Unit5HumansandNatureWritingWorkshop课件高中英语北师大版

新北师大版高中英语必修二Unit5HumansandNature

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eruptiCatchingGamefloodwildfiresandstormDisastershurricanesnowslideearthquakeDisastersWhatisabrochure？

Pre-writingBrochureAbrochureisasmallbookorpamphletcontainingpicturesandinformationaboutaproductorservice.PairWorkYouaregoingtowriteabrochureaboutsurvivingadisaster.Discusswithyourpartner.Whattypesofdisastercanhappen?Whichdisasterdoyouwanttowriteabout?Whatadvicewouldyougiveonsurvivingit?1Readingforwriting2Readthebrochureaboutsurvivinganearthquake.Underlinewhatyoushoulddowhenyou'reindoors,outdoorsandinacar.3

Readthebrochureagain.Completethetable.HowtoSurviveanEarthquakeSituation1____________Situation2____________Situation3____________Ifyou'reindoorsIfyou'reoutdoorsIfyou'reinacarDon'trun,butprotcetyourselfDrop,coverandholdonMoveawayanythingthatcanfallFindashelterwhereyoucanstayWaitbeforemovingtoanotherplaceStopStayseatedDrivecarefullywhenthequakestopsWhilewriting

LookattheSentenceBuilder.4WriteafewsentencesthatyoumaywanttoincludeinyourbrochureaboutDosandDon'tsforsurvivingapariculardisaster.ImperativesforDosandDon'tsDosDropdownontoyourhandsandknees.Coveryourheadandneckwithyourhands,armsorhardobjects.Don'tsDon'ttrytorunoutofthebuildingduringanearthquake.SentenceBuilder

OutliningUsethestructureinActivity3toprepareanoutlineforyourbrochure.5Composingyourwriting

DraftingUseyouroutlineandthewritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.6ComposingyourwritingWritingHelp

WritingaBrochureIt'simportantto:beclearanddirect;usesimpleandclearlanguage.Maketheinformationeasytoremember;giveadvicewithreasonsforactionsindifferentsituations;usethepresenttenseandimperatives;includepicturesandkeywordstoshowtheimportantactions.

EditingEdityourbrochureinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.7ComposingyourwritingPractice第一步结构布局第一段：介绍地震发生时会造成的严重后果；第二段：介绍降低损害的措施。第二步语言规范

1．地震是不可预测和具有破坏性的。_______________________________________________2．你行动得当。_________________Anearthquakeisunpredictableanddestructive.Youactproperly.WritingProcedureYoucanminimizethedamage.Thefollowingiswhatyouaresupposedtodoatschoolduringanearthquake.Besuretostaycalmanddoasteachersinstruct.Youareindoors.7．你应该尽快躲到桌下，直到地板停止晃动才移动。_______________________________________________________________________________________8．你在操场上。__________________________9．你应该待在原地，蹲下，保护好你的头。____________________________________________________________10．不要站在高楼附近。______________________________．Youshouldtakecoverunderdeskquicklyanddonotmoveuntilthefloorstopsshaking.Youareontheplayground.Youshouldstaywhereyouare,crouchandprotectyourhead.Don'tstandnearhighbuildings.11．高楼可能会倒塌。_________________________________12．如果可以的话，帮助你的同学，一起经历灾难。____________________________________________________________________________Thehighbuildingsmayfalldown.Helpyourclassmatesifyoucanandtrytogothroughthedisastertogether.第三步句间过渡1．把第2、3句合并为主从复合句。

_________________________________________________2．把第6、7句合并为主从复合句。________________________________________________________________________________________________3．把第8、9句合并为主从复合句。_______________________________________________________________________________4．把第10、11句合并为定语从句。__________________________________________________Ifyouactproperly,youcanminimizethedamage.Ifyouareindoors,takecoverunderdeskquicklyanddonotmoveuntilthefloorstopsshaking.Ifyouareontheplayground,staywhereyouare,crouchandprotectyourhead.Don'tstandnearhighbuildingsthatmayfalldown.Anearthquakeisunpredictableanddestructive.However，ifyouactproperly,youcanminimizethedamage.Thefollowingiswhatyouaresupposedtodoatschoolduringanearthquake.First，besuretostaycalmanddoasteachersinstruct.Ifyouareindoors,takecoverunderdeskquicklyanddonotmoveuntilthefloorstopsshaking.Ifyouareontheplayground,staywhereyouare,crouchandprotectyourhead.Don'tstandnearhighbuildingsthatmayfalldown.Helpyourclassmatesifyoucanandtrytogothroughthedisastertogether.第四步誊写众所周知，地震是一种可怕的自然灾害，会造成巨大的人员伤亡和财产损失。那么当地震来临我们需要怎样做呢？

请根据以下信息写一篇文章，

题目已给出。1．在教室时：藏在课桌下面等待老师指示；2．在家时：藏在客厅或厨房的桌子下，不要去窗户旁边和阳台(balcony)；3．在街上时：不要站在建筑物、栅栏(fence)或墙边，也不要站在树下，要赶快到安全的露天空地去。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。仿写练习

Usethechecklisttohelpyourpeerrevisehis/herdraft.Doesthewriterfocusonacleartopic?Doesthewritermakeclearanddirectpoints?Doesthewriterusesimpleandclearlanguage?Doesthewritergiveadvicewithreasonsfordifferentsituations?Doesthewriterusethepresenttenseandimperatives?Exchangedraftswithyourpeer.PostwritingCommentMarkanyspelling,punctuationorgrammarerrors.Markanyunclearexpressions.Givesuggestionsifyoucan.Underlinetheexpressionsyoulike.Postwriting1.Ifpossible,findastrong

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