江卷1月记叙文345我和学霸的搭档人与社会2021年全新高考全国I卷记叙文306母亲节的礼物人与社会浙江卷6月记叙文315暑假打工薪水人与自我浙江卷1月记叙文348万圣节南瓜趣事人与自我2020年全新高考全国I卷记叙文325帮助弱者脱困人与社会浙江卷7月记叙文330与熊对抗脱险人与自然浙江卷1月记叙文350抚慰狗狗心伤人与自然考点一冠词命题点03人物描写典例01【2021年1月浙江卷（圣诞节的尴尬）】Pumpkin(南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Ipetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14yearoldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshortlived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【理清故事脉络】万圣节传统：pumpkincarvingInapumpkinfield,wepetetoseekoutthebiggestone.确定获胜者：Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhowasthewinner.Weforgottoweighourpumpkinsbeforetakingouttheirinsides.我的想法：Toprovemypoint,Idecidedtoforcemyheadinsidethepumpkin.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardhangettingin.【理解具体细节的描述】ForcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinIbentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Imanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit.Igotjammedabovemyeyes.Mynosebrieflypreventedentry.ToremovemyheadoutofthepumpkinImovedmyheadaroundtofindtherightangle.IgotintopanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetable.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.【真题分析】研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para.1:Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Q1:HowdidIfeelwhilestuckinthepumpkinforsuchalongtime?Whatwasonmymind?Q2:Whatwasgoingonaroundme?Howdidmyfamilyreacttomysituation?Q3:HowdidIfinallygetmyheadoutofthepumpkin?WhatkindofsituationwasIinorwhatdidIlooklikeaftertherescue?Q4:Howcan“Thatvideo”inPara.2beintroducedinPara.1?Whowasfilmingtheincident?Icannotbreath. Mymothercametohelpme.Sheundomyrubberbandtomakemoreroomforbreath.EventuallyIwasrescued.根据下面的推断，本段应该是我的头被拔出来的过程。Para.2:ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Q5:Whatwaspeople’sresponsetothevideo?HowdidIfeelaboutthevideo?Q6:Whathappenedtomylifeafterthevideowaspostedonline?Q7:WhatdidIlearnfromtheincident?Thepostgaintoomuchsharesandlikes.Iwasembarrassed.Helearnalesson.lookbeforeyouleap表明上一段落我的头被卡在南瓜中的的过程被拍下了视频。侧面反映上一段我的头应该是从南瓜里弄出来了。最后一句的主旨升华。【实用表达词句】舒服地呆在……上restfortablyon伸入reachin松开橡皮筋undotherubberband设法把我的头拔出来managetopullmyheadout自拍takeselfies【语料库1】1.Towardstheendofthedaymylungspantedastheystruggledforoxygen.2.WhenIreturnedfrommyshiftIgaspedforbreathandmyheadwasdizzywithpain.3.ButIlaysuffocatingslowly.Myfacewaspurpleandmylipsturnedblue.Icouldn'tthink.Idriftedforafewmomentsandtheneverythingwentblank.Arushofairrevivedme.4.AgaintheNautilusattackedtheicesheetlikeahugebatteringram,onlythistimefrombeneath.Therewasashattering,crunchingsound,asitbrokethrough,shootingforwardsandupwardsandthencrushingtheicebeneathitasitlanded.Oxygenflowedintoeveryone'slungs.Weweresaved.【语料库2】1.Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

2.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.3.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.4.Thismademefeelsickandshivery.5.Afloodoffearwelledupinme./Fearfloodedoverme.6.Jennywasworriedsick.Herthroatwasdryandherfacewasburningup.【高分句型】DadwascalledandhegotmetopushmyheadfartherintothepumpkinsoJasoncouldreachinandundotherubberbandroundmyponytail.(Para.1)【译文】爸爸被叫了过来，他让我把头伸向南瓜深处，这样杰森就可以把手伸进去，解开我马尾辫上的橡皮筋。【分析】本句中and连接并列句，so引导结果状语从句。Dadwascalled、hegotmetopush…和Jasoncouldreachinandundo…三个句子结构紧凑，一气呵成。【点睛】Imanagedtopullmyheadoutandemergedwithmessyhairandmynosepluggedwithpulp.(Para.1)本句将“我”把头拔出来后的窘样进行了细致的刻画：withmessyhair（头发凌乱）和mynosepluggedwithpulp（鼻子被南瓜瓤堵住）。该描写巧妙地将“我”的糗事与万圣节的主题“恶作剧”结合在一起，从而为下文文章主题的升华做好了铺垫。【实用例句】Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofextremeregret.Icouldn’thelpthinkingaboutwhyIcameupwithsuchastupididea.Jasonsuggestedcallingthefiredepartment.Uponhearingit,Dadrushed…OnlywhenMommadeenoughspaceformedidImanageto…Mymomwasengagedinfilmingmyembarrassingandawkwardsituation…Surprisingly,itbecameahitgaininghundredsofthousandsofviews.Itcreatedhugeinterestandreceivedlikesandments…Constantstreamsofcuriouspeopleevencamebytotakephotoswithmyprizedpumpkin.DuringHalloween,afestivaloftrickortreat,Itrickedmyselfinstead.Undoubtedly,itwasthemostunforgettableHalloweenthoughIstillhavenoideawhosepumpkinwasbiggeryet.【参考答案1】Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.Icouldhearmysister’slaughterand

Jason’smuffledvoicetalkingaboutcuttingthegiantthingopen.“No!Notmyprecious

pumpkin!”Iprotested.Eventually,

Dad

helpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,and

pulled

thepumpkingentlyoffmy

head.Hairinknots,

nose

andchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That’swhenIrealizedthecamerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!

ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Ilookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.Embarrassedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,but

Mom

stoppedme.“Youhaven’treadthementsyet.”IscrolleddownthescreenandmarveledatthestoriestheviewerssharedaboutHalloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor“bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.【参考答案2】Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearingmecrying,dadcameandhelpedmelaymyheadonthetable,somyneckcouldrestforawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,honey.Ihavetocutthispumpkininhalf.”Ihadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtotheknifemovingonthepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Thenmomtoldmeshehadjustfilmedmemanagingtopullmyheadoutofthepumpkin.我被困了五六分钟，虽然感觉要长得多了。我越来越恐慌，我开始哭了起来。幸运的是，听到我哭了，爸爸命题点04环境描写典例01【2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）】Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【语篇导读】本文是记叙文,文章以事件为线索展开。作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时,一头饥饿的雄性幼熊闻着面包的蒜香味,靠近了营地,猛烈撞击营地边上的木质栅栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数,想吓退这头熊,不料它“不破栅栏誓不归”。无奈之下,作者求助营地管理员,被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到,只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛,不料这使熊变得更加暴躁,在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到,他们得救了的故事。【续写思路】1.段落续写:①根据第一段首句内容“几分钟后,熊返回了我们的营地。”可知,第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。本部分可注重描写夫妻两人的动作及恐惧心理。②根据第二段首句内容“就在那时,直升机赶到了。”可知,第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。2.续写线索:熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把栅栏推倒——拍下熊“打劫”的画面【精彩语句】1.精美词汇withhorror恐惧地;drawonesattention吸引……注意;atonesrequest应某人的请求takephotographsof给……照相2.出彩结构①Probablyangeredbythespray,thebearstartedattackingthefenceevenmoreviolently.(动词ed形式短语做状语)②Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichimmediatelydrewthebearsattention.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)【参考答案1】Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！【参考答案2】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Probablyangeredbythespray,thebearstartedattackingthefenceevenmoreviolently.Notknowingwhattodo,Ijuststoodtherefrozenwithterror.Apparently,Ellikeptamuchmoreclearheadfacingthiscriticalsituation.Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichimmediatelydrewthebearsattention.Thebearstoppedpoundingthefenceandwalkedtowardsthebread,buthewentbackagaininaminutewhenhefinishedthebread.

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thenoisesofthehelicopterfrightenedthebearaway,leapingclumsilyintothebush.Althoughhedisappearedtemporarily,wedarednotremainthereanymore.Climbingquicklyintothehelicopter,Islowlyrecollectedmyself!Atourrequest,thehelicoptercircledthesnowyareatofollowthebear,sothatwecouldtakemorephotographsofthebearrunningthroughthebush.Thedaywasreallyanadventure,butIthoughtitwasworthwhile.Thepicturestakenthatdaywereverybeautiful.Ifeltthecloseupsnapswetookwereworththedangerweexperienced.

人物描写1.描述身材tall,small,short,ofmediumheight…awellbuiltman一个身材魁梧的人haveagoodfigure体型好wearshoulderlengthhair留着齐肩发agirlinherearlytwenties一个20岁出头的姑娘tieinaponytail扎了个马尾辫描述体型fat,thin,slim,big,small,ofmediumbuild,strong等.描述相貌beautiful,pretty,goodlooking,charming,sweet,handsome,funny,ugly,peculiar奇怪的,rough粗犷的,illlooking丑陋的，其貌不扬的体格（build）:fat肥胖的;thin瘦的;slim苗条的;overweight超重;slight瘦小的;wellbuilt身材魁梧身高（height）mediumheight中等身材;averageheight一般身材;belowaverage低于平均身高;tall高的;short矮的;tallish有些高的;middlesized身高中等的;ofmediumheight中等身材;1.78meters身高1.78米。aweatherwornface一张饱经风霜的脸aquietgraciouslady一位娴静有礼的淑女anacplishedyounglady一位年轻的才女4.脸型（face）:round圆的;thin瘦的;long长的;square方的。Sheeatstoomuchthesedays,soherfaceisgettinground.她最近吃得太多了，所以她的脸变圆了。5.头发（hair）:(1)发型（hairstyle）:straight直的;curly卷发的;pigtails辫子;crewcut平头;bald秃头的。Herhairisbrownandcurly.她有着一头棕色而卷曲的头发。发色(haircolor):jetblack乌黑的;fair金色的;blonde淡黄色的;golden金黄色的;dyed染色的;brunette浅黑色的;mousey灰褐色的;chestnut栗色的.五官:眼睛（eye）:deepset深陷的;sunken凹陷的;bulging/protruding凸出的;eyelashes睫毛;eyebrows眉毛.Hiseyesaredeepsetbecausehehasworkedtillmidnightforalongtime.他的眼睛深陷，因为他这段时间经常工作到深夜。HehadthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhadeverseen.她有一双我从未见过的漂亮蓝眼睛。鼻子(nose):long长的;straight挺直的;big大的;small小的;flat扁平的;hooked钩状的.Hewasbornahookednose.他天生是鹰钩鼻。Hisnoseisverybig,sohedoesn'tlikeit.他的鼻子很大，所以他不喜欢它。嘴部(mouth):tooth牙齿;even整齐的;uneven不整齐的;chin下巴。Whenhelaughs,weseehiseventeeth.当他笑的时候，我们看见他有一口整齐的牙齿。Shehasadoublechin.她有双下巴。14.Buthewaskindandconsiderate.但是他善良体贴。15.Herlovelyfacelookedpale.她可爱的面庞看上去苍白。16.Heiswithhighcheekbonesandasunkennose.他颧骨高耸,鼻梁塌陷。17.OnceIsetagoal,Iwillmakegreateffortstorealizeit.一旦设定了目标,我就会竭尽全力去实现它。18.Hesatinfrontofthem,hisdustyfacemaskinghisage.他坐在他们前面,满面尘埃掩盖了他的年龄。19.Heisamanwithgreatdetermination,ofwhomtheperseveranceisoccasionallyunimaginable.他是一个意志坚强的人,有些时候他的毅力是你没法想象的。20.Herhusbandwassuchakindheartedandconsideratemanthathehidthetruthforhiswholelife.她丈夫是一个这么善良且体贴的人,以至于把真相隐瞒了一生。环境描写（一）阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悦的景色描写1.

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)

tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingto

nothingness（虚无）,onlytoreemerge（重新出现）

againonyourleft.2.

WhenIwasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamberlikesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.3.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。4.

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。6.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。

7.

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.8.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。9.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、点缀）theslope.风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。10.

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!11.

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.（二）暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung的原形为sting“叮咬”16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.叹息的声音17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧残),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）（三）烦闷焦躁的景色描写19.It’shotenoughtomelthell.天热得能融化地狱。20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybeesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。（四）凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthe

lightcontinuedtoeandgointhesky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的细雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）

puffs（一阵阵小风）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活动的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉闷地）

andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.

早上：1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.阳光的甜蜜充满我的肺。2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.第一缕阳光太脆弱，无法触摸。3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.春风拉开云帘，阳光洒进教室。4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.一缕阳光，全世界绽放。5.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树的树枝上。6.Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.被雨露亲吻，脚下湿漉漉的地面冰凉。鸟儿在我身边忙碌着，根本不在乎我在那里。7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股浓浓的泥土香从地底升起，将一切都笼罩在它柔软的怀抱中。8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.拉开窗帘，阳光洒进来。9.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纤弱的,精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.金色的阳光，娇嫩的绿色，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼帘。步入画中，鸟鸣啾啾，令我醉醺醺。很快，纤弱的细腻的空气和柔软的雨滴融化了我的心。10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.那是星期六的早晨，整个夏天的世界都明亮清新，充满生机。每个人心中都有一首歌。每一张脸上都洋溢着欢呼，每一步都充满了春天。空气中弥漫着宜人的花香。村外上方的卡迪夫山（CardiffHill）绿树成荫，看上去很美。黄昏：1.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.随着天色渐渐暗了下来，光线也渐渐暗了下来，他加快了脚步。2.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.太阳躲在山后，漆黑一片，什么也看不见。3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmidautumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.中秋的凉风中，落叶飘落，告别甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到来。4.It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.天已经黑了，雪还在下，一团团潮湿的雪花漫不经心地飘落下来，空气潮湿，人行道在脚下变得糊状。5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打在窗户上，告别了最后一缕阳光。6.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitchblackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.余晖被急速落下的夜幕抹去，犹如漆黑的帷幕笼罩在天际。7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.走在街上，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，一个人会从我身边掉下来，随着空气轻轻地将它带到地面，轻轻摇晃。8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖水映照着头顶的天空，两人都是无可指摘的蓝色，闪烁着微光。9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。10.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上的强烈阳光会在几分钟内灼伤我。11.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳落下，落在他的头和肩膀上。晚上：1.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的灯光)inthevillage.从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwaspletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.爸爸和我之间的沉默让我更加紧张和害怕。那一刻，除了天空中几颗星星发出的微弱光芒外，天已经完全黑了。3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜蓝，赋予场景一种童话般的质感，点缀天空的星星点亮了夜晚。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.湛蓝的天空点缀着飞舞的百灵鸟。6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂风呼啸，雨从天上倾泻而下，拍打着成排的树枝。世界笼罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一种恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。7.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧残),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.这一天的晚上很长，很忧郁，在哈特菲尔德。天气增添了它可能的阴霾。一场阴冷的暴风雨袭来，七月的任何东西都没有出现，只出现在被风掠走（残）的树丛中残酷的景象越久可见。9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon.Thefrostyairblewin,cuttinglikeknife.稀疏的树木在狂风吹拂，凌乱的灰色云彩掠过苍白病态的月亮。寒气袭来，如刀割一般。微专题实用的4大修辞手法在续写中若能适当运用比喻、拟人、夸张、排比等修辞手法进行细节描写，能加强文章的表现力和感染力。在平时学习中，掌握积累修辞手法并学会灵活运用是提高读后续写的关键。本文详细解读高中阶段常用的英语修辞手法的使用，为了让大家更好地理解并使用各种修辞手法，我们同样为大家整理了一些优美句子。修辞一：比喻比喻是最常见的修辞手法，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，从而更生动、更深刻地说明道理，增强语言的表现力。比喻分为明喻和和暗喻。例如：Sheisanangel.是暗喻；而Sheisasinnocentasanangel.是明喻。（1）明喻直接表明本体和喻体的相似之处，常用的明喻标志词有like,as,seem,as...as,asif,asthough,similarto等。基本格式是：本体+比喻词+喻体。例如：TheUSAislikeabigmeltingpotwhereimmigrantsofdifferentculturesorracesformanintegratedsociety.TheUSA是本体，喻体是meltingpot,比喻词是like,喻体和本体的相似之处都是拥有“包容”的特点。①Loveislikethewind.Youcan'tseeitbutyoucanfeelit.