2024届高三英语一轮复习 满分读后续写 讲义

满分读后续写

1.使用非谓语动词形式,句子凝练高端

①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.（非谓语动词）

一Shewalkedoutofthelab,followedbymanystudents.

②Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.俳谓语动词）

—Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughinc.

2.运用定语从句,增加细节，填补内容

①You'dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryof

TangDynasty,whichmakesiteasyforyoutoqothroughtheclass（使你容易通过这门课）.

©Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,homwhichyoucanhavea

clearerpictureofChineseculture（从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识）.

③IhavefoundaflatforyouonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseschool.Itisonthethirdfloor

withthreerooms,oneofwhichisbedroom（其中——个是臣卜室），andtheothertwoarebathroom

andkitchen.

3.巧用倒装，增强句子的表现力

①ThoughI'mweak,Tilmaketheeffort.（倒装）

一Weakas/thoughIam,I'llmaketheeffort.

②HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.（倒装）

—NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

4.恰当使用强调句,增强说服力

①Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.（强调句）

—»Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

②Itisworkinginteamsinsteadofonmyownthathasfreedmeoftroubleandmademywork

moreefficient.（强调句）

5.自如应用各种名词性从句,精彩纷呈

①Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（主语从句）

一Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.

②IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon（我那天下午得

参加一个重要会议）.

6.withorwithout精彩点缀.妙不可言

①Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaim（没有清晰可达到的目标”s

likesailingwithoutacompass.

②Ican'thankyouenoughforyourgeneroushelp,IvithoutwhichIcouldn9thavemadesuch

©eatprogress（没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步）.

7.巧用副逅，充分表情达意

①Sheuatiently（耐心地）explainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequiredeveryonetofollow

them.

②WewereperfectlW完全地）satisfiedwiththeresultoftheexperiment.

8.变主动为被动,凸显英语思维

①Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowed（可以被借用）atatimeandtheycanbekept（可以保存）

fortendays.

②Youareallowed（被允许）abouttenminutestoprepareforthework.

9.语气委婉而中肯,易于接受

①Iwonderifyoucouldtellme（你能否告诉我）whatbooksIneedtoreadandtherequirements

ofmyhomework.

（2）Whatdoyouthinkofit?Areyousatisfiedwithit?Ifnot,pleasetellmeasquicklyas

possible（请尽快告诉我）.

一、倒装句

1.NotuntilthatmomentdidIrealizewhatabigdifferenceonesmallgesturehadmadetohim.

2.HardlyhadIfinishedmywordswhentheyoungmansaid,“Noproblem.Iwillsendhimto

thehospital.

3.Haditaotbeenforyourhelp,wecouldn'thavefinishedtheworkaheadofschedul已要不是

你的帮助，我们就不可能提前完成任务。

4.Inthecornerstoodthefirstwifeinamixtureoffrightondannoyanc].（地点倒装）

5.Neverhadshepredictedonedayshewouldbechangedintoasilentfish.

Neverhadtheybeensooverjoyedthatinfectiouslaughtercouldbeconstantlyheard.

Itdawnedonmethatnevershouldweunderestimatethepowerofouractions.

6.Weakas/thoughshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.

7.Soastonishedwasthemanthathecouldn'tbelievehiseyes.

SoashamedwasIthat...

SofreezingcoldwastheicywaterthatIwasanxioustoclimboutbymyself,butcountless

previousfailuresfrozemefromstrugglingagain.

8.Itwasnotlongbeforewebegansweating.

9.

二、强调句

itwastheirBamathatrelievedusofsorrow.

三、完成时

Havinggotmyson'sdormitorynumber,hehungupthephone.

四、感叹句

Howgratefulwewereforhiskindness!

五、定语从句

Nowthatwemadeittothehospital,hesaidhe'dbettergobackthecampus,wherethestorewas

closed.

Wealsofoundasmallstore,wheretherewereallkindsofitemsthatstudentswouldneed.

Therewereoldbutwonderfulbuildings,whichsurelyexperiencedtimeandweather.

ThosespecialhomemadedessertsattributedtoMisty'sinspirationbroughtourfamilysomeincomes,

whichstraightenedoursituation.

Greetinguswithaconfidentsmile,Rafaelsharedhisstoryinamagneticvoice,whichleftme

stunned.

六、With…表示状态

Withmyeyessparkling,Iregrettedwithendlessembarrassment,foldingmyarmsaroundher.

Hisfacebeamedwithhappiness.

Althoughslowandunsureofstep,shemovedwithdeliberation（从容）,andtherewasnohesitation

inhergestures.

Withbutterfliesinmystomach,Ibreatheddeeply.

Iheldmybreathandwasoverwhelmedwiththrills.表达激动

wearenotdrivingalongsomedarkstreets,butgoingataslowspeedwithstarsdimlyshining.

我们不是在黑暗的街道上行驶，而是在星光暗淡的照耀下缓慢前行。

Hesaidwithenthusiasm,...

Myfaceturnedpale/redandIstoodtherewithmyheartbeating/racingviolently.

shesaidwithahintofwistfulness(一丝伤感)

七、in…表示状态

Ilookedaroundmeindesperatesearchofafriendlyface,asmile,anything.

Iaddedinembarrassmentformyabruptness.

Theoldwoman'seyesroundedincoofusion.

Iexclaimedinsurprisingdisbelief.

"Yes,that'sthecorrectprice,"|aidCountBorselliinanordinaryvoice.

八、非谓语-主动(doing)

Ifeltmyselfenvelopedincheerfulatmosphiru,feelingsorelievedtoputasidetroublesomematters.

Lookingaround,Ilaydownontheground,screaminginaloudvoiceinanattempttopersuademy

motherto...

busilytexting.

”...JHecomplained,frowning.

Tearsofreliefwellingupineyes,hewasthrilledtohughisbestfriendtightly...

Tearswellingupinhiseyes,Jerry'sfatherwatchedhisbeautifullittlecrippledsonflappinghisarms

upanddowninthewind,yellingatthetopofhisvoice,

IhuggedJoetightly,happinessandlovewellingupinsideme.

Instead,itseemedthateverystudentwaslostindeepthought,tastingthemovinglifestory.

Iwipedthetearsfrommyeyes,heartbeatingwildly.

nThatpearlisworthmorethanfiftythousandpounds,"addedtheCount,tremblingwithanger.

Somecouldhardlywaittotelltheirseatmatesabouttheirholidaytrips,|yesshiningandface

glowingwithjoy.

..hiseyestwinklingwiththrill.

Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfandenjoyingtheenergyand

excitementofasale.

Greetinguswithaconfidentsmile,Rafaelsharedhisstoryinamagneticvoice,whichleftme

stunned.

Feelingalumpinthethroat,Iclappedmyhandsevenmoreloudly,determinednevertojudgea

bookbyitscover.

Feelingdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.（现在分词+情绪形容词）

Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleys

holdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.（视觉+环境描写+拟人）

Ipouredoutourstory,explainingthatwehadbeenthrownintoaworldofdarknessforthelossof

Bama.

Irefusedtoraisemyhand,expictingsomeoneelsewould.

九、非谓语-被动

Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.

Bathedinthelastraysofthesun,allofthemburstintolaughter.

Movedandfeelingsad,theteacherreplied.4tYouranswerisabsolutelyright!?,

Filledwithexpectationandeagerness,JerrystaredatEricwithobviouspleasure.

EyesfixedonSusan.Icontinued,66”

Seizedbyastrongsenseofterror/tension/shame,mypalmsweresweatingandIwasunabletoutter

asingleword.

十、副词

Asuddenrushofshybloodfillingtheface,sheinstinctivelylookedaroundwiththehopeoffinding

theverymantomakeanapology.

Instinctively,hejumpedin.

Hewasoverwhelminglyjoyndashenoticedsomethinggreenamongthebrokenbricksofthehouse.

Theboyseemedgenuinelyupsetbytheinquiry.

Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaround

hermother'sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothecrowds.

Feelingunbearablycoldandexhausted,shehadnoideahowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.

Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwantedsomethingto

eat.

deeplyintelligentandbreathtakinglybeautiful

academicallyhigh-achievingstudent

十一、what句型

Onhearingwhatshesaid,theshopkeepercheckedtherecordinahurry.

十二、形容词独立小句

Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.

Surelyenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.

Tension-filledatmosphere充满紧张的氛围

十三、动作

Whenhiseyescaughtmine,Iwasabletoseefearsshimmeredinhissmilingeyes.

Afterdrowninghimselfinsorrowforashorttime,heupliftedhimselfand.......

Inoticedthewrinklesnexttohiseyes.Theyaremorenoticeablewhenhesmiles,buthissmileis

stillasheartwarmingasbefore.

Philcastakindlookattheboy,placedacomfortinghandonhisshouldnc,andassuredhim.

Hisheartliftedatthesightofher.一看见...Catchaglimpseof看一眼

Isighedandnoddedslightly.

Iheldmybreathandwasoverwhelmedwiththrills.表达激动

Breatheasighofrelief松一口气

shewentupatabriskpace.

十四、情感

Wordsfailtodescribethefeelingswhen…语言无法形容当时的感觉

Everyone'stensionreleased,...

Thetensionintheroommelted.

Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.

Iwastoodumbfoundedtoreactatfirst,butwithoutanyslightesthesitation...

Iclosedmyeyestoenjoythesentiebreezeandthesoundssftheclashingwaves.

Iwaswildwithjoy,overflowingwithhappiness.

Allofasudden,awarmfeelingofsympathyroseupinmyheart.

Asenseofterror/tension/shameslowlycreptuponme.

Aflashofgriefcameuponhim/

Shewasdeepinthoughtandheardlittleofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher.

AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJane'smind.

Witheachvisit,Icouldfeeltheacheinmyheartlessen.

strikearesponsivechordwith打动对方的心弦strikeachordwith引起共鸣

Ifeltillatease;mywrathhadsimmeredaway我感到不自在;愤怒已经渐渐平息下来了

Iwasashamedtohumiliatemyself.Ilookedathimoutofthecomerofmyeye.

Isaidtomyself"Courage!”Butthewords,t4pardonme,“stuckinmythroat.

Atthatpoint,mychestwassqueezingwithanefforttorestrainmylaughter.

15、环境描写

Weawakenedtothesoundofbirdssinging.

Itwasanicedaywiththesunshiningmildlyandcloudsfloatingleisurely.

Restingontherocks,wefelttherefreshingbreezebrushingourcheeks.

.....,withthecountlessstarstwinklinginthecurtainofnights夜幕下无数的星星

Thebeautifulsceneryisbeyoaddescription.

Therosegivesoutasweetsmell,whichpromisestobeaperfectday.

Inthedistance,wecouldseethemistycloudrisingfromthelake,whichremainsfreshinmy

memory.

Twinklinginfinityofstarsandbalmybreezeseemedtoalsocelebratemyluck.无数闪烁的星星

和温和的微风似乎也在庆祝我的好运。

wearenotdrivingalongsomedarkstreets,butgoingataslowspeedwithstarsdimlyshining.

我们不是在黑暗的街道上行驶，而是在星光暗淡的照耀下缓慢前行。

withagentlebreezewaftedherface.

Fallingleavesdancedgracefullyintheair.

Agustofwindblewherhair.

Thedancingsnowblanketingthemountain.

Inthedimlight,

Belowus,milesoffieldsandhillsstretchedoutasfaraswecouldsee.

Thelastleafofautumnflutteredtothegroundlikeadropofautumn'stear,meltingsilentlyinhis

overwhelmingsorrow.

秋天的最后一片叶子像一滴秋天的眼泪一样飘落在地上，在压倒性的悲伤中默默融化。

“说”:

1.Lookingaround,Ilaydownontheground,|creaminginaloudvoiceinanattempttopersuade

mymotherto...

2.MissLyngatehadhersosehighupinthrair,announcingtheycosteightthousandpounds.

3."Yes,that*sthecorrectprice,"saidCountBorselliinanordinaryvoice.

4.“Thatpearlisworthmorethanfiftythousandpounds,"addedtheCount,tremblingwith

anger.

5.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfandenjoyingtheenergyand

excitementofasale.

6.Movedandfeelingsad,theteacherreplied.<6Youranswerisabsolutelyright!,?

7."Quick!Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop,“someoneyelled.

8.Whilehewaseating.Iinquiredabouthispastexperience.

9.Iexclaimedinsurprisingdisbelief.

10.Ipouredoutourstory,explainingthatwehadbeenthrownintoaworldofdarknessfortheloss

ofBama.

结尾：

Thelightofthesettingsunshoneontheboys,witnessingthestartofanewfriendship.

Itdawnedonmethatnevershouldweunderestimatethepowerofouiactions.

Ismiledbackintears.NotuntilthatmomentdidIrealizewhatabigdifferenceonesmallgesture

hadmadetohim.

Theymaynotbepriceybutthelovebehinditcounts.

Tulipsrosefromtheruinsandcametobloomagain,whichsuggeststhattherecouldagainbe

happinessaftersomuchmiseryandnewlifeaftermuchdeath.

Bathedinthelastraysofthesun,allofthemburstintolaughter.

Hissmilelightedupthehouse.

范文一

“Doyouhappentohaveadog?"Iasked."HehasnoID."Iaddedinembarrassmentformy

abruptness."Yes.But...howdoyouknowourboyBama?”Theoldwoman'seyesroundedin

confusion.tcWhatacoincidence!OurbabyisalsocalledBama.^^Iexclaimedinsurprisingdisbelief,

“MyhousewasfrequentedbyyourBama.^^AsshockedasLtheyoungmanasked,"Sir,didhecause

youanytrouble?”,hisvoicebeingkindofupset.

“Notatall!Actually,hewasabighelp,"Isaid,Ipouredoutourstory,explainingthatwehad

beenthrownintoaworldofdarknessforthelossofBama.However,itwastheirBamathatrelieved

usofsorrow.Theoldwomanlistenedinsilenceandthenbreathedalongrelief.Ithrewmyarms

aroundhertightly,asurgeofwarmthspringingfromourhearts."Bama”returned,bondinguswith

newfriendsandhelpingusgothroughthedarkesttimeofmylife.

范文二

Immediately,theclassbecameexcited.Somecouldhardlywaittotelltheirseatmatesabout

theirholidaytrips,fyesshiningandfaceglowingwithjoy.Thosewhohadn,tbeenanywhere

bombardedthemwithinquiringquestions.Enormousexcitementwelledupineverycornerofthe

classroom.Obviouslybewilderedatthesuddencommotionaround,Rafaelturnedtomefor

reasonsinwrittenwords.Surprisingly,myexplanationputasmileonhisface."Anyvolunteer

toshareyourstory?”askedMs.Sullivan,whosewordsIsetdownonpaperfor

Rafael.

ThenRafaelroseandwalkedontotheplatform.Greetinguswithaconfidentsmile,Rafael

sharedhisstoryinamagneticvoice,whichleftmestunned.Ifeltmoreashamedtolearnthathe

ranawebsitetohelpchildrenwithhearingproblemsthanguiltyaboutstupidly

thinkingdisabledpeoplecouldn?tbeintelligent.Thenhisvoicewaslostinathunderous

outburstofapplause.Feelingalumpinthethroat,Iclappedmyhandsevenmoreloudly,

determinednevertojudgeabookbyitscover.

范文三

Ericranovertohisnewfriend,Jerry.HereachedforJerry,shandandcaughtholdofhis

armtightly.Hesaidwithenthusiasm],“YouaremyonlyfriendandIwishIcoulddosomething

tohelpyouwalkandrunlikeotherkids."Filledwithexpectation