高考英语书面表达市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件

1、 扎实基础，循序渐进 -高考英语改错书面 表示题型分析与对应对策 永嘉永临中学 潘娟娟 第1页短文改错 分析 短文改错以小故事形式展现, 重点是学生常犯语言错误和逻辑错误。今年改错部分较前几年来看较为简单，错误经典，均为基础考点。（时态，词性，冠词，代词，形容词，副词， 名词单复数，固定搭配，介词搭配，逻辑关系。）第2页 I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train i

2、nspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his succes

3、s. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.noisycameandforits/thethepreviouslyinstranger第3页存在问题：基础知识落实不扎实

4、改错应试技巧不到位备考1.在日常教学中落实易混同时态,语态等基础语法以及词，词汇使用方法，固定搭配等知识点2.培养学生改错技巧和方法3.专题强化训练（改错跟踪表）第4页短文改错跟踪表时态语态形副误用冠词名词代词非谓语情态动词连词介词动词短语从句其它12345第5页浙江省书面表示学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。Dear M

5、r. Wang, _ Yours sincerely Li Yue第6页校园中存在随意涂写（to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾（to litter)行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词信。 Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按以下要求用英语写一篇100-120个词短文： 针对摘录句中观点谈谈你看法； 举例说明理由 “OneThingImProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词短文，记述一件自己认为得意事，要求以下： 1.记叙这件事； 2.简明谈谈你为何感到骄傲或得到启示。第7页 今年高考英语写作话

6、题乍看之下可能会让部分同学以为不知所措，因为这类话题并非大家之前连续五年已经习惯了夹叙夹议形式，前五年英语作文基本上是“二分之一记叙、二分之一评论”结构，不过今年却省略了其中“记叙”部分，愈加偏重应用性。不过，依然延续半开放特点，让学生在框子里自由发挥。格调五年内首次转型，愈加关注基础利用能力comparing(语言应用，思想)第8页存在问题：1.词汇句式匮乏2.内容思想不够丰满（尤其是说明推荐 理由部分）3.篇章结构、逻辑混乱。第9页高分作文特点1.具备较强语言应用能力2.思维清楚，逻辑严密、衔接紧密3.考虑文体、语气、文章框架4.开放部分：自己观点表示有新意第10页有效对策积累词汇，掌握句

7、型丰富内容，提升思想依靠阅读，谋篇布局紧紧围绕应试，落实技巧第11页积累词汇，掌握句型词汇，句型是写作基础和根本。怎样有效积累和掌握？ 一日三词（块）一句型 同义词替换（上课引导学生发散思索，联络过去知识点） 经常跟踪（好表示结构，易错点）小组合作，小组出题，听写黑体 ，写作惯用， 高考高频， 阅读 ，完形中好词，词块，词块听写有写，有交，要改，要讲造句 编小故事积累词汇第12页various/ a variety of be famous for/as/to be familiar with/to Its no wonder that There are a variety of place

8、s of interest in Shanghai, among which the Bund is most familiar to us. It is famous for the fantastic night views. Once I visited there with amusement, it attracted my attention closely. Its no wonder that various people prefer to enjoy the unique scenery. - 李晶晶 第13页July.7thIts evident thatadopt at

9、titude toOn the one hand on the other handSb. be convinced that第14页Sharing We should adopt a positive attitude to life even if we are in the face of difficulties - 董燕It is evident that high school students should take exercise to build up their bodies. - 邹安丽On the one hand, we can get some useful in

10、formation from Internet. On the other hand, playing computer games will influence our study. - 黄婉颖On the one hand, money can buy any object that we need; on the other hand, money cant buy time or love. - 潘相材第15页1. accomplish the task 2. regular exercise3 keep pace with 4. convey a message of love an

11、d encouragement5. hold his hand tightly6. a sense of fulfillment and praise.7. reach their full potentials8. under no circumstances should we seek temporary economic development at the expense of the environment.词块听写起源于校对过阅读 ，完形，单项第16页 同义词替换important count / vital /attach great importance to / be of

12、 great importance I like collecting stamps. I often ran out of my money to buy some stamps. I like this given by my friend Tom, conveying friendship, in particular. 重复，词义欠丰富Like?enjoybe fond ofbe enthusiastic aboutbe crazy aboutbe addicted to第17页经常跟踪I am convince that I can do the best.It is evident

13、 that study English is tired.We should adopt a serious attitude to face the difficulty next year.第18页高级句型： 复合句，非谓语结构，特殊句式 （强调句，倒装，with结构，固定句型 ）1. 扎实语法教学2. 在练习中提升句子结构3.巧用范文掌握句型第19页1. 扎实语法结构（多写不多项选择 -精编练习）Believe it or not, the village _(去年我们迫不及待想要去) was destroyed by the mudslide.I will set down a ser

14、ies of reasons _ (同学们今天早上迟到原因)。At present, the number of countries _ (这些国家有很多能讲一口流利英语人) is increasing rapidly.He was greatly satisfied with those days _(他致力于写那本小说) .(devote/ spend)We do believe the day _(人类充分利用太阳能那一天) is around the corner.第20页1. If I took the risk of exploring the jungle, I would wr

15、ite a book about adventure.2. If she had made an effort to obtain a drivers license, she wouldnt be anxious about it now.3.If everyone had been aware of the importance of environmental protection, the measures would be taken effectively.-王小艳别样布置语法作业学了虚拟语气，让学生自己写写第21页I like collecting stamps. I often

16、 ran out of my money to buy some stamps. I like this given by my friend Tom, conveying friendship, in particular. I put them into a box made up of wood. My mother said that I would be a rich collector eventually.in particular/ run out of/ convey/ be made up of/ eventually-杨豪哲用词，句型， 衔接?陪孩子一起进步- 作业反馈第

17、22页I like collecting stamps. I often ran out of my money to buy some stamps. Like?be fond ofbe crazy aboutbe enthusiastic aboutbe addicted toenjoyI enjoy collecting stamps, which runs out of my money.Being crazy about collecting stamps, I often run out of my money to buy them.Addicted to collecting

18、stamps, I often run out of my money to buy them.第23页写一写（巧用范文） Li Na was highly praised and appreciate for _ she had done, and she said “ Its worthwhile to save a persons life _ (尽管摔断了腿) （get ones leg broken / ones leg is broken）变一变 (When) highly praised and appreciate forwhat she had done, she said

19、“ Its worthwhile to save a persons life despite / in spite of getting the leg broken.what despite of getting the leg broken第24页句型简单， 关键点分散，没有连接词We swam in the sea and had fun on the beach.We enjoyed the delicious seafood.We watched the sunset.Its great fun swimming in the sea and we spent a wonderfu

20、ll afternoon on the beach. Whats more, we enjoyed some delicious seafood in the golden setting sun. It was the sunset that impressed me most! 第25页 积累素材，提升思想 （高大上）课文，完形，阅读，单项中素材和人身哲理启示M4U3 A taste of English humour奋斗故事A great person I can learn from人物篇： M1U5 Nelson Mandela M4U1 Women of achievement U

21、2 Working the land U3 A taste of English humour M5 Unit 1 Great Scientists 出行游玩：M1U3 Travel journal M3U5 Canada M4U5 Theme parks节假日： M3U1 Festivals around the world丰富内容，提升思想第26页up to nowstar in feel/ be depressedthere was a time whenbe/ feel content withthroughout the monthentertain sb. to dinerbadl

22、y offfind it astonishing thatovercomefailureconvince sb. of / that卓别林作为一位伟大演员以极大信心激励人们，受到尊敬与爱戴。 然而，他成功也是来之不易。他出生于贫寒家庭。父亲逝世，让他家愈加贫寒。曾经有段时间，他非常沮丧。一个月到头，都没有足够钱请家人吃顿饭。不过，他从未放弃自己。很多人都以为很诧异这么一个瘦弱年轻人能战胜那么多困难和失败。他成功使我相信，有志者事竟成。第27页完形，阅读 阅读完形中总结点睛之句，升华人生哲理让学生就这个中心句编故事，发散思维完形阅读中小故事改编成为自己故事第28页 We should all r

23、emember that its not the destination that counts in life, but the journey. That the journey with people we love is all that really matters. It is such a simple truth but it is so easily forgotten. I have come to realize that life is just like playing basketball. You should have an aim. After that ,

24、just be confident and keep going. Never give up and you will make it sooner or later. The happiest people are those who can really appreciate the beauty of life. In life we will always be faced with challenges, problemsand disasters. Always keep in mind that a disaster cansometimes be good luck in d

25、isguise.第29页依靠阅读，谋篇布局从阅读中学习框架结构，主题立意 让学生在模仿中积累经验。 源于 课文 课外阅读材料第30页复习Book 2 Unit 4 Wildlife protection这一单元时，我们曾提供给学生一篇相关野生动物保护作文，详细题目以下： 野生动物数量正在快速降低，请结合下表所提醒信息，给校英文报写一篇短文，提倡同学们关注野生动物保护。 原因认为捕猎生存环境遭到破坏环境污染方法最少两条Module 2模块测试中，我们针对手机话题设计一篇框架结构类似书面表示，题目以下： 最近越来越多高中生带手机进入校园。请结合下表所提示信息，给校英文报写一篇短文，提倡同学们禁止在

26、课堂 上使用手机。原因方便与朋友、家人联络经过手机听音乐、玩游戏经过手机上网聊天、看小说方法最少两条第31页Passage 1: (会考阅读C篇) Have you ever met the situation where you kept thinking that there are opportunities, or chances, which are better than your current one? This is the syndrome(综合症) when you are looking at the other side of the grass and think

27、that the grass is greener on the other side and is also what I call the “greener grass” syndrome. Why are you like this？Uncertainty and curiosity play a big part in creating the “greener grass” syndrome. If you have this syndrome, you are likely to miss a lot of things you have now. When you are alw

28、ays focusing on other opportunities, sometimes you may waste the opportunity right in front of you. So what can you do to treat the “greener grass” syndrome? The first thing to do is recognize that your current job is your best choice right now. Try to focus on “what is” instead of “what if”. Second

29、ly, always stick to your job, no matter which side you are at. Last but not least, always do your best in your current job. In conclusion, it is important for you to choose a side, and make the best out of it.第32页 This is the syndrome(综合症) when you are looking at the other side of the grass and thin

30、k that the grass is greener on the other side and is also what I call the “greener grass” syndrome. Uncertainty and curiosity play a big part in creating the “greener grass” syndrome. We still need to have money in todays society. So what can you do to treat the “greener grass” syndrome? What is “gr

31、eener grass” syndrome ?What causes “greener grass” syndrome ?How to treat “greener grass” syndrome ?introductionexplanationDiscussion第33页So how to face the challenge and deal with the pressure properly? The first thing to do is Secondly,. Last but not least, How to face the challenge and deal with y

32、our pressure properly ?In conclusion, .第34页高中生在学习生活中会碰到很多压力，请依据以下提醒，用英语写一篇短文，介绍怎样处理压力方法。注意：词数： 100 左右；能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Nowadays, there are a lot of pressures on high school students. _PressuresHow to deal with From studiesMake a scientific study plan,About lifeGet along with classmates,Writing 普通现在时时

33、态：第35页A STUDENT OF AFRICAN WILDLIFE主题句与细节行文关系1.What kind of person is Jane ?Can you think of some words to describe her?2.What can we learn from her ?The following paragraphs ,which is better? Why?第36页A In my opinion, Jane is a brave woman. She spent many years observing and recording the daily acti

34、vities of chimps in Africa. Because of her devotion to the study of chimps in the wild forest, people began to discover that chimps hunt and eat meat. Besides, with her many years of hard work in studying the body language of chimps, Jane also discovered how chimps communicate with each other and th

35、e social system of chimps. After reading the passage, Janes determination and devotion to the study of chimps inspires me. She went to Africa bravely to achieve her dream of studying chimps in the wild environment. Although living in the forest for a woman is not so easy, she insisted on spending many years observing and recording the daily activities of chimps, in order to get further understanding of them. It is her determination and