英语专项训练基础写作 详细版课件

1、基础写作Basic Writing从遣词，造句，谋篇方面分析一.遣词方面1.措辞要贴切具体 A man is the street.(走) A man is the street. A man is in the street. A man is the street. (漫步,闲逛) (徘徊,漫游)(大步走)walking downstrolling downwanderingstriding down2.使用高级词汇This is a difficult job. He learned about everything at last. I should thank you for tak

2、ing so much trouble to help me. (eventually)(challenging)(grateful)他以为偶像。HeHe HeHe He.3.避免重复使用词汇his idols.regards.aschooses astakes.aslooks upon.asviews.as4.要善于运用短语When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything .-When he was a child, he knowledge.Hacker attackers are increasing.-Hacker attackers

3、 are .Your work is so good that it cannot be praised enough.-Your work is all praise.had a strongappetite for/ was thirsty foron the increase/risebeyond句式多样文章增“靓”一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力三. 尝试多样化表达方式二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变.第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。第二类是并列句，包括具有递进关系的并列句，如由and，then，bes

4、ides，inaddition,furthermore，moreover,whatsmore等连接的并列句，具有转折关系的并列句，如由but，however onthecontrary,afterall等连接的并列句，具有平行选择关系的并列句，如由bothand，aswellas，aswell, neithernor，eitheror，notonlybutalso等连接的并列句。第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、therebe开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。1如何在写作中避免句式单一Rewrite the sentences 1. They arr

5、ived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词及复合句使句子简洁高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.If

6、 I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he do

7、es not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.Use

8、 different ways to describe the picture 方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式一就受到欢迎As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed .On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wifeLien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.No sooner h

9、ad Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 三、谋篇方面:结构要清晰流畅,巧用过渡词下列各组表示列举的短语非常实用,对高考写作很有帮助: 1.firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally, 2.to begin with,then,furthermore,finally,. 3.to start with,next,in addition,final

10、ly, 4.first and foremost,besides,last but not least 5.most important of all,moreover,finally如果只有两层意思,可选用下列两组中的任一组.1.On the one hand,on the other hand2.For one thing,and for another thing常用的过渡表达法:1.表增加:and ,also, in addition, furthermore, moreover2.表时间顺序:now, then, before, after, soon, gradually3.表空间

11、顺序:near, beyond, above, around, outside4.表示比较:in the same way, just like, just as5.表示对照:but, still, yet, however, on the contrary6.表原因和结果:because, since, so, as a result, therefore7.表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that 8.表强调:indeed, surely, without any doubt, truly9.表解释说明:for ,for example,

12、 in fact, actually10.表总结:in conclusion, in brief, in a word写作请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。情景说明根据提示写出你对环境污染的看法。1.汽车的不断增加，排放大量废气。2.森林减少，气候变得干燥。3河流被污染，城市供水不足。 写作要求1.标题：Environmental Pollution 2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文评分标准句子结构的复杂度和准确性短文内容的完整性和连贯性 Though the development of industry and agriculture has improved our living conditions, it is doing great harm to our life. Now more and more cars and trucks give off waste gases, which are polluting the air. Moreover , more and more tre