特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第6练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第6练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·贵州联考)ItwaslateNovember.Thetreesthathadbeencoveredwithlovely__1__(leaf)justafewweeksearlierwerenowbarebranches.Thesunhadbecomescarceasthedarknightsbecame__2__(long).Todaythesunwastotallygone.Thecoldwind__3__(blow)andthechillyrainwasfalling__4__(steady).Iwasdrivingslowlybehindatractorwhichwasthrowinguphugewavesofwateronmycar.Inadditiontothisstorm,__5__seemedasifmylifewashavingalotofbadweather,too.Myclothesdryerhaddiedthedaybeforeandorderinganewonehadtakenanotherbigbiteoutofmy__6__(save).Ihadbeenworkinghard,butdidn'tearnmuch.Ialwayshadjustenough__7__(make)bothendsmeet.AsIdrovealong,though,Iwasn'tcryingorworrying.__8__Iwassingingalongtooneofmyfavoritesongsontheradio.Iwasusingthislatestproblemtoremind__9__(I)thatmyrealrichesweren'tinmybankaccountbutinmyheartandsoul.Ihavebenefitedmuchfrommylifelesson__10__itdoesn'tmatterwhatlifegivestoyou.Whatmattersiswhatyougivetolife.,锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第6个题空考查名词。本题容易出错是因为有些考生不熟悉saving作“储蓄金；存款”时常用复数。所以本题可能会被误填成saving。微点：英语中有些名词实际上常以复数形式出现，如earnings(工资)，belongings(所有物)，surroundings(周围环境)，sightings(发现)，diggings(发掘物)，sweepings(垃圾)，findings(调查结果)，lodgings(房间)等，这些词作主语时，谓语动词常用复数。二、短文改错(2023·西安模拟)Attheageof10,Ibegintochatwithforeigners.Atfirst,Iwasveryshy,andgraduallywithforeigners'help,Ibecamemoreandmoreconfidence.Thefollowingyear,IwenttoLintongwithtwoforeignersasourguide.WevisitedtheTerra-CottaWarriorsMuseumwherewetooklotsofphotos,enjoyingthebeautifulscenery.Afterthat,theywenttobuysouvenir.Thesellerscouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thoughitwaslittlehardforme,Itriedmybesttotranslatetheirwordsonbothsides.Finally,thetwoforeignersaccompanyingbymeboughtsatisfactorygoods.Thisunforgettableexperiencemademetounderstandwhere“Practicemakesperfect.”means.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少连词错误有时在某一句中很难被发现。所以，改错时，针对有连词的句子，要关注句子成分之间或者分句之间的逻辑关系。本文中有一句中的连词有错误，请认真研读并找出。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：命题短文)(2023·许昌二模)假定你是李华，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“Faceuptodifficultiesbravely”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1．你的理解；2.举例说明。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升FaceuptodifficultiesbravelyIndailylife,it'sunavoidableforustomeetwithdifficultsituations.Weareexpectedtofacechallengesanddifficultiesinlifewithcourageanddeterminationwhilemaintainingapositiveoutlook①.Whenmygrandfatherwasdiagnosedwithcancer,myfamilywasextremelyupsetandshocked.However,insteadofgivingup,hefacedhisillnessbravelyandunderwenttreatmentwithapositiveattitude.Healsostartedablogtosharehisexperiencewithothers,inspiringmanyalongtheway②.Inconclusion,facingdifficultieswithcourageanddetermination③isessentialforpersonalgrowthandsuccess.Byfacingdifficultsituationsbravely,wecantrulyunderstandourownstrengthandgainconfidence.学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙写作文体属于说明文。短文共有三段，段落之间层次清晰，结构完整。第一段简要介绍了写作背景；第二段以例证的方式阐述了应怎样面对困难；第三段总结了作者对在生活中要勇敢面对困难的看法和建议。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文以一般现在时为主，还穿插使用了一般过去时来叙述过去的事件。2．文章使用了一些高级词汇，使表达更加地道、准确、自然，如maintaining，extremely，underwent，essential等；还使用了一些短语，如givingup,inconclusion等，为文章增色。3．文章使用了一些高级句式，充分彰显了作者的语言驾驭能力。状语从句的省略结构(如①句)、非谓语动词作状语(如②句)、动名词短语作主语(如③句)。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)FaceuptodifficultiesbravelyItisnormalforustomeetwithdifficultsituationsinourdailylife.[Wehopetofacechallengesinlifewithcouragewhilewekeepapositiveoutlook.①]Whenmybrotherwasfailedthecollegeentranceexamination,myfamilywasverysadandshock.However,hedidn'tgiveupandfacedthesituationbravely.[Healsowroteanarticletosharehisexperiencewithotherandinspiredmanypeople.②][Atlast,itisessentialtofacedifficultiesbravelyforpersonalgrowthandsuccess.③]Moreimportantly,wecanunderstandourownadvantagesandgainconfidence.(一)3个错误要避免1．语态误用：第三句中wasfailed→failed2．形容词误用：第三句中shock→shocked3．代词误用：第五句中other→others(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．hope→are_expected2.very→extremely3．Atlast→To_sum_up(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用状语从句的省略结构改写①句We_are_expected_to_face_challenges_in_life_with_courage_while_keeping_a_positive_outlook.2．用现在分词短语作状语改写②句He_also_wrote_an_article_to_share_his_experience_with_others,_inspiring_many_people.3．用主语从句改写③句Tosumup,itisessentialthatweshouldfacedifficultiesbravelyforpersonalgrowthandsuccess.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者开车时遇到糟糕的天气，联想到自己糟糕的生活，作者意识到生活给你什么并不重要，重要的是你给生活什么。1．leaves考查名词。分析句子可知，空格处应填入名词作宾语。根据常识可知，树上的树叶应不止一片，应用复数形式。故填leaves。2．longer考查形容词的比较级。随着冬天的来临，夜晚应变得“更长”了，故本空应用比较级longer。3．wasblowing考查动词的时态和主谓一致。本句为并列结构，根据句中“wasfalling”可知，此处应使用过去进行时；主语Thecoldwind为单数，故填wasblowing。4．steadily考查副词。应用副词修饰前面的动词falling。故填steadily。5．it考查代词。应用代词it在句中作形式主语。故填it。6．savings考查名词。分析句子可知，空格处应填入名词作宾语。根据句意可知，此处指“储蓄款；存款；积蓄”，应用名词savings。7．tomake考查动词不定式。分析句子可知，空格处应填入非谓语动词作状语。根据句意可知，此处应用动词不定式作目的状语。故填tomake。8．Instead考查副词。根据句意可知，此处应用副词表示“相反”。故填Instead。9．myself考查