高考英语复习读后续写练习：懂事少年勇担家务危急时刻火场救人+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习懂事少年勇担家务，危急时刻火场救人1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Please,mother,dositdownandletmetrymyhand,”saidFredLiscom,abright,activeboyseventeenyearsold.Mrs.Liscom,lookingpaleandworn,smiledandsaid,“You,Fred,youwashdishes?”“Yes,indeed,mother,”repliedFred,“IshouldbeapoorscholarifIcouldn’t,whenI’veseenyoudoitsomanytimes.Justtryme.”Alookofreliefcameoverhismother’sfaceassheseatedherselfinherlowrockingchair.Fredwashedthedishes,andputtheminthecloset.Hethensweptthekitchen,broughtupthepotatoesfromthecellar(地下室)forthedinnerandwashedthem,andthensetoutforschool.4续写原文Freddidsobecausethedoctorsaidoneday,“Well,madam,it’smyopinionthatyouwouldhavebeenverysickifyouhadkeptbusy.”Fredhadgivenupagreatdealofwhatboyslike,forthepurposeofhelpinghismother.Theschoolboys’curiositywasexcitedwhenhewouldgivenootherreasonfornotcomingtoschoolearlier,orstayingafterschool.“I’lltellyou,”saidTomBarton,“I’llfindhimoutandboysseeifIdon’t!”SohecalledforFredtogotoschool,andwhenhelookedintothekitchenwindow,hesawFredstandingatthetablewithadishclothinhishand.5续写原文Ofcoursehereportedthisatschool,andvariouswerethegreetingspoorFredreceived.“Well,you’reabraveonetostayathomewashingdishes.”Afterschool,Fredwascryingsecretlyatnightafterhermotherfellasleepwhensomeoneshouted“Fire!fire!”ItwasMr.Barton’shouse.Mr.andMrs.Bartonwerenotathome,leavingTomBartonandhissisterKatyalone.Withouttheslightesthesitation,FredrushedouttowardsTom’shouse.6段首句Paragraph1：FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Paragraph2：Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析917岁的弗雷德・利斯康是个聪明又活跃的男孩。一天，他看到脸色苍白、疲惫不堪的母亲，主动提出要帮忙洗碗，让母亲休息。母亲欣然应允，脸上露出了欣慰的神情。弗雷德不仅洗了碗，还做了清扫厨房、从地下室取土豆等家务，然后才去上学。原来，医生曾告诉母亲，如果她一直忙碌，身体可能会出大问题，所以弗雷德放弃了很多同龄男孩喜欢的活动，只为帮助母亲。同学们对他早到晚归的原因十分好奇，汤姆・巴顿决定一探究竟。他透过厨房窗户看到弗雷德正拿着洗碗布站在桌前，于是在学校里大肆宣扬，弗雷德因此受到了同学们的嘲笑。一天晚上，弗雷德在母亲睡着后暗自哭泣时，突然听到“着火了！着火了！”的呼喊声，着火的正是巴顿先生的家，而巴顿夫妇不在家，只有汤姆和他的妹妹凯蒂在家。弗雷德毫不犹豫地冲向了汤姆家。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.弗雷德发现汤姆在房子外面吓得浑身发抖，凯蒂却不在。他心急如焚，一把抓住汤姆的肩膀，大声问道：“凯蒂呢？她在哪里？”汤姆满脸泪痕，声音颤抖地说：“她……她还在房间里，她害怕得不敢出来！”弗雷德抬头望去，只见房子里火光冲天，浓烟滚滚，热浪扑面而来。周围的邻居们都站在一旁，焦急地看着，却没有人敢进去。弗雷德深知时间紧迫，多耽误一秒，凯蒂就多一分危险。他没有丝毫犹豫，深吸一口气，用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，毅然决然地冲进了火海。房子里烟雾弥漫，几乎让人无法呼吸，视线也变得极差。弗雷德一边摸索着前进，一边大声呼喊着凯蒂的名字：“凯蒂！你在哪里？别怕，我来救你了！”火势越来越大，周围的墙壁被烧得通红，不时有燃烧的碎片掉落下来。弗雷德的衣服被火星点燃，他迅速拍灭，继续向前寻找。终于，在一个角落里，他听到了微弱的哭声。弗雷德顺着声音的方向走去，发现凯蒂蜷缩在那里，吓得瑟瑟发抖。弗雷德立刻跑过去，紧紧地抱住她，轻声安慰道：“凯蒂，别怕，我是弗雷德，我来带你出去了。”凯蒂抬起头，看到弗雷德，眼中充满了希望，紧紧地抓住他的手。11续写思路分析Para2：Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.他们在房子倒塌前侥幸逃了出来。凯蒂紧紧地抱着弗雷德，泪流满面，不停地说着：“谢谢你，弗雷德，谢谢你救了我。”弗雷德轻轻地拍着她的背，安慰道：“没事了，凯蒂，都过去了。”周围的邻居们看到他们平安出来，都纷纷鼓掌欢呼。汤姆也冲了过来，激动地抱住了妹妹和弗雷德，声音哽咽地说：“弗雷德，我错了，我不该嘲笑你。你是真正的英雄！”弗雷德微笑着说：“没关系，汤姆。现在最重要的是大家都平安无事。”这时，巴顿夫妇匆匆赶了回来，看到孩子们都安然无恙，心中的大石头终于落了地。他们对弗雷德感激不已，巴顿先生紧紧地握住弗雷德的手，说：“弗雷德，你救了我们的孩子，我们真不知道该怎么感谢你。”弗雷德有些不好意思地说：“这是我应该做的，叔叔。”从那以后，学校里的同学们对弗雷德的态度发生了巨大的转变。他们不再嘲笑他，而是对他充满了敬佩和感激。弗雷德也明白了，真正的勇敢和担当，不是为了得到别人的认可，而是在关键时刻能够挺身而出，帮助他人。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Hisheartsankinstantly,andhegrabbedTom‘sshouldersfirmly.“Where’sKaty?Whereisshe?”heshoutedanxiously.Tom‘sfacewascoveredwithtears,andhisvoicewasquivering.“She...she’sstillintheroom.She‘stooscaredtocomeout!”Fredlookedupatthehouse.Flameswereleapinghigh,andthicksmokewasbillowingout.Theheatwasunbearable.Theneighborswerestandingaround,lookingworriedbutnoonedaredtogoin.Fredknewthateverysecondcounted.Withoutamoment’shesitation,hetookadeepbreath,coveredhismouthandnosewithawettowel,andrushedintotheburninghousebravely.Insidethehouse,thesmokewassothickthatitwasalmostimpossibletobreatheorseeclearly.Fredfelthiswayforward,shoutingKaty'snameloudly.“Katy!Whereareyou?Don'tbeafraid.I'mheretosaveyou!”Thefirewasgettingfiercer,andthewallsaroundhimwereburningred.Burningdebriswasfallingfromtimetotime.Fred'sclothescaughtfire,buthequicklypatteditoutandcontinuedhissearch.Finally,inacorner,heheardafaintcry.Followingthesound,hefoundKatyhuddledthere,shiveringwithfear.Fredrushedoverandhuggedhertightly.“Katy,don'tbeafraid.I'mFred.I'mheretotakeyouout,”hesaidsoftly.KatylookedupatFred,hereyesfilledwithhope,andshegraspedhishandtightly.14范文呈现heyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.KatyclungtightlytoFred,tearsstreamingdownherface.“Thankyou,Fred.Thankyouforsavingme,”shesaidrepeatedly.Fredpattedherbackgently.“It'sokay,Katy.It'sallovernow.”Theneighborsaroundthemcheeredandclappedwhentheysawthemcomeoutsafely.TomalsorushedoverandhuggedhissisterandFredexcitedly.“Fred,Iwaswrong.Ishouldn'thavelaughedatyou.You'rearealhero!”hesaidwithachokedvoice.Fredsmiledandreplied,“Itdoesn'tmatter,Tom.Themostimportantthingisthateveryoneissafenow.Justthen,Mr.andMrs.Bartonrushedback.Whentheysawtheirchildrenweresafeandsound,theywererelieved.TheywereextremelygratefultoFred.Mr.BartonheldFred'shandfirmly.“Fred,yousavedourchildren.Wedon'tknowhowtothankyouenough,”hesaid.Fredfeltabitembarrassed.“It'swhatIshoulddo,Uncle,”hesaid.Fromthenon,theattitudeoftheschoolmatestowardsFredchangedgreatly.Theynolongerlaughedathimbutadmiredandappreciatedhim.Fredalsorealizedthattruecourageandresponsibilityarenotaboutgettingrecognitionfromothersbutaboutbeingabletostepforwardandhelpothersincriticalmoments.15升级版范文呈现FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Hisheartpoundingwildlyinhischest,FredimmediatelygraspedTom'sshouldersfirmly.“WhereonearthisKaty?Tellme!”heyelled,hisvoicefilledwithurgency.Tom,hisfacestreakedwithtears,stammered,“She...she'sstillinsidetheroom.She'stoofrightenedtomove!”Glancingupatthehouse,Fredwasmetwithaterrifyingsight:flameswereleapinghighintothesky,andthick,blacksmokewasbillowingout,makingtheairhotandsuffocating.Theneighbors,thoughworried,stoodhelplesslyby,noneofthemdaringtoentertheinferno.Fullyawarethateverypassingsecondcouldbeamatteroflifeordeath,Fred,withoutamoment'shesitation,tookadeepbreath,coveredhismouthandnosewithawettowel,andchargedheadlongintotheburninghouse.Onceinside,thethicksmokemadeitalmostimpossibletobreatheorseeanythingclearly.Gropinghiswayforward,FredshoutedKaty'snameatthetopofhislungs.“Katy!Canyouhearme?Don'tbeafraid!I'mcomingtogetyou!”Thefireragedon,thewallsaroundhimglowingred-hot,andburningdebrisraineddownsporadically.Suddenly,Fredfeltasearingpainashisclothescaughtfire,buthequicklypattedouttheflamesandpressedonwithhissearch.Justwhenhewasstartingtofeeldesperate,afaintcryreachedhisears.Followingthesound,hefinallyspottedKatyhuddledinacorner,shakinguncontrollably.Withoutasecondthought,Fredrushedoverandwrappedhisarmsaroundherprotectively.“Katy,it'sme,Fred.I'mheretotakeyoutosafety,”hemurmuredsoftly.Katylookedupathim,hereyesbrimmingwithhope,andclungtightlytohishand.16升级版范文呈现Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.Katy,herbodystilltremblingwithfear,clungtoFredlikealifeline,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,Fred.Yousavedmylife,”shesobbedrepeatedly.Fred,gentlypattingherback,reassuredher,“It'sallrightnow,Katy.Thedangerisover.”Theon-lookingneighborseruptedintocheersandapplausewhentheysawthetwoemergesafely.Tom,hisfaceflushedwithemotion,rushedoverandembracedbothFredandhissister.“Fred,Iwassowrong.Ishouldn'thavemadefunofyou.You'reatruehero!”heexclaimed,hisvoicechokedwithemotion.Fred,flashingawarmsmile,replied,“It'sallwaterunderthebridge,Tom.Whatmattersmostisthatwe'realls