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1、You are welcome to my class!How to write more beautiful sentences in our compositions? 衡东教师进修学校 朱佩芳 2008 (重庆)高考作文题学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目(column)，以便学生发表(post)英语作文，进行交流，提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍，内容包括：开设目的；栏目优势：教师在线(on line)指导等；作文要求：内容贴近学生生活；优秀作文的鼓励办法；邀请大家参与。 注意：1.词数100左右 2.开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Welcome to the colum

2、n “writing English” ! Welcome to the column “English Writing”! Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their compositions and communicate with each other . Not only can students improve their writing ability in thi

3、s way, but also they can strengthen their self-confidence. The column has lots of advantages. It is the teachers guide on line that has the advantage over other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the compositions sho

4、uld be related to the students life. Whats more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it . Hoping for the students participation.条件句和被动句强调句主语从句定语从句-ed 结构Then what advanced structures can we use when writing compositions ?1. 非谓语动词 (non-predicate verbs) (-ing,-ed,-to do)2. 倒

5、装句 (inversion)3. 各种从句 (clauses)名词性从句，定语从句与状语从句4. 强调句 (structure for emphasis)5. 被动语态 (passive voice)(一) 非谓语动词的使用1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldnt go to the concert. (现在分词)2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. (过去分词)3. He wants to improve his spoken English, and he oft

6、en talks with the native speakers. (不定式) 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力Being ill in hospital, Susan couldnt go Followed by his students, the professor In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with （二）倒装句的使用1. We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat. Only 2. She is clever but she never wo

7、rks hard. as3. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street On the other side of the street by changing the plants we eat can we save Clever she is, she never works hard stands the clock tower (三）强调句的使用1. The teachers words encouraged her greatly. （强调主语）2. we have an easy access to the int

8、ernet for information in the E-reading room(强调地点状语) (2006浙江)It was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly. It is in the E-reading room that we have an easy access to the internet for information. （四）从句的使用1.To our surprise, he refused to take the position（名词性从句）2.When he climbed up higher, he

9、 felt more breathless(比较状语从句）3. We all know that the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success(非限制性定语）What surprised us was that he refused to take The higher he climbed up, the more breathless he felt.As is known to us all, the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success1. We should take many

10、 measures to protect the earth where we live. Many measures should be taken to protect the earth where we live . (五) 被动语态Lets MemorizeTry to keep the following complex structures in your mind 1. 非谓语动词 (non-predicate verbs) (-ing,-ed,-to do)2. 倒装句 (inversion)3. 各种从句 (clauses)名词性从句，定语从句与状语从句4. 强调句 (st

11、ructure for emphasis)5. 被动语态 (passive voice)(05福建) 目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象，英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿.。内容要点如下:主要原因：考试偏多、偏难；不用功、懒惰； 取悦父母、老师个人看法：作弊不对、违反校规；要诚实、努力学习； （其他法）注意 1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2. 短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数 ；3. 词数100左右.4. 参考词汇：作弊 cheat开头: It is known

12、 to us all that some studentscheat in examination at school .List out the points:1.考试偏多，偏难。2.不用功， 懒惰3.取悦父母，老师。4.作弊不对, 违反校规5.要诚实, 努力学习6.要改进学习方法7.我们要为考试做好准备, 取得好的成绩.Lets discuss what complex structures we can use 考试偏多、偏难 不用功、懒惰 There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. better: So

13、metimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. We are lazy and dont work hard .better: Not only are some of us lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons.Or: Some of us dont work hard because they are lazy.取悦父母、老师作弊不对、违反校规 要诚实，努力学习They want to please their parents and

14、teachers Better: _ please their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when _ examinations. In order totaking Cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools. Better: It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schoolsWe students should be honest and stu

15、dy hard Better: _is to be honest and try to get good results by _instead of _ in examinations. What we students should dostudying hardcheating 我们要改进学习方法我们要为考试作好充分准备，取得好的成绩.We should improve our study methods Better: Our study methods should be improved.We should get well prepared for examinations so

16、 that we can get better results.Or: Only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results. My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too

17、 many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some of us lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. What we students