读后续写-攀岩悟人生：从岩壁到抗癌的勇气之旅+讲义 高三上学期实验班12月大联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Myfive-year-olddaughterRuthieseemedverysmallstandingatthebaseofthehugerock-climbingwallasayoungemployeedouble-checkedherequipment.Itwasoursecondtimeatthisindoorcrowdedclimbinggym.Onourfirstvisit,Ruthiehadbeggedmyhusbandandmetolethertryclimbingthewall,butIdeniedher,afraidthatshewasundersized.Butlifehaddramaticallychangedsincethen.Afterreceivingacancerdiagnosis(诊断),Ifeltthatmylifewastooshorttodenyherachance.Istoodoutsidethewaitingarea,watchingtheemployeeattachRuthietoasafetyrope.Thenhegaveherathumbs-upsign,andmydaughterbeganclimbing!Withthatrope,shecouldn’tpossiblyfall.Shemightslip,butshewouldn’tfall.Iwassurprisedathowshedidthatsoeasilyandjoyfully.“Ifmycanceristherockwall,IwanttobeRuthie,”Ithought.Whenshetouchedthegroundagain,Ileanedoverthelowfenceandasked,“Howdoyoudothat?”“Ijusttrusttherope.It’sveryeasy,”shesaidwithashrug,andstartedonhersecondclimbing.Apparently,ifIhadknownthesecret,Icouldhaveclimbedthewallmyself.WhenIwassixteen,Ioncefailedtoclimbarockwall.Withaddedweightandreducedmuscletone,IdoubtedifIcouldevendoit.Ididn’tseeanyothermomstryingtoclimbthewall.Severalmonthsearlier,embarrassmentwouldhavestoppedmefromtrying.Butmycancerdidfunnythingstomybrain.ItmademerealizethatIneededtobebraverthanIthought.Withdetermination,Idecidedtotryitandthesameyoungemployeecheckedmysafetyropeandgavemethethumbs-upsign.AsIbeganmyclimb,Iwasexcitedbymyownbraveryfortryingsomethingsonew.However,onlytenfeetup,myfingersandtoesstartedtotire,andtherewasabsolutelynoplacetorest.MyexcitementbegantodisappearandIwasafraidthatIwasgoingtoslipandfall.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：五岁的Ruthie站在巨大的攀岩墙下，身形显得格外娇小，工作人员帮她仔细检查装备。这是她们第二次来到室内攀岩馆，第一次时，因担心女儿年纪小、体格瘦弱，“我”拒绝了她攀岩的请求。然而此后生活发生巨变，“我”被诊断出患有癌症，深感生命短暂，不应再剥夺女儿尝试的机会。看着Ruthie轻松愉悦地攀爬，“我”惊叹不已，她表示只是信任绳索所以觉得简单。回想起自己16岁时攀岩失败，且如今身体状况不佳、体重增加、肌肉松弛，本有些犹豫，但癌症改变了“我”的想法，让“我”鼓起勇气尝试。攀爬途中，“我”起初兴奋，可爬了仅十英尺就手指脚趾乏力，找不到休息之处，兴奋渐消，恐惧袭来。伏笔及续写中的回应：伏笔：第一次拒绝Ruthie攀岩，因觉得她体格小。回应：凸显后来“我”因癌症改变想法，同意她攀岩的转变，体现“我”对生命、对孩子成长态度的变化。续写中“我”受Ruthie感染，勇敢攀爬，完成自我突破。伏笔：“我”被诊断出癌症，深感生命短暂。回应：解释“我”为何不再阻拦Ruthie攀岩，推动情节发展，让“我”的行为有了情感支撑。续写中“我”将抗癌与攀岩类比，从攀岩经历汲取抗癌力量。伏笔：Ruthie轻松信任绳索完成攀爬。回应：为“我”后续攀爬时内心的挣扎与最终选择信任绳索做铺垫，形成对比与呼应，展现榜样的力量。续写中“我”效仿Ruthie，克服恐惧，成功登顶。伏笔：回忆16岁攀岩失败，且如今身体条件不佳。回应：增加此次攀爬的难度与挑战，衬托“我”克服内心障碍、勇敢尝试的可贵。续写中克服身体局限，展现坚韧。伏笔：攀爬途中体力不支、恐惧来袭。回应：制造悬念与危机，引出后续“我”如何抉择应对，吸引读者。续写中凭借信任绳索、坚定意志战胜困难。续写要点：第一段情感线：从恐惧、犹豫，几近放弃，到在内心挣扎后选择信任绳索，重燃斗志，坚定攀爬；故事线：“我”在体力不支、害怕滑落的绝境下，回想起Ruthie的话，决定像她一样信任绳索，克服身体的疲惫与内心的恐惧，艰难地一步步向上攀爬，最终登顶。第二段情感线：受攀岩成功激励，由之前对癌症治疗的担忧、迷茫，转变为坚定、积极面对；故事线：“我”将攀岩过程与抗癌历程相类比，意识到如同信任绳索一样，要信任医疗团队与治疗手段，以更顽强的毅力投入抗癌斗争，迎接未来挑战。主旨升华句：Inthefaceofdifficulties,trustistheropethatpullsusupfromtheabyssoffearanddoubt.（面对困难时，信任是将我们从恐惧与怀疑的深渊拉起的绳索。）Sometimes,thegreatestcourageisfoundinthesmallestofus,likeachild'sfearlesstrust,inspiringourjourneyforward.（有时候，最伟大的勇气源自我们当中最弱小的个体，就如孩子无畏的信任，激励着我们前行。）Life'schallenges,whetheratoweringrockwalloradauntingillness,canbeconqueredwhenwefindthestrengthtotrustandpersevere.（生活中的挑战，无论是高耸的攀岩墙还是可怕的疾病，当我们找到信任与坚持的力量时，都能被征服。）Thejourneyofovercomingobstaclesisnotjustaboutphysicalstrength,butaboutthementalresolvetotrustintheunseensupport.（克服障碍的旅程不只是关乎体力，还关乎信任无形支持的精神决心。）Whenweembracetrustasourguide,wecanscaletheheightsofourfearsandemergevictoriousontheotherside.（当我们将信任当作指引时，就能翻越恐惧的高峰，在彼岸取得胜利。）写作示范一：ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Iclosedmyeyesforamoment,gatheringmyfrayednerves.ImagesofRuthie'sconfidentclimbflashedbeforeme.Itookadeepbreathandwhispered,“Justtrustit.”Withnewfounddetermination,Ireachedforthenexthold.Myfingersached,butIgrittedmyteeth.Slowly,Ifoundarhythm,movingonelimbatatime.AsInearedthetop,thecrowdbelowseemedtofadeaway.AllIcouldfocusonwasthatropeandthegoalabove.Finally,Igraspedthetopledge,andawaveofeuphoriawashedoverme.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Irealizedthatcancerwasmytoweringrockwall,andthemedicalteamandtreatmentweremyropes.Ihadbeensoafraid,doubtingeverystepoftheway.Butnow,likeonthewall,Ichosetotrust.Ifacedchemosessionswithanewmindset,seeingthemasnecessaryclimbs.Whenthesideeffectshithard,Irememberedthestruggleonthewallandheldon.Iwasdeterminedtoreachthesummitofrecovery,knowingthatwithtrustandperseverance,Icouldconquerthismountaintoo.写作示范二：ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.IglanceddownandsawRuthielookingupatme,hereyesfullofanticipation.ThatsimplelookgavemethepushIneeded.Iforcedmyfingerstouncurlandgrabthenextprotrusion.Itwasagony,butIrepeatedRuthie'smantrainmyhead:“Justtrusttherope.”AsIinchedhigher,sweatpoureddownmyface,mixingwithtearsofexertion.ButIdidn'tstop.Eachmovewasabattle,butIwaswinning.Eventually,Ihauledmyselfoverthetop,collapsinginaheapofexhaustionandpride.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Iunderstoodthatjustastheropehadmybackonthewall,Ihadasupportsysteminmyfightagainstcancer.Family,friends,anddoctorsweretheretocatchmeifIfell.Istoppeddreadingthefuturescansandtreatments.Instead,Iembracedthemasopportunitiestoprovemystrength.Wheneverself-doubtcreptin,IthoughtbacktothatvictoriousclimbandknewIhadthegutstofaceanything.Iwasonajourneytobeatcancer,andthiswasjustthebeginning.【答案】ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Itookadeepbreath.Immediately,Ifeltthesafetyfromtherop