雅思高分作文：专业人士应该收入更高

雅思高分作文：专业人士应该收入更高雅思大作文题目：Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:Professionalworkerslikedoctors,nursesandteachersmakeagreatercontributiontosocietyandsoshouldbepaidmorethansportsandentertainmentpersonalities.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.【话题分类】社会生活【题目解析】题目大意：专业性较强的工作，如医生、护士和教师，对社会有更大的贡献，因此应当比运动员、娱乐明星收入更高。你是否同意这个观点？【难点】题目的课题具有较大的争议性,大部分同学都很难快速形成清晰的立场。如果题目只是简单的问'专业较强的工作是否应该收入更高？'或者'运动员、娱乐明星是否收入过高了？’，是比较容易回答的。但两者收入之间的比较，需要更多维度的考虑，要快速切入的话，同学们可以采用一边倒的思路，或者认为两者应该收入平等。更容易展开。【写作思路】开头段：指出两种职业的收入差距现象，转述题目的观点，并表示个人赞同。主体第一段：论述专业工作对社会产生的价值与他们获得的认可之间的不均衡；通过几种典型职业举例说明。主体第二段：认可职业运动员和演艺明星仍需要努力，也有一些人对社会作出了较大贡献。但大部分的人所获得的与他们的贡献不平衡，尤其是一些不尊重个人职业及公众的人。结尾段：强调这种收入差距的不合理，重申观点。【参考范文】Professionalathletesandentertainmentcelebritiesareoftenconsideredtobeoverpaid,andtheirvalueoverrated,especiallywhencomparedwithpeopleworkinginsomesociallysignificantprofessions,suchasmedicalandeducationfield.Somepeoplearguethatthelattershouldbepaidmore,becauseoftheircontributiontosociety.Ipersonallyagreeandbelievethattheaverageannualearningofprofessionalworkersshouldbehigherthanthatofpeopleworkinginsportsandshowbusiness.Itiseasytojustifywhyprofessionalworkersdeserveahighersalaryatlarge.Taketeachingforexample,whichisoneofthemosteconomicallyimportantoccupationsbecauseourfutureeconomyreliesontheeducationofitsyouth,yetteachersarepaidastronomicallylessthantheaverageprofessionalathleteis.Thesituationisthesamefordoctors,policeofficers,firefighters,whosaveliveswhileriskingtheirownforafractionofwhatsportsstars,actorsandsingersmake.Similarly,peopleinthemilitaryleavetheirfamiliesathometodefendandprotectthecountryknowingtheymayneverreturn.It'strulyapitythatnoneofthesetrueheroesaregiventhesamerecognitionbysocietyasathletesandentertainmentstars.Ihavetoacknowledgethatbecomingprosinsportsandshowbusinessisnotaneasyquest,andthatittakesatremendousnumberofhoursofhardworkanddedicationtoearnajobinthesefields.Itisalsoundeniablethatanumberofcelebritieshavemadeuseoftheirfameandfortunetoinfluencethesocietyinapositiveway,provingtheirworthiness.However,alargepercentageofsportsandentertainingstarsfailtojustifythefameandfortunethatisunfairlybestoweduponthem.Instead,manytakeitforgranted,overlookingthefactthattheyarepublicfigureswhosebehaviorsandbeliefswouldprojecttremendouspoweroverthepublic,especiallytheyounggeneration.Somegotoextremesorbecomelawbreakers,suchasusingillegalsubstances,inpursuitoffinancialbenefits.Tosumup,theincomedisparitybetweenprofessionalworkersandsportingandentertaininglegendsishardlyjustifiable.Whileadmittingthecontributionofaportionofthese