基础写作之人物篇曹丽兰市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖

基础写作训练之（五）----人物篇1/20white-hairedappearancebrainstormfatstrongbeautifulwithabigsmilehandsome1.80metrestallthin惯用词汇2/20confidentcharacterbrainstormfriendlynicehumorousgenerouspatientkind-heartedstrict3/20出生背景：a25-year-oldyoungwoman,wasbornonMay20,1996,wasborninapoorfamily,attheageof20,inone’sfifties,liveahappylife,4/204.兴趣兴趣专长：

beinterestedinEnglish,enjoydoing,begoodatsinging,5.教育背景：

beadmittedtoBejingUniversity,graduatefromBejingUniversity,getamaster’sdegree,receiveadoctor’sdegree,5/206.事迹经历：

becomeamemberoftheteam,devoteoneselftoone’sbusiness,makeupone’smindtodosth.ReceivetheNobelPrizeforphysics,winagoldmedalwinthefirstprizeinthecompetition,

6/207.评价：anadvancedteacher,berespectedbyallhisstudents,makegreatcontributionstoourcountry,setagoodexampletoallofus,speakhighlyof7/20

Bornin

ShaoguanonNov.18th,1970,shehasmanyhobbies,oneofwhichisreading.8/20It’sin1993that

shegotmarriedtoMr.Wang---ahandsomemanwith

aheightof178cm.9/20In1995shegavebirthtoalovelyboycalledWangJia,whowillgraduatefrom“HuaFu”SeniorHighSchoolnextyear.10/20MissCao,anexperiencedteacher,hasbeenteachingfor23years.Notonlydoessheloveherstudents,butalsodevotesherselftothem,sosheisrespectedbyherstudents.11/20学一学（一）1.同位语结构Lily,alovelygirl,wasborninWaihaionMay1st,1995.

2.分词结构1)BorninWaihaionMay1,1995,Lilyisalovelygirl.2)havingbrokentherecord,hebecameouridol.

3.定语从句1)

LilywhowasborninWaihaionMay1st

isa…2)Inhislife,hegotmanyhonors,

oneofwhichis

…

4.with结构:

Lilyisalovelygirlwithapairofglasses.12/20练一练（一）:用一句话完成以下句子：1.我语文老师Mr.Li出生于1972年5月13日,有丰富教学经验。同位语结构分词结构定语从句Mr.Li

whowasbornonMay13th,1972is

anexperiencedteacher.with结构:BornonMay13th,1972,MrLiisateacherwithmuchexperienceinteachingBornonMay13th,1972,myteacherMrLihasmuchexperienceinteaching.

Mr.Li,anexperiencedteacher,

wasbornonMay13th,197213/202.他一生取得过许多荣誉,1972年诺贝尔

物理奖就是其中一项.Inhislife,hegotmanyhonors,oneofwhichistheNobelPrizeforphysics.Ihavemanyfriends,oneofwhomisMike,ahandsomeboywithgoldenhair3.我有很多朋友,迈克就是其中一个,他是一个英俊金发男孩4.经过日夜苦学,去年他终于考上了北大.Havingstudiedharddayandnight,hewasadmittedtoBeijingUniversitylastyear.14/20学一学（二）1.倒装句式：Notonlydoesheshowinterestinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.2.被动语态：LeiFengsetagoodexampletous,sohe

isrespectedbyallthepeople3.强调句：It’slastyearthathelefthishometown.15/20练一练（二）2.只有用这种方法才能做好它。Notonlyishemyteacherbutalsomyfriend.1.他不不过我老师,还是我好朋友。Onlyinthiswaycanwedoitwell.3.他考上了北京大课时只有16岁。It’sattheageof16thathewasadmittedtoBeijingUniversity.16/20请依据以下信息用5句话介绍李老师出生日1976年10月4外貌短发、戴眼镜性格特点幽默、有耐心毕业院校1998年毕业于江门五邑大学兴趣兴趣读书、旅游事迹评价平易近人，教学经验丰富，取得许多荣誉,深受学生喜爱审题：体裁______

人称______

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第三人称普通现在时、普通过去时17/20

BornonOctober4th,1976,MissLiisahumourousandpatientteacherwithshorthairandapairofglasses.It’sin1998thatshegraduatedfromWuyiUniversity.Sheisinterestedinreadingandtravelling.Not

only

isshefriendlybutalsohasmuchexperienceinteaching.Shehasgotmanyhonorsandislovedbyallherstudents.1