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浙江高考之读后续写聪明出于勤奋,天才在于积累浙江高考之读后续写聪明出于勤奋,天才在于积累1seemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.TheylookedreallycoolIntheafternooniaskedUnclepaulificouldtakeahorserideandhesaidyes,aslongasmydadentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandiputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.Don'tbelatedkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetdadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(hB'blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus1所续写短文的词数应为150左右2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好;4续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键seemydadandUnclePaulridi2SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseParagraph2WehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdarkSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpe3答案写作提示根据续写第一段所給的段首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.可知本段应该主要描写突然出现一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受惊。故本段应该描写马受惊后发生的事。从第二段的段首句Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark可以看出,作者和父亲迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根据迷路之后的情况展开。本段的主要内容应该是从迷路到回家的故事写作时一定要注意以下两点第一,从本故事的发展来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描写第二注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句之间的衔接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计答案4bleversionSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorseberiver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.SeeinasOK,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.Paragraph2:dark.Wedidntknwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinbleversion5suchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromdistance.ItmustbeUnclePaul,Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingric精彩语句1精美词汇Invain白费力气previousadi.之前的atthepointofdesperation将要绝望之际afaintvoice微弱的声音2.出彩结构①frightenedasiwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff(部分倒装)②Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.what引导主语从句)suchadarksituation.Justas6Writing2(2017浙江11月)阅读下面短文.根据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenwaseleventellsalotaboutherMytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriendswhoknewifwedeverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtravWriting2(2017浙江11月)7eler'schecksmomhadforgottenDavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:"Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(wj)whileIgo,andI'llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,lerearethekids?""What?Oh,Gosh-Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.Wewereeveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butwewerentabouttotakeanychaneOnthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidntwefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(Xh).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttowneler'schecksmomhadforgotte81所续写短文的词数应为150左右2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词3续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好4续写完成后.请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithusParagraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway1所续写短文的词数应为150左右9答案ParagraphIThenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsthereweresurpassinglybeautiful--thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupurtent,hewasdisappointedtofindthatithadbeenleftinthehotel.Well,DadhadtogobacktofetchittocontinueourcampingWedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecarexcitedly,laughinganddancingaround.Togetherweenjoyedthemodernsightsinthebigcities,thehistoricalbuildingsinthesmalltownsandtheamazingsceneryinnature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,Momwouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!Absent-mindedndforgetfulasshewas,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous答案10Writing3(2017浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(#ir)longalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.Man,that'sabigdog!"hethought.Butwhenhedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasntadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhimMac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMacsrelief,itfellback,shakWriting3(2017浙江6月)11浙江高考之读后续写课件12浙江高考之读后续写课件13浙江高考之读后续写课件14浙江高考之读后续写课件15浙江高考之读后续写课件16浙江高考之读后续写课件17浙江高考之读后续写课件18浙江高考之读后续写课件19浙江高考之读后续写课件20浙江高考之读后续写课件21浙江高考之读后续写课件22浙江高考之读后续写课件23浙江高考之读后续写课件24浙江高考之读后续写课件25浙江高考之读后续写课件26浙江高考之读后续写课件27浙江高考之读后续写课件28浙江高考之读后续写课件29浙江高考之读后续写课件30浙江高考之读后续写课件31浙江高考之读后续写课件32浙江高考之读后续写课件33浙江高考之读后续写课件34浙江高考之读后续写课件35浙江高考之读后续写课件36浙江高考之读后续写课件37浙江高考之读后续写课件38浙江高考之读后续写课件39浙江高考之读后续写课件40浙江高考之读后续写课件41浙江高考之读后续写课件42浙江高考之读后续写课件43浙江高考之读后续写课件44浙江高考之读后续写课件45浙江高考之读后续写课件46浙江高考之读后续写课件47浙江高考之读后续写课件48浙江高考之读后续写课件49浙江高考之读后续写课件50浙江高考之读后续写课件51浙江高考之读后续写课件52浙江高考之读后续写课件53浙江高考之读后续写课件54浙江高考之读后续写课件55浙江高考之读后续写课件56浙江高考之读后续写课件57浙江高考之读后续写课件58浙江高考之读后续写课件59浙江高考之读后续写课件60浙江高考之读后续写课件61浙江高考之读后续写课件62浙江高考之读后续写课件63浙江高考之读后续写课件64浙江高考之读后续写课件65浙江高考之读后续写
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