2023年新高考I卷读后续写真题

全国I&II卷读后续写2023新高考2023高考真题出处分析AWildRide(2021)LightingtheCandle系列TheHornBook《号角》杂志(1924年美国波士顿创刊）原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。正能量原则故事内容一点要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。123写作指导：三大原则原文阅读1WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay(表演一出戏),whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.2So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself(努力；尽力),Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis(有一个很好的机会).”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.Para.1自我否定unwillingPara.2自我尝试encouraged+agreed3IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobe(不像是)anyoneelse’schoice.4Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathized同情immediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedout查阅ahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.原文阅读Para.3自我尝试Para.4自我坚持devoted+persistent5WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwayto让步theenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.__________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation._________________________________________________________原文阅读Para.5自我突破enjoyable/satisfied我被要求参加写作比赛我拒绝参加（不热爱&来自巴西）我决定一试（老师鼓励）我想放弃自我否定自我尝试自我怀疑ReadReadPlot情节Emotionalchange情感变化明线暗线我继续写作（马）我上交文章，不在乎输赢自我坚持自我突破文章的主题Believeinyourself！Hardworkeventuallypaidoff!Itwastheencouragementandappreciationfrommyteacherthatchangedmylife.Fromthenon,Icametorealizethatpersistenceisthekeytosuccess.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.self-confidentperseverance/persistence相信自己，努力总会有回报。正是老师的鼓励和欣赏改变了我的一生。从那时起，我开始意识到坚持是成功的关键。心之所愿，无所不成。细读首句，构思框架两段首句定一框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。二框二首正能量

第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.（几个星期后，在我差不多快要忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息）

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.（颁奖结束后，我去了老师的办公室）两段首句定一框即根据所给两段的首句确定第一段的框架。1.Thenews的具体内容是什么？2.我得知消息后的心理状态是什么？3.我、老师（其他同学）的反应？4.我参加颁奖典礼，想到老师二框二首正能量1.我说什么？老师的反应是什么？老师会说什么、做什么动作以及老师的感受？（师生互动）2.这件事情对我写作的影响？3.我的感悟（升华主题）UsefulExpressionswinthefirstprize获得一等奖beproudofsb.为...感到骄傲madeit成功fallinlovewith爱上receivetheaward领奖sharedsth.withsb.和某人分享expressthankstosb.向某人表达感谢oweA’ssuccesstoB把A的功劳归功于BIt’s+被强调部分who/that+剩余部分“正是...”写--范文赏析-Para1Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”衔接句（衔接Para1-2）I：→happy→thankfulmyteacher：→proud→excited写--范文赏析-Para2

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialte