初中九年级英语课件How to write a composition

HowtowriteawonderfulcompositionNeijiangNo.1MiddleSchoolByHeChunmei（内江一中何春梅）

你现在是一名中学生，最近学习紧张繁重，你和部分同学觉得身心疲惫。应该怎样调节呢？请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文，开头已经给出。

信息提示：要求:根据,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。词数在。

Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Manyofmyclassmatesfeeltiredandnervousthesedays.HereIhavesomeadvice.……人称第一人称时态1.平衡饮食…

2.参加运动…

3.充足睡眠…

1.平衡饮食…

2.参加运动…3.充足睡眠…

信息提示,把握要点80词左右信息提示,把握要点80词左右要点Task：一般现在时三个加适当发挥文体记叙文Stepone:审题(Analyze)你认为你和你的同学们1.平衡饮食

2.参加运动3.充足睡眠eatabalanceddiettakeexercisegetenoughsleep？？

？Steptwo：列提纲(list)eatabalanceddiethealthyfoodunhealthyfoodstayawayfromjunkfood.junkfoodbadforourhealthhealthyfood

goodforourhealtheatmorehealthyfoodhoweatdon’teat

takeexerciseplaybasketballplaytennisplaysoccertakeawalkswimkeephealthymakeusactiveandenergeticIt’snecessaryforustotakeexercise.getenoughsleepneedeighthours’sleephowdon’tstayuplategotobedearlyandgetupearlyIfwedon’tgetenoughsleep,wewillhaveaheadachefeeltiredthenextday.orStepthree：连接(connect)1._________________abalanceddiet,forexamplewecaneatmorehealthyfood.2.Eatingjunkfood___________ourhealth.3._________________buildup(增强)ourbodies，helpustokeephealthy.4.Junkfood__________usfatand_________.5.It’simportant____________________.__________________stayuplate.WeshouldhaveisbadforDoingexercisecanmakesweaktogetenoughsleepYou’dbetternotmakesentences:pointshowexampleswhyeatabalanceddiet1.eatmore…2.stayawayfromjunkfoodmilk…1.goodforhealth2.makeusfatandweaktakeexercisedosportstakeawalk…makeusactive…getenoughsleepneedenoughsleepdon’tstayuplategotobedearly1.badforhealth2.Ifwedon’t…Conjunctionwords:1.表示并列或递进:and,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor…2.表示条件:if，unless…3.表示顺序:first,next，then,finally…4.表示因果:because,so…

5.表示选择:or,either…or…6.表示解释:forexample,suchas…7.表示转折:but,however,yet…8.表示结论:inaword,atlast,allinall……

Fillintheblankswiththewordsgiven:1.___________wearebusywithstudy,wehavetofindsometimetoexercise.2.Wecandokindsofsports_________swimming,running______hiking.3._______,weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit._________,it’snecessarytotakeexercise.4._______wedon’tgetenoughsleep,we’llhaveaheadachethenextday._____we’dbetternotstayuplate.if,first,so,although,suchas,second,andAlthoughFirstsuchasSecondIfSoandStepfour：美化(Beautify)writeyourcomposition:pointshowexampleswhyeatabalanceddiet1.eatmore…2.stayawayfromjunkfoodmilk…1.goodforhealth2.makeusfatandweaktakeexercisedosportstakeawalk…makeusactive…getenoughsleep1.needenoughsleep2.don’tstayuplategotobedearly1.badforhealth2.Ifwedon’t…Stepfive：检查(Check)Checkthefollowing:要点是否全面逻辑是否合理人称是否正确时态是否正确语序是否正确主谓是否一致语言是否符合习惯Onepossibleversion：

Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Manyofmyclassmatesfeeltiredandnervousthesedays.HereIhavesomeadvice.

Firstly,weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Vegetablesandfruitaregoodforourhealth.Besides,stayawayfromjunkfood,itmakesusfatandweak.Secondly,it’snecessarytotakeexercise.Doingexercisecanmakeusactiveandenergetic.Finally,weneedatleasteighthours’sleepeverynight.Ifwedon’tgetenoughsleep,wewillfeeltiredthenextday.Sowe’dbetternotstayuplate.Ihopeallofuscanbothdowellinourstudyandcareforourhealth.Summary:Writingsteps:1.审题(analyze)2.列提纲(list)3.连接(connect)4.美化(beautify)5.检查(check)（人称，时态，文体，要点，要求）（核心词汇,短语）（将核心词汇,短语整理成句）(恰当运用关联词句,美化文章)（查拼写，要点，标点）1.Winnersneverquitandquittersneverwin.2.Beconfident.3.Practicemakesbetter.Homework假设你校英语报EnglishStar为学生开设了一个专栏：谈谈你的一个坏习惯。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向报社投稿。(1)你的坏习惯是什么?