英语考试CET4写作技巧讲练课件

CET4WritingCET4Writing1关于CET4作文作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文。作文体裁包括：议论文、说明文、应用文等。关于CET4作文作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。2CET4作文样题PartI.Writing(30minutes)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.

网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.

我的建议CET4作文样题PartI.Writing(30mi3CET4作文结构示意图

题目：××××××段落I.主题句。推展句1.（论据或例证，下同）。推展句2.。推展句3。段落II.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.结尾句1.（根据需要而定，可有可无）段落III.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.结尾句1.（统揽全文，呼应中心）CET4作文结构示意图4WritingSkillsLectureSeriesWritingSkillsLectureSeries5第一步：审题（1-2分钟）1.

题目：aboutonlineshopping2.

三个段首句：A段.提出现象B段.分析现象C段.表明个人观点，建议

第一步：审题（1-2分钟）6第二步：布局（5分钟）（用英语思维）段落I.主题句+推展句1.（对现象的具体阐述)+推展句2（结果）.段落II.主题句(好处)+推展句1（原因1-convenient,time-saving）+推展句2（原因2-diversityofproductstochoosefrom）+主题句（问题）+推展句1（原因1-beaddicted,becheated）.段落III.推展句1(budget)+推展句2(choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers)+结尾句1.（统揽全文，呼应中心）第二步：布局（5分钟）（用英语思维）段落I.主题句+推7第三步：行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）A段：第一句-完全翻译提示：CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience

/theinternet,onlineshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion.近义表达法：受欢迎-onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed第三步：行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）8行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）句子太简单，扩展-同位语，定语从句，状语：同位语：网上购物是什么：在网络上购买商品与服务的行为OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定语从句：网上购物的影响：大大地震动了/影响了我们的生活方式Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）句子太简单，扩展-同位语9合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever.OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet.Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowi10合并：Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.合并：Onlineshopping,asanact11行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）状语：onlineshoppingiswelcomedby?onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople,especiallyyoungpeople由于？becauseof/duetodiversereasons.合并：Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.

Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）状语：onlinesh12行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句：Who?what?Who:Manyofficeemployees/universitystudentsWhat:havethehabitofonlineshopping/showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket

Itisestimatedthathalfoftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12%showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket.第三句：resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome.增加句子结构复杂性行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句：Who?what13行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段第一句翻译提示Admittedly,shoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.第二句原因一：time-savingwho?what?why?Who:Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段14行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）What:nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并：Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty-fourhoursaday.(表对比)行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）What:notha15行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshaving

inadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer,kickingthekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）Somepeople,16行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句原因二：diversityofproductsFurthermore/What’smore/Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.第三句原因三：lessexpensive,conventionalstoresInmostoccasions,theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句原因二：diver17行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段：主题句（坏处）Whilethereare/Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding/concerning/respectingthiswayofshopping.原因：（不用顺序词，简要些）beaddicted,becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof/avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience,peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping,whichwillresult/resultinginoverspending.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段：主题句（坏处）18行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第三段：不需要主题句(建议要针对问题)Budget,choosereputedonlineshopsFrommyperspective/Inmyviewpoint/InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers(should)restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget./Andbuyingonreputed/reputableonlinestores/onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第三段：不需要主题句(建19CET4作文常用词汇或套语一.

转承语：Besides,inaddition,moreover,however,nevertheless,despiteof+noun(thefactthat…),inspiteof….二.

列举要点：foronething,…foranother,…Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…Finally,…CET4作文常用词汇或套语一.

转承语：20CET4作文常用词汇或套语三.

罗列观点用词：argue,insistthat,consider,think,maintainthat,recommendthat,suggestthat.四.描述趋势、动态用词（主要用于图表作文）：increase,decrease,drop,fall,rise,decline,fluctuate,sharply,dramatically,slightly,greatly,moderately.CET4作文常用词汇或套语三.

罗列观点用词：21CET4作文常用词汇或套语五.

时间词：inrecentyears,inthepastfewdecades,nowadays,today,inmoderntimes,inourtimes(age).六.

引述个人观点用词：AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Inmypart,speakingfrommyownexperience.七.

引述原因用词：Whyisthat?It’sprobablybecause…,Whathascausedtheproblem?Thereasonwhy…isthat…CET4作文常用词汇或套语五.

时间词：22CET4作文常用词汇或套语八.总结论点用词：Tosumup,Inconclusion,Allinall.九.

表述明确观点用词：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Undoubtedly;Nodoubt…十.

引述结果用词：Asaresult,Asaconsequence,Asamatterofthefact.CET4作文常用词汇或套语八.总结论点用词：233.怎样写好英语段落主题句的位置

主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。3.怎样写好英语段落主题句的位置

主题句通常放在段落的开24写作中常用的经典句型写作中常用的经典句型251.~~~the+~est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard,etc)Ofallthefactorsthatcontributetoone’ssuccess,hardworkandopportunityarethemostimportantonesthatmostpeoplehaveacknowledged.1.~~~the+~est+名词+(tha262.Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V

or:Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceivegoodeducation.Nothingismoredifficultthantobesuccessfulbothinfamilylifeandpersonalcareerinone’slife.2.Nothingis+~~~erthanto273.Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...

(不可否认，......)Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlifehavegonefrombadtogood.Thereisnodenyingthatourglobeisbeingthreatenedbyenvironmentalpollution.3.Thereisnodenyingthat+284.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~

(全世界都知道...)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheeconomicglobalizationishavingmoreandmoreinfluenceonourlives.4.Itisuniversallyacknowled295.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~

(毫无疑问,......)Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问，我们的教育制度令人不满意。Thereisnodoubtthatpeaceanddevelopmenthavebecometheessentialaspectsinourmoderntimes.毫无疑问，和平与发展已经成为当今时代的主流。5.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子306.Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子

(...的优点是...)Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.Anadvantageofkeepingpetsisthatpetscanbecomepeople’sgoodcompanions.6.Anadvantageof~~~isthat317.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子

(...的原因是...)Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.ThereasonwhypeoplechoosetomakefriendsonlineisprobablythattheywanttobroadentheirsocialcirclesthroughInternet.7.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~is328.So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子

(….是如此...以致于...)Sopreciousistimethatwecan‘taffordtowasteit.

时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。SorewardingiscollegelifethatthereisnothingthatIwilltradeforit.8.So+形容词+be+主词+that+339.Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,S+V~~~

(虽然...)Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。9.Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,3410.The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+V~~~越是……越是……Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.

越是努力，你就会越进步。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.

我们书读越多，我们就越有学问。10.The+~er+S+V,~~~the3511.By+Ving,~~can~~

(凭借......，……能够…..)Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.凭借运动，我们能够始终保持健康。Bybeingfriendlytoothers,wewillmakeallkindsoffriendswhereverwego.11.By+Ving,~~can~~

3612.~~~enable+Object(受词)+to+V

(..使..能够..)Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Readingextensivelywillenableustoacquireallkindsofknowledgefrombooks.12.~~~enable+Object(受词)+t3713.Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~

(我们绝对不能...)Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。Onnoaccountshallwedisregardtheexistenceanddignityofothers.13.Onnoaccountcanwe+V~3814.Itistime+S+过去式

(该是...的时候了)Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。Itishightimethatwerealizedthenegativeeffectsofstudents’playingPCgamesinclasshours.14.Itistime+S+过去式

3915.Itisconceivablethat+句子(可想而知的)

Itisobviousthat+句子(明显的)

Itisapparentthat+句子(显然的)Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itisobviousthatthedevelopmentofanationreliesmuchontalentsandthecultivationoftalentsdependsoneducation.15.Itisconceivablethat+句4016.Itpaysto+V~~~

(...是值得的。)Justasasayinggoes“givesomeonearoseandthefragranceremainsinyourhand.”Soitpaystohelpothers.有句话说得好“给人玫瑰，手有余香”。因此，帮助别人是值得的。Itpaystoinvestoneducationinthelongrun.16.Itpaysto+V~~~

4117.bebasedon(以...为基础，建立在…之上)Theprogressofthesocietyisbasedonharmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。Asisknowntoall,therelationshipbetweentwocountriesisbasedonequalityandmutualinterests.17.bebasedon(以...为基础，建立在…之4218.Sparenoeffortto+V

(不遗余力地去……)Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。Althoughitisstillalongwaytogo,wemustsparenoeffortstomakeoursocietymoreharmoniousanddeveloped.18.Sparenoeffortto+V

4319.Haveagreatinfluenceon~~~

(对...有很大的影响)Internetishavinggreaterinfluencesonourlives.Itcannotbeignoredthatourdietsarehavingmoresignificantinfluencesonourhealth.19.Haveagreatinfluenceon4420.dogoodto(对...有益)

doharmto(对...有害)Readingdoesgoodtoourmind.

读书对心灵有益。Overworkdoesharmtohealth.工作过度对健康有害。20.dogoodto(对...有益)

4521.Poseagreatthreatto~~

(对...造成一大威胁)Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。Terrorismhasbeenposingagreatthreattothepeaceandstabilityoftheworld.21.Poseagreatthreatto~~4622.doone‘sutmostto+V=doone‘sbest

(尽全力去...)Weshoulddoourutmosttoachieveourgoalinlife.我们应尽全力去实现我们的人生目标。22.doone‘sutmostto+V=d47写作中常用的句式写作中常用的句式481.复合句：定语从句名词性从句状语从句1.复合句：定语从句492.非谓语动词短语不定式短语现在分词短语过去分词短语2.非谓语动词短语不定式短语503.虚拟句式If…Without/Butfor(that)…Itishightimethat…Suggest/advocate/propose…that…3.虚拟句式If…514.强调句式“Itbe…that…”用于表达对某种因素的强调。e.g.Itisoutofremarkablebenefitsthatmanymanufacturersproducefakeorpoor-qualityproducts.4.强调句式“Itbe…that…”用于表达对某种因素的525.倒装句式Bynomeans/Onnoaccount/Never…引导的部分倒装结构，用以加强观点。e.g.Bynomeansshallweseelessofthenegativeeffectsthatchattingonlinemighthaveonourlives.5.倒装句式Bynomeans/Onnoaccou536.并列句式常见由notonly…butalso,aswellas,inaddition,moreover,onthecontrary,therefore,asaresult等连接的并列句式。6.并列句式常见由notonly…butalso,547.对比或比照句式Justas…,…e.g.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,…hasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Like/Unlike…,…Likemostcountriesintheworld,Chinaisalsofacedwiththesocialproblemsofagingpopulation.7.对比或比照句式Justas…,…55作文练习题作文练习题56CET作文练习题KeepingPets随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人喜欢养宠物。分析潜在的原因。养宠物对动物是祸是福？CET作文练习题KeepingPets57Model:Inrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,moreandmoreChinesepeoplechoosetokeepallkindsofpets,suchasdogs,cats,parrotsandthelike.Whydosomanypeoplelikekeepingpets?

Ontheonehand,somepeoplepursuementalsatisfactiononbasisofmaterialenjoymentbykeepingpets;ontheotherhand,peoplekeeppetsinhopeofrelievingtheirworkpressure.Inaddition,someoldorsinglepeoplekeepcompanywiththeirpetstoeasetheirloneliness.Lastbutnotleast,keepingpetsisalsoareflectionofpeople'sgrowingawarenessofanimalprotection.Model:Inrecentyears,withth58Iskeepingpetsablessingormisfortuneforanimals?

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,keepingpetshasitspositiveandnegativesenses.

Ontheonehand,keepingpetshelpstoenhancepeople’sawarenessofanimalprotectionandtodevelophumanaffectionsforanimals.Ontheotherhand,livinginhumancommunitieswilldepriveanimalsoftheirwildnaturetogetherwiththeirfreedomandabilitiestosurvive,whichwillturnouttobeamisfortuneforanimals.Ifwehumanbeingscantreatourpetsinmoreproperways,maybewecanbalancebetweenthegoodandbadsidesofkeepingpets.提示：勿提及传播疾病、玩物丧志等，以免离题。Iskeepingpetsablessingor59CET作文练习题MakingFriendsOnline为什么许多人热衷于网上交友？网上交友的利与弊。我的看法。CET作文练习题MakingFriendsOnline60Model:WiththerapiddevelopmentofITtechnology,Internethasbecomeamostadvancedmeansofcommunicationforpeople.Asaresult,moreandmorepeopleenjoymakingfriendsonline.

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeadouble-edgedswordforpeople.

Ontheonehand,Internetprovidesuswithwidersocialcirclesinwhichwecanmeetandmakefriendswithpeopleinallpartsoftheworld,andwecanbroadenourhorizonbymakingfriendsofdifferentraces,sexes,culturesandprofessions.Ontheotherhand,sinceInternetisavirtualworld,wecaneasilyfallintothetrapshiddenbehindit.Model:Withtherapiddevelopme61Moreover,addictionstothevirtualspacemay,inthelongrun,depriveusofthenormalsocialabilitiesandfurtherisolateusfromtherealsociety.AsfarasIamconcerned,sincemenaretheholdersofthedouble-edgedsword,it’salluptoustomakegooduseofthisnewwayofmakingfriends.Foronething,weshouldstayalertwhenmakingfriendsonline.Neverbereadilydependentonothersbeforeconfirmation.Foranother,weshouldneverrelytoomuchonmakingfriendsonline,instead,weshouldkeeptouchwithpeoplearoundintherealsocietyincaseweendnowhereinthevirtualworldofInternet.whetherlikeitornot,makingfriendsonlineisandwillstillbeanimportantpartofourlife.Moreover,addictionstoth62CET作文练习题WhoShouldTakeCareoftheOld?老年人应该由子女还是政府来赡养？各自的利与弊。我的看法。CET作文练习题WhoShouldTakeCareo63CET作文练习题IsNewsReliable?如今，新闻炒作(publicityhype)屡见不鲜。新闻的可信度(reliability)是否值得怀疑？如何才能提高新闻的可信度？CET作文练习题IsNewsReliable?64CET作文练习题ProblemsWithTravelingAbroad随着生活水平的不断提高，越来越多的人热衷于出国旅游。出国旅游有利也有弊。就我个人而言，……CET作文练习题ProblemsWithTravelin65CET作文练习题PeasantWorkers近年来，许多民工涌入大城市。民工为城市建设作出了很大贡献。然而，他们也带来了不少问题。CET作文练习题PeasantWorkers66OntheOpeningoftheUniversityCampustoTourists

近来一段时间，有些名校如清华和北大的校园纷纷向外界开放。人们对这一做法看法不一。谈谈你的观点。作文练习题OntheOpeningoftheUniversi67CET作文练习题Youareauniversitystudentlivingonthecampus.Onedayyoufindsomethingwrongwithyouraccommodation.SoyouwritealettertotheAccommodationServicesCenterandtellthemwhathappened,whatyouexpectthemtodo.CET作文练习题Youareauniversitys68CET作文练习题Yourfriendwritestoyouandtellsyouthatheishesitatinginchoosingcomputerorhistoryashismajorinuniversity.Writetohimandtellhimyouropinion.CET作文练习题Yourfriendwritesto69CET作文练习题Youhavebrokenyourlegandhavetostayinhospital.Youreceivedmanycardsandlettersfromyourclassmates.Writealettertotellthemyourpresentconditionandthankthemfortheirkindness.CET作文练习题Youhavebrokenyourl70CET4WritingCET4Writing71关于CET4作文作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文。作文体裁包括：议论文、说明文、应用文等。关于CET4作文作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。72CET4作文样题PartI.Writing(30minutes)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.

网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.

我的建议CET4作文样题PartI.Writing(30mi73CET4作文结构示意图

题目：××××××段落I.主题句。推展句1.（论据或例证，下同）。推展句2.。推展句3。段落II.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.结尾句1.（根据需要而定，可有可无）段落III.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.结尾句1.（统揽全文，呼应中心）CET4作文结构示意图74WritingSkillsLectureSeriesWritingSkillsLectureSeries75第一步：审题（1-2分钟）1.

题目：aboutonlineshopping2.

三个段首句：A段.提出现象B段.分析现象C段.表明个人观点，建议

第一步：审题（1-2分钟）76第二步：布局（5分钟）（用英语思维）段落I.主题句+推展句1.（对现象的具体阐述)+推展句2（结果）.段落II.主题句(好处)+推展句1（原因1-convenient,time-saving）+推展句2（原因2-diversityofproductstochoosefrom）+主题句（问题）+推展句1（原因1-beaddicted,becheated）.段落III.推展句1(budget)+推展句2(choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers)+结尾句1.（统揽全文，呼应中心）第二步：布局（5分钟）（用英语思维）段落I.主题句+推77第三步：行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）A段：第一句-完全翻译提示：CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience

/theinternet,onlineshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion.近义表达法：受欢迎-onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed第三步：行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）78行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）句子太简单，扩展-同位语，定语从句，状语：同位语：网上购物是什么：在网络上购买商品与服务的行为OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定语从句：网上购物的影响：大大地震动了/影响了我们的生活方式Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）句子太简单，扩展-同位语79合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever.OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet.Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowi80合并：Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.合并：Onlineshopping,asanact81行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）状语：onlineshoppingiswelcomedby?onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople,especiallyyoungpeople由于？becauseof/duetodiversereasons.合并：Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.

Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）状语：onlinesh82行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句：Who?what?Who:Manyofficeemployees/universitystudentsWhat:havethehabitofonlineshopping/showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket

Itisestimatedthathalfoftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12%showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket.第三句：resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome.增加句子结构复杂性行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句：Who?what83行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段第一句翻译提示Admittedly,shoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.第二句原因一：time-savingwho?what?why?Who:Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段84行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）What:nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并：Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty-fourhoursaday.(表对比)行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）What:notha85行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshaving

inadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer,kickingthekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）Somepeople,86行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句原因二：diversityofproductsFurthermore/What’smore/Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.第三句原因三：lessexpensive,conventionalstoresInmostoccasions,theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二句原因二：diver87行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段：主题句（坏处）Whilethereare/Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding/concerning/respectingthiswayofshopping.原因：（不用顺序词，简要些）beaddicted,becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof/avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience,peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping,whichwillresult/resultinginoverspending.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第二段：主题句（坏处）88行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第三段：不需要主题句(建议要针对问题)Budget,choosereputedonlineshopsFrommyperspective/Inmyviewpoint/InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers(should)restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget./Andbuyingonreputed/reputableonlinestores/onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维）第三段：不需要主题句(建89CET4作文常用词汇或套语一.

转承语：Besides,inaddition,moreover,however,nevertheless,despiteof+noun(thefactthat…),inspiteof….二.

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转承语：90CET4作文常用词汇或套语三.

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罗列观点用词：91CET4作文常用词汇或套语五.

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引述个人观点用词：AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Inmypart,speakingfrommyownexperience.七.

引述原因用词：Whyisthat?It’sprobablybecause…,Whathascausedtheproblem?Thereasonwhy…isthat…CET4作文常用词汇或套语五.

时间词：92CET4作文常用词汇或套语八.总结论点用词：Tosumup,Inconclusion,Allinall.九.

表述明确观点用词：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Undoubtedly;Nodoubt…十.

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