人教版2019必修第三册 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations how to write about an experience课件

UnitOneFESTIVALSANDCELEBRATIONSREADINGFORWRITING

HOWTOWRITEABOUTAFESTIVALEXPERIENCE

Homework

Usewhatyouhavelearnedtowriteaboutafestivaloracelebrationyouhaveexperiencedrecently.Howtostartwriting?structureHowtodivideapassageintoparts

（文章如何分段）Openingpart开头usually,paragraphoneistheopeningpart,whichintroducesthetopicofthepassage,thoughitisnotalwaysthecase.通常情况下，第一自然段就是文章的“第一部分”，用来引出文章话题。尽管有例外。Bodypart主体Thebodypartcanbeoneparagraph,twoparagraphs,threeparagraphs...,dependingonthetopichowcloselythemeaningsofeachparagrapharerelated.文章的主体部分可能是一个自然段，也可能是两个或三个自然段，取决于每个段落的话题和含义的紧密程度）Closingpart结尾thelastparagraphisusuallytheclosingpart,whichisasummaryofthepassageoraconclusionofatopic.最后一段通常是结尾部分，文章总结或话题结论wordsexpressionsconjunctionsstructureSentencepatterns

OUTLINEFORWRITINGABOUTAFESTIVALEXPERIENCEAnunforgettableMid-AutumnFestivalinthecountrymainideaofeachparagraphdetailsfeelings1.Thetopicandfeelingsthisyear'sMid-autumnfestivalinthecountryforthefirsttimeexcited,2.activitiesDayone:preparemeals,fireworks,enjoymeals,eatmooncakes,grapes,appreciatethemoon.DayTwo:visitthefruitfarm,pickupfruits,fishinginthereservoirdelighted,relaxedterrificandcontented3.summarymeaningful,worthiteagerforthenextyear'sHowtocompletewriting?PolishthelanguageDetailsineachparagraphsentencesandstructuresP1.what,where,when,withwhom;feelings(whyyoufeelthatway)Ispentthisyear'sMid-autumnfestival,whichfellonthe13thdayoftheninthmonththisyear,withmyparentsatmygrandparent'shomeonthefruitfarminQingYuancounty.AsitwasthefirsttimeIspentthefestivalinthecountry,Ifeltveryexcited.P2.DescribeactivitiesforDayOneDayone:preparemeals,fireworks,enjoymeals,eatmooncakes,grapes,appreciatethemoon.feelings:delightedandrelaxedP3.DescribeactivitiesforDayTwovisitthefruitfarm,pickupfruits,fishinginthereservoirfeelings:terrificandcontentedTheMid-AutumnFestivalisanoccasionforfamilyreunion.Whenwearrivedjustanhourbeforedinner,wewerewelcomedbytherelativesoftheextendedfamily,somemembersofwhichwerebusypreparingthemeal.Ataboutfourintheafternoon,dinnerbeganwithfireworks.Everybodyenjoyedthemealverymuch,includingme.Wechattedhappilywitheachotheroverdinner,sharingourharvestoftheyear.Atabout7:00.wewenttotheyardtoappreciatethefullmoon,whileenjoyingmooncakesandgrapes.Everybodyfeltdelightedandrelaxed.Afterasoundsleepofthenight,wesetoffforthefruitfarmabout4milesawayonfootthenextmorning.Wearrivedthereinabouthalfanhourandwewereamazedtoseevariouskindsoffruittreesbendingwithripefruits.Wewentseparatelytopickwhatwelikedmost.Wespentthewholemorningthere,picking,playingandvisiting.Itwasreallyaterrificexperience.Wehadabrieflunchonthefarmandwentfishinginthereservoirnearbyintheafternoon.Thecatchwasnotgoodbuttheexperiencewasever-lasting.P4.SummaryItwasquitesometimeafterwespenttheMid-autumnFestivalinthecounty,butthewonderfulmemoryitleftonmewillgoonforever,andIamlookingforwardtonext'sMid-autumnfestivalthere.Exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartner.Usethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyourpartner’swriting.Isthewritingwell-organized?Isthereanopeningsentenceinthefirstparagraph?Doeseachparagraphincludethenecessarydetails?Does