读后续写Christmas-gift-课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写Requirements:1.词数＞150words(各段空出不得超过一行)；2.注意两段首句的提示词，注意4大衔接处；3.情景和谐，主题明确，使用＞5高级句式。4.字迹清楚，干净，美观。1ItwasacoldDecember,atthetailendoftheGreatDepression,andthingsweretough.Mumhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherowninoursmallcommunity.wereliedonsocialassistancetokeepusclothed,andalthoughourclothesweresecondhand,wethoughttheywerebeautiful.2Lookingback,IrealizedwhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuck(塞)anewpieceofcardboardinourshoesbecauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,MumwouldhaveFrenchtoastreadyforus.Ourrentwas$25amonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldmoveoutrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary.3Theholidayswerefastapproaching,andwewereentitledto(有资格获得)$25forChristmasfromsocialservices.ItwasfourdaysbeforeChristmas.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewasgoingtousethemoneytopayourbackrent.Thatwaywe’dhavearoofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ThenshetoldusthattherewouldbenoChristmasgifts.4WhatMomdidn’tknowwasthatIhadbeensellingChristmastrees,sweepingsnowanddoingpart-timejobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots—bootsthatweren’tpatched(缝补);bootswithnocardboardinit.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inch,Top-Genuine,PierreParisboots,andtheycost$23.5ThebigdayforgettingmybootscameonChristmasEveafternoon.IwasveryexcitedasIhurrieduptheshoppingcenterforit.Ontheway,Inoticedagrocerystore(杂货店).6

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace..7

Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor..Paras.1-2background——poorParas.3-4conflict/problem——boots?v.schristmaslightsanddecorations?Paras.5-6-7WhatdidIdoonChristmasEveafternoon?—buywhat?why?problem?solution!theme!plot情节Paragraph1:

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporch(门廊；门厅)andknockedonthedoor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Scene3:WhatdecisiondidImake?Scene1:WhatdidIsee?Scene2:HowdidIfeelatthattime?Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandaction

Scene2:

seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandaction

Scene3:aninteractionbetweenmumandme——morallessonScene1:？Paragraph1:

Suddenly,apaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor’seye._____________________________Scene1:Taylor’reaction(beforedrawing)句型1（通用版）：

S＋V＋O,

,

.1.非谓语

（-ing/-ed）2.独立主格

（n.＋-ing/-ed/-todo/adj./adv./介词短语）3.with＋O＋OC宾补（-ing/-ed/-todo/adj./adv./介词短语）4.so...that/asif...;like/as...as...5.adj.＋adj.＊Delightedandthrilled,“That’sit,”sheexclaimed,

(with)hereyestwinklingwithexcitement,

soexcitedasifshewerefloatingintheoceanofhappiness.＊“That’sit,”sheexclaimed,

hereyestwinklingwithexcitement,soexcitedasifshewerefloatingintheoceanofhappiness.Language语言Paragraph1TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene1WhatdidIsee?+WhatdidIrealize?看到某物的句式1：倒装（表方位的副词短语位于句首倒装）回顾：Inthechairwassittingmybosswithaserious/cold/hardenedface,gazingatmelongandhard.杂货店里各种各样的生活必需品琳琅满目，吸引着我走进去。1.1.1:Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.看到某物的句式2：sbwasgreetedbyasceneof+n./Whatgreetedsb.wasasceneof+n.,——当我走进去的时候，映入我眼帘的是一片令人眼花缭乱的景象——各种各样的必需品令人着迷地陈列着1.1.2:WhenIsteppedinside,Iwasgreetedbyasceneofbedazzlement眼花缭乱——differentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayedfascinatingly迷人的.dazzlinglyadv.耀眼地，炫目地；令人赞叹地意识到什么句式3：强调句就在那时，我意识到在我们昏暗的房子里，我们没有灯，没有装饰品，也没有钱过圣诞节。1.2:ItwasthenthatIrealizedinourdimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Scene2

HowdidIfeelatthattime?一种奇怪的负罪感突然吞没了我2.1.1：Astrangesenseofguiltsuddenlyengulfed吞没；淹没me.内疚和不安像波浪一样涌向我，强烈到我忍不住问自己是否应该买这双靴子。2.1.2：Anupsurgeofguiltandrestlessnesswashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthatIcouldn’thelpaskingmyselfifIshouldbuytheboots.我被内疚所笼罩，内心挣扎，犹豫了很久。2.1.3：Seized/Overwhelmedbyguilt,Istruggledwithinmyself,hesitatingalot.TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.情感的挣扎：

我脑子里还想着皮埃尔·巴黎的靴子，我试图说服自己，至少我们还有钱付欠下的房租。2.2.1：WithPierreParisbootsstillinmymind,Itriedtoconvincemyselfthat

wehavemoneytopayourbackrentatleast.然而，家人在那个寒冷的圣诞节失望的表情一直清晰地萦绕在我的脑海里。2.3:However,myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingering继续存留/徘徊inmymind

clearly.回顾句式4：Havingspottednothingbutswayingtrees,Alanwasalmostonthevergeofgivingupwhen_______________.在说服自己今晚至少会有法式吐司的时候，就在我快要离开的时候，家人在那个寒冷的圣诞节失望的表情依然清晰地萦绕在我的脑海里。2.2.2:HavingconvincedmyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight,Iwasalmostonthevergeofleavingwhen

myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene3

WhatdecisiondidImake?似乎过了一个世纪，我终于下定了决心，眼睛里充满了决心。3.1:Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolution下定决心

，eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.我买了一只火鸡、火腿、橘子和所有的圣诞装饰品。我花光了辛辛苦苦挣来的每一分钱，回到了家里。3.2.1:Iboughtaturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.Ispenteverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneyandwentbacktomyhouse.TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene3

WhatdecisiondidImake?回顾句式5：UnawareofAlan’spresence,itjumpedhereandthere,enjoyingitselftothefullestasifitwasitsownbackyard.我没有意识到时间在流逝，而是专注于购买我的家人真正需要的东西，把我辛苦赚来的每一分钱都花得淋漓尽致。买完最后一件东西后，我终于走出了商店，手里满满当当——一只火鸡、火腿、橘子和所有的圣诞装饰品。3.2.2:

Unawareof

timetickingaway,Iwasabsorbedinbuyingwhatmyfamilyreallyneeded,spendingeverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneytothefullest.

Afterthelastitemwaspurchased,Ieventuallysteppedoutofthestore,withmyhandsfull——aturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.下水作文：Para.1

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.

Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdispalyeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.

ItwasthenthatIrealizedinour

dimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Anupsurgeofguiltandrestlessnesswashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthat

Icouldn’thelpaskingmyselfifIshouldbuytheboots.Having

convincedmyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight,Iwasalmostonthevergeof

leaving

when

myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolutionandsteppedintothegrocery

store,eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.

Unawareoftimetickingaway,Iwasabsorbedinbuyingwhatmyfamilyreallyneeded,spendingeverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneytothefullest.

Afterthelastitemwaspurchased,Ieventuallysteppedoutofthestore,withmyhandsfull——aturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.para2:Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.

Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandactionScene2:seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandactionScene3:aninteractionbetweenmumandmeScene4:amorallessonpara2:Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandaction

1.心跳加速，我渴望的等待，眼睛盯着门。1-1.Heartflippingimmensely,Iwaitedanxiously,withmyeyesfixedonthedoor.一阵激动的情绪如潮水般向我涌来，如此强烈以至于我不自觉的露出灿烂的笑容。1-2.Anupsurgeofexcitementwashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthatIbrokeintoaradiantgrinunconsciously.3.寒风吹打着（whip)）我的脸，我渴望的等待，我的拳头紧紧地握着(clench).1-3.Chillywindswhippingmyface,Iwaitedanxiously,myfistsclenchedtightly.

过渡句：我瘦弱的母亲出来了。她一打开门，杂货就掉进去了。句式6表方位的副词位于句首倒装Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Scene2:seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandaction(surprise/curious)盯着这些东西（item）她目瞪口呆(dumbfounded).2-1-1.Staringhardattheseitems,shewasdumbfounded.眼睛因好奇而闪闪发光,她盯着这些东西，然后向我投来困惑的目光2-1-2.Eyessparklingwithcuriosity,shestaredhardattheseitemsandthencastaconfusedlookonme.Scene3:theinteractionbetweenmumandme眼泪几乎要溢出我的眼睛，我叫出来（holler）,圣诞快乐，妈妈，真的有圣诞老人TherereallyisaSantaClaus!有点骄傲，我毫无保留的讲了我的挫折与坎坷，思绪回到了那些场景--卖圣诞树和扫雪，在那里我努力工作，pushed我的身体到极限.3-1-1.Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Alittleproud/withalumpinmythroat,Iunfoldedmytwistsandturns,thoughtsflashingbacktoscenes---sellingChristmastreesandsweepingsnow,whereIendeavoredtoworkandpushedmybodytoitslimits.Scene3:theinteractionbetweenmumandme语言看起来没能表达她的情感以至于她紧紧地拥抱我。3-2-1.Wordsseemedtofailtoconveyheremotionssothatsheembracedmetightly.母亲吞了喉咙里的一块肿块，给了我一个巨大拥抱，她脸上掠过一丝微笑。3-2-2.Mumswallowedaswellinglumpinherthroatandgavemeanenormoushug,afaintsmilecrossingherface.

过渡句：欢乐和温暖的气氛笼罩着房间。我打赌我永远不会有这样的满足感如果我那时买了这双PierreParisboots。Anairofjoyandwarmthenvelopedtheroom.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.Scene4:amorallesson那个圣诞节，我学会了感恩，因为这23美元，因为我妈妈为她家庭的毫不保留的爱，因为我对幸福不停止的幸福的追求。4-1.ThatChristmas,Ilearnedtobegrateful,forthe$23,formum’sunreservedloveforherfamily,andformyunstoppablepursuitofhappiness.那个圣诞节见证我的成长和我的转变，从一个自私的男孩到一个有爱和责任心的男人。4-2.ThatChristmaswitnessedmygrowthandtransformation—fromaselfishboytoamanwithloveandresponsibility.那个晚上，我，一个十一岁的男孩，创造了这个最珍贵的圣诞礼物---我的责任心和对家庭的满足。4-3.Thatnight,I,aneleven-year-oldboy,receivedthemostpreciousChristmasgift—myresponsibilityandsatisfactionformyfamily.下水作文：Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Heartflippingimmensely,Iwaitedanxiously,withmyeyesfixedonthedoor.Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Eyessparklingwithcuriosity,shestaredhardattheseitemsandthencastaconfusedlookonme.Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Alittleproud,Iunfoldedmytwistsandturns,thoughtsflashingbacktoscenes---sellingChristmastreesandsweepingsnow,whereIendeavoredtoworkandpushedmybodytoitslimits.Mumswallowedaswellinglumpinherthroatandgavemeanenormoushug,afaintsmilecrossingherface.Anairofjoyandwarmthenvelopedtheroom.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.ThatChristmaswitnessedmygrowthandtransformation—fromaselfishboytoamanwithloveandresponsibility.

Possibleversion:Para.1

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.ItwasthenthatIrealizedinour

dimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Astrangesenseofguiltsuddenly

engulfedme.WithPierreParisbootsstillinmymind,ItriedtoconvincemyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight.However,myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolutionandsteppedintothegrocery

store,eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.Iboughtaturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.Ispenteverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneyandwentbacktomyhouse.Possibleversion:Para.2Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Staringhardattheseitems,shewasdumbfounded.

Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Wordsseemedtofailtoconveyheremotionssothatsheembracedmetightly.Itwaswhenahalf-choking“Thanks”escapedfromhermouththatasenseofachievementsurgedthroughme.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.Ihadalotofexplainingtodoasweunpackedallthefood.Thatnight,I,aneleven-year-oldboy,receivedthemostpreciousChristmasgift—myresponsibilityandsatisfactionformyfamily.

主干句式的丰富性：句式1：倒装（表方位的副词短语位于句首倒装）e.g.:1.Inthechairwassittingmybosswithaserious/cold/hardenedface,gazingatmelongandhard.2.杂货店里各种各样的生活必需品琳琅满目，吸引着我走进去。Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.3.我瘦弱的母亲出来了。她一打开门，杂货就掉进去了。Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.4.农村人自由自在的日子已经过去了。Gonearethedayswhentheycoulddowhattheylikedtodointhecountry.5.Hardly

had

mom

unlockedthedoor

when

thegroceriesfellinside.主干句式的丰富性：看到某物的句式2：sbwasgreetedbyasceneof+n./Whatgreetedsb.wasasceneof+n.,——当我走进去的时候，映入我眼帘的是一片令人眼花缭乱的景象——各种各样的必需品令人着迷地陈列着。WhenIsteppedinside,Iwasgreetedbyasceneofbedazzlement眼花缭乱——differentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayedfascinatingly迷人的.意识到什么句式3：强调句就在那时，我意识到在我们昏暗的房子里，我们没有灯，没有装饰品，也没有钱过圣诞节。ItwasthenthatIrealizedinourdimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.ItwaswhenIspottedthegroceriesthatIrealiz