高三英语教师公开课改错

英语高考专题复习短文改错WarmingupCorrectfollowingwords.IntheotherhandBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeopposedforsthLargequantityofHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressTheaccidentwashappenedInhurryConvincesbsthAtsightofAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblyonfortoquantitiesontheawas∧a∧of∧theequipmentGenerallypossibleWhat’sthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?1.看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对。2.看出句子出错的地方,但无法改正。3.知道改正句子错误的地方,但答案不正确。Anyrules？Anyskills？Howtocorrectit？新版：假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并非只有一处错误。————ObeytherulesofcorrectionIlovecamping.It’smyfavouritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.ForawholeWeek,Isawlovelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.Atnight,Iheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoes’tcostmanytocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoyitsbeauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfultreesandmuch∧toIlovecamping.it’smyfavouritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.ForawholeWeek,Isawlonelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.Atnight,Iheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoes’tcostmanytocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoryitsbeauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfultreesandmuch∧to动词形容词副词动词形容词连词名词副词代词介词近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表动词连词代词介词形容词副词名词冠词2015（全国卷）31112112014(全国卷）31112112013(全国卷）3111121

合计9333543近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表项目年份动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：skills一、动词形2008浙江卷

Lastwintervacation,someofmyclassmatesdecidetotravelwiththeirfriends,whileIchosetotakeapart-timejob.2006安徽卷：Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.decidedwishes2006安徽卷：Youcansitatthedeskandreadthedailynewspapers,magazinesandtheotherbooks,butyouarenotpermittotakethemout.

2006天津卷：Today,IgotaletterthatsaidIhadbeenadmittingtoacollege.

permittedadmitted语态：主要看句子的主语和谓语之间是主动还是被动关系，还要注意语态的构成形式、有些不能使用被动语态的动词以及主动形式表被动的情况。2014全国卷II：Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsof……

2015浙江卷：Inthemorning,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.

looksis2015全国卷I：Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery…

2015陕西卷：Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.to二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式的用法错误、a/an2006浙江卷：YourknowledgesofGreececanhelpthewholeclass.2008浙江卷：Ilearnedfrommyteacherthatanearbycompanywaslookingforstudentswithgoodhandwritingtowriteaddressesonenvelope.

envelopesknowledge2006福建卷：

Ifyouhaveinterestsinit,replytomesoon.学生版：Mostofthestudentsinourclassarenowmakingrapidprogresses2006重庆卷：Insummer,theseaundertheblueskiesisevenmorebeautiful.progressskyinterest2015陕西：Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedon..steps三、还要注意形和副

注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。2007浙江卷：Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.学生版：Weshouldworkhardlytoachieveourgoals.proudhard2006湖北卷：

Ahelpinghandisalwaysstrongerenoughtoliftyouup.2006辽宁卷：

Shewasusualpatientwithherstudentsandnevermadethemdisappointed.strongusually2015浙江：Onthelefthandsideoftheclass,Icaneasyseethefootballfield.

2015陕西卷：Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidedtoaskherforhelp.1系动词后用形容词（如am/is/are/was/were/become/go/smell/feel）2形容词修饰名词，副词修饰动词，形容词。easilybest四、非谓语，细辨别

这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。NMET2003:

SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.2007宁夏卷：LiMengcameseemeeveryday.talking∧to2008浙江卷：

ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetsofarthisyear.学生版：

Thebigfireburnedhundredsofhouses,madehundredsoffamilieshomeless.makingfound人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词oneself的使用．３．人称代词的主格和宾格．４．不定代词的使用．５．Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的区别．五、代词格，细领悟（2007全国I）

Iwasonlyaboutsixwhenheheldhishandouttome.Itookitinmeandwewalked.mine2007陕西：

JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!

myself学生版：Wemusttryour’sbesttoovercomealldifficultiestosolvethisparticularproblems.

ourour2015浙江Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.2014陕西…jumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.itNoneNone

主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。catchasightoflosetheheartinhurryinSundayafternoonexpressussuchmanypeopleaon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住

2007浙江卷：SoIdidn’tlosemyheartandkeptrunning.学生版：Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,Mylifechanged.2006福建卷：

Itissoabeautifulplace!∨ofsuch七、句子成分多分析

不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET2004:Idon’tknowthattheydon’t

liketotalkwithme.2007天津卷：Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidn’ttakemy

badgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but…whywho/that八、逻辑错误须关注

与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。2006四川卷：Thatnight，wesatdowntowhattheythoughtwouldbeapleasant,uninterruptedmeals.学生版:

Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.wetheir常考的错误形式有：连词but，and，or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。2oo7全国II：Imeanttowritelongletterandtell