新教材高中英语UNIT5MUSICSectionⅣ写作指导学案新人教版

SectionⅣ写作指导写作方法指导写一篇与音乐有关的演讲稿写作储备阅读教材P56演讲稿，提炼演讲稿的写作特点。Ⅰ.演讲稿的特点演讲稿属于特殊的说明文或议论文的范畴。Ⅱ.演讲稿的架构Ⅲ.演讲稿的语言特点1．时态上多用一般现在时和一般过去时；2．语言符合口语的特点，要有说服力，真实、可信，能够引起听众的共鸣。Ⅳ.演讲稿的常用词汇1．deliveraspeech发表演讲4．makeadifferencetoone'slife对某人的生活产生影响5．what'smore此外，另外Ⅴ.演讲稿的常用句型1．Goodafternoon!I'mverygladtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.下午好！我很高兴站在这里给你们作简短的演讲。2．Helloeveryone,It'sagreathonourtobeheretosharesomethingwithyou.大家好，很荣幸能在这里和你们分享一些东西。3．Today,mytopicismusic.今天我(演讲)的主题是音乐。4．Ihopemyspeechtodaywillgiveyousomethinginyourfuturelife.我希望我今天的演讲能给你未来的生活带来一些启示。5．Thankyouforyourpresent/attention!感谢你的到来/倾听！典例剖析假设你是李华，学校邀请你本周三下午在全校大会上给同学们发表演讲。演讲的内容是音乐如何改变你的生活。请你根据自身的经历写一篇演讲稿。注意：词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。审题谋篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的开始，成功的一半体裁演讲稿人称第一人称时态一般过去时框架首段：称呼、自我介绍、点题中段：音乐改变你的生活的具体内容尾段：希望、祝愿Ⅱ.定要点、关键词及动词时态→打造一篇要点全面；用词准确得体；时态多样的极优作文要点一：很荣幸被邀请到这里发表一篇关于音乐如何改变了我的生活的演讲。It's_a_great_honour_to_be_invited_here_to_deliver_a_speech_about_how_music_changed_my_life.要点二：每次我被要求在课堂上回答问题时，我都感到非常紧张，不能流利地说话。Every_time_I_was_asked_to_answer_questions_in_class,_I_felt_very_nervous_and_couldn't_speak_fluently.要点三：我很沮丧，不知道该如何处理这种情况。I_was_discouraged_and_didn't_know_how_I_could_deal_with_the_situation.要点四：音乐激发了我的自信。Music_inspired_me_with_confidence.要点五：我心想“我有音乐天赋，为什么不勇敢地在公众面前唱呢？”I_thought_to_myself_“I_had_a_talent_for_music._Why_not_sing_it_in_public_bravely？”要点六：我经常在教室里或其他数百名同学面前唱歌。I_often_sang_songs_in_my_classroom_or_in_front_of_hundreds_of_other_schoolmates.要点七：上学期我参加了学校的音乐会，并因精彩的表演而获奖。Last_term_I_took_part_in_a_school_concert_and_was_awarded_a_prize_for_my_wonderful_performances.要点八：音乐给了我信心和成就感。Music_gave_me_confidence_and_a_sense_of_achievement.要点九：我认为我应该把成功归功于音乐。I_think_I_should_owe_my_success_to_music.要点十：我希望我们都能把音乐当成朋友。它能治愈你的弱点。I_hope_all_of_us_will_make_music_our_friend._It_can_cure_you_of_your_weaknesses.Ⅲ.词汇、句式升级→创造极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用so...that...改写要点二Every_time_I_was_asked_to_answer_questions_in_class,_I_felt_so_nervous_that_I_couldn't_speak_fluently.升级句式二：用疑问词＋todo形式改写要点三I_was_discouraged_and_didn't_know_how_to_deal_with_the_situation.升级句式三：用强调结构改写要点四It_was_music_that_inspired_me_with_confidence.升级句式四：用适当的连词把要点五中引号里的内容改写成一句话I_thought_to_myself_“Now_that_I_had_a_talent_for_music,_why_not_sing_it_in_public_bravely？”升级句式五：把要点十改写成定语从句I_hope_all_of_us_will_make_music_our_friend_who_can_cure_you_of_your_weaknesses.Ⅳ.组建极优作文→水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉Goodmorningeveryone，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!参考范文：Good_morning_everyone,_IamLiHua.It'sagreathonourtobeinvitedheretodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedmylife.OnceIwasashygirl.EverytimeIwasaskedtoanswerquestionsinclass,IfeltsonervousthatIcouldn'tspeakfluently.SoIwasdiscouragedanddidn'tknowhowtodealwiththesituation.Itwasmusicthatinspiredmewithconfidence.Ithoughttomyself“NowthatIhadatalentformusic,whynotsingitinpublicbravely？”ThereforeIencouragedmyselftoexpresswithmusic.Ioftensangsongsinmyclassroomorinfrontofhundredsofotherschoolmates.LasttermItookpartinaschoolconcertandwasawardedaprizeformywonderfulperformances.Musicgavemeconfidenceandasenseofachievement.Inaddition,musicgavemestrengthandhelpedmegothroughhardtimes.Gradually,Iovercamemyshyness.IthinkIshouldowemysuccesstomusic.Ihopeallofuswillmakemusicourfriendwhocancureyouofyourweaknesses.Ihopeeveryoneliveahappyandfulllife.Thank_you!eq\o(\s\up7(),\s\do5(J))即学即练假设你是“大衣哥”朱之文的好朋友李华，请你作一个有关音乐改变朱之文命运的演讲报告。要点：1．朱之文1969年出生于山东菏泽单县的一个贫困家庭；2．受到的教育很少，但是从小就对唱歌感兴趣，从没有放弃成为歌唱家的梦想；3．经常在树林、河边或田地里练习唱歌；4．2011年参加《我是大明星》荣获冠军，从此出名。2012年参加中央电视台春节联欢晚会。注意：词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Ladiesandgentlemen,IamLiHua,afriendof“BrotherCoat”—ZhuZhiwen.Iammorethangladtodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedhislife.Borninapoorfamilyin1969,ZhuZhiwenhardlyreceivedanyformalschooleducation.However,heisverycrazyaboutmusicandnevergivesuphisdreamofbecomingasinger.Heisalwayspracticingsinginginthelocalwoods,onthebankofriversorinthefields.Believeitornot,hensandgeeseinhisyardbecomehisfaithfulfans.Hisdeterminationandloveformusicpaidoff.Hegainedchamp