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高考英语读后续写语篇练习芒果树引发的邻里矛盾与和解1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文TheMangoTree—AFriendofAllItwasausualcheerfulandplayfuldayforDorothy.Theonlydifferencewasthatherfamilyhadshiftedtoanewapartment.Althoughshehadbeeninthenewhousejusttwodays,Dorothyhadalreadystartedlikinghernewhomeverymuch,notonlybecauseofthespaciousrooms,butalsobecauseofalargemangotreewhichhadlovinglyextendeditsbranchesacrossthebalconyofherhouse.Themangotreenotonlygaveabeautifulviewbutalsoservedasahomeforalargenumberofbirdsandsmallanimals.Dorothy’smotherwasalsofondofplantsandhadkeptmanypottedplantsinthebalcony.Aweekpassedby.OnaSundaymorning,Dorothywasawakenedbyaloudnoiseinherneighbourhood.Sherantowardsthebalconyand,tohersurprise,foundsomepeoplechopping(砍)offthebelovedmangotree.Sheranuptohermotherandexplainedthematter.4续写原文Dorothyandhermotherlookeddownfromthebalcony.TheysawthewomenundertheguidanceofMr.Denver,cuttingthemangotreedown.Mr.Denverwastheresidentofthegroundfloorapartment.Hesaidangrily,“Look,Iamgettingthisjobdoneundermyexpense.Thistreeisblockingmyview.Icannotseemycarproperlybecauseofthisannoyingtree.”DorothyandhermotherunderstoodthattherewasnopointinhavinganargumentwithMr.Denver.5续写原文Fromthenon,Dorothytriedallpossiblewaystotakeherrevenge(报复)againstMr.Denverforcuttingherbelovedmangotree.Shedidmanytrickssuchasstickingthegumonhiscallngbell,pouringsugarinhisbalconytoattractants,jumpingonthefloortocreatenoise,etc.Dayspassedby.Onemorning,asDorothywashelpinghermotherwaterthepottedplantskeptinthebalcony,shecouldn’ttakehereyesawayfromthefreshgreenleavescomingfromtheinjuredmangotree.Dorothycouldn’tholdherexcitementandstartedjumpingwithdelight.6段首句Paragraph1:Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.Paragraph2:Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9多萝西一家搬到新公寓,她因宽敞房间和阳台外的芒果树很快喜欢上这里。一周后,丹佛先生以芒果树遮挡视线为由砍掉它。此后,多萝西一直想报复丹佛先生。一天,她惊喜地发现受伤的芒果树长出新绿叶。几天后,多萝西的父母决定邀请丹佛先生一家共进晚餐。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.几天后,多萝西的父母决定邀请丹佛先生一家共进晚餐。多萝西得知这个消息后,心里十分抗拒,她撅着嘴,满脸不情愿地说:“为什么要请他,他可是砍了我们心爱的芒果树!”父母耐心地向她解释,邻里之间和睦相处很重要,希望借此机会化解矛盾。在父母的劝说下,多萝西勉强同意。晚餐当天,丹佛先生一家如约而至。多萝西不情不愿地和他们打了招呼,随后便沉默不语。餐桌上,大家起初都有些拘谨,气氛略显尴尬。丹佛先生似乎也有些不自在,偶尔说几句话,声音都带着一丝不自然。多萝西则一直低头吃饭,对丹佛先生的态度依旧冷淡。11续写思路分析Para2:Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.丹佛先生微笑着热情接过多萝西母亲的礼物。母亲温和地说:“打开看看吧,这是我们的一点心意。”丹佛先生打开盒子,看到里面是芒果树的新鲜绿叶,顿时愣住了。多萝西的母亲接着说:“这棵芒果树给我们带来了很多快乐,虽然它被砍了,但生命力很顽强,又长出了新叶。我们希望您能理解我们对它的感情,也希望邻里之间能像这棵树一样,即便经历波折,也能重新焕发生机。”丹佛先生听后,满脸羞愧,他真诚地向多萝西一家道歉,表示自己当初太自私。多萝西看到这一幕,心中的怨恨也渐渐消散。从那以后,两家人的关系逐渐缓和,共同守护着这份邻里情谊。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.WhenDorothyheardthenews,shewascompletelyagainstit.Shepoutedandsaidreluctantly,"Whyshouldweinvitehim?Hecutdownourbelovedmangotree!"Herparentspatientlyexplainedthatharmoniousneighborhoodrelationswereimportantandthiswasachancetoresolvetheconflict.Aftermuchpersuasion,Dorothyagreed.Onthedayofthedinner,theDenversarrived.Dorothygreetedthemwithahalf-heartedsmileandthenremainedsilent.Atthedinnertable,everyonewasabitawkwardatfirst.Mr.Denverseemedill-at-ease,andhiswordswereabitstiltedwhenhespoke.Dorothyjustkeptherheaddown,eatingquietlyandstillshowingacoldattitudetowardsMr.Denver.14范文呈现Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.Hermothersaidgently,"Openit.It'salittlesomethingfromus."Mr.Denveropenedtheboxandwasstunnedtoseethefreshleavesofthemangotreeinside.Dorothy'smothercontinued,"Thismangotreebroughtusalotofjoy.Althoughitwascut,it'ssotoughthatnewleaveshavegrown.Wehopeyoucanunderstandourfeelingsforitandthatourrelationshipcanbelikethistree,revivingafterdifficulties."Mr.Denverlookedashamed.HesincerelyapologizedtoDorothy'sfamily,admittinghehadbeentooselfish.Seeingthis,theresentmentinDorothy'sheartgraduallydissipated.Fromthenon,thetwofamilies'relationshipimproved,andtheycherishedtheneighborhoodfriendshiptogether.15升级版范文呈现Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.Uponhearingthis,Dorothywasvehementlyopposed.Pouting,sheretortedreluctantly,"Whyonearthshouldweinvitehim?He'stheonewhochoppeddownourbelovedmangotree!"Herparents,withgreatpatience,elucidatedthatharmoniousneighborhoodrelationswereofutmostimportanceandthatthispresentedanopportunitytomendtherift.Afterpersistentpersuasion,Dorothyacquiesced.Onthedayofthedinner,theDenversarrived.Dorothygreetedthemwithaforcedsmileandthenlapsedintosilence.Atthedinnertable,anairofawkwardnessprevailedinitially.Mr.Denver,clearlyill-at-ease,spokewithahintofstiffness.Dorothy,keepingherheaddown,atequietly,maintainingacolddemeanortowardsMr.Denver.16升级版范文呈现Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.Hermother,inagentletone,said,"Goaheadandopenit.It'satokenofourregard."Mr.Denver,uponopeningthebox,wasleftstunnedatthesightofthefreshleavesofthemangotreewithin.Dorothy'smothercontinued,"Thismangotreewasasourceofgreatjoyforus.Despite

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