考研英语写作与完型填空写作（1-4部分）

写作

第一部分写作的要求、评分标准及评卷实例

（-）短文写作的要求

《硕士研究生英语入学考试大纲》规定：英语短文写作，要求考

生根据提示信息写出一篇约200个单词的短文（不包括试题中所给

的短文开头的第一句话）。出题方式有：命题作文、看图作文、情景

作文或段首句作文。短文必须根据考题中所给的题目和提纲所规定的

范围来写。主要测试考生综合运用英语（包括词汇、语法、逻辑等）

的能力。

（-）评分标准

本题采用总体评分法，通篇分档计分，即从内容和语言两个方

面进行综合评判。语言上的错误，要视其是否影响清楚地表达思想，

或成为理解上的障碍，来判来定其严重程度。“样卷”是评分标准的

具体化。每一分数段的中间分，各有样卷两份。阅卷员要根据第五项

的评分标准，对照“样卷”进行评分（不得给0.5分）。评分要实事

求是，严肃认真，标准始终统一，要避免前紧后松，还应避免趋中现

象。作文的字数明显不足者，结合其内容和语言适当扣分。

1999年评分标准

15——13分：内容切题，包括图中说明"effect"的有关信息；

清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确，文

章长度符合要求。

12——10分：内容切题，包括图中说明"effect"的有关信息，

比较清楚地表达其内涵；文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构

和用词无重大错误，文章长度符合要求。

9分——7分：内容切题，基本包括图中说明"effect"的有关信

息；基本清楚地表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有少量错误，文章长度

符合要求。

6分——4分：内容基本切题，基本表达图中信息，语句可以理

解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误，文章长度基本符合要求。

3分——1分：基本按图写作，但只有少数句子可理解。

0分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。

1998年评分标准

本题以通篇文档计分，计分标准如下：

15——13分：内容切题，包括图画的全部信息；清楚表达其内

涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要

求。

12——10分：内容切题，包括图画的全部信息；比较清楚地表

达其内涵，文字基本连贯，句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大

错误，文章长度符合要求。

9——7分：内容切题，基本包括图画的信息；基本清楚地表达

其内涵，句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。

6——4分：基本表达图画信息，语句可以理解，但有较多的句

子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。

3——1分：基本按图画写作，但只有少数句子可理解。

0分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。

长度计分标准

120——150词：扣2分

90——120词：扣5分

90词以下：最高分不超过6分

1997年评分标准

各档评分标准如下：

15分——13分：内容符合要求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的

预测理由，数字表达正确，语言流畅，句式变化多样，用词面宽，虽

有个别不妥之处，仍表明作者语言基本功较好，表达能力较强，长度

符合要求。

12分——10分：内容符合要求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的

预测及理由，数字表达正确，思想表达清楚，文字连贯，句式变化较

多，结构与用词有少量一般性错误，长度符合要求。

9分——7分：内容符合要求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的预

测及理由，表达基本清楚，但结构与用词错误较多，数字表达有误，

长度符合要求。

6分——4分：内容基本符合要求，语句尚可理解，但结构与用

词错误多，有些是严重错误数字表达错误，长度符合要求。

3分——1分：内容与本题要求部分有关，除事先备好但与要求

不符的语句外，结构与用词错误多且严重，词不达意，条理不清，不

成篇章，数字表达混乱。

0分：语句几乎无一正确，数字表达混舌L,长度不合要求。套用

事先备好的文章，但文不对联题，不能给分。

1991——1996年评分标准

本题以通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：总分15分

15——13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点表达清楚，文字

连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。

12——10分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文

字基本连贯；句式有一些变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。

9——7分：内容切题，基本包括文章的要点；表达基本清楚，

句子结构和用词有少量错误。

6——4分：内容基本切题，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结

构和用词错误。

3—1分：基本按题意写作，但只有少数句子可以理解。

0分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。

长度计分标准：

91——100词：扣1分

81——91词：扣2.5分

71——80词：扣4分

61——70词：扣6分

60词以下：扣8分

（三）评卷实例（1999年）

Directions:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessay

inatleast150words.

B.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEET

II.

C.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

1.effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulation

onitswildlife

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

THEUPSANDDOWNSOFPOPULATIONGROWTH

样卷1.得分14分

Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,

withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberof

specieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsome

specieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.

Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?Ithinkthereare

severalpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowth

ofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewhere

somewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecies

havetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycan

notadapttothenewevironmentanddie.Second,

althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,

somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwild

animalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,

withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalance

andtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.The

deforestrationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.So

someofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.

Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesome

suggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawsto

preventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,the

governmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovenatureand

protectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepractical

actionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.

样卷2.得分11分

Therearetwographsaboutthechangesofpopulation

andwildlifeintheU.S.Asisseeninthegraphs,withthe

risingofpopulation,thenumberofextinctedspecies

increased.Obviously,thereisastrongeffectofpopulation

overthewildlifeinthiscountry.

Whydoesishappen?Icansaytherearemany

reasons.First,mancontinuedtohuntanimalsforfood

andmoneyandmanyvaluablespecieswerekilled.Second,

wildlifelosttheirsurvivingspace,bacausemanexpanded

theirindustryatarapidspeed.Morelandwasneededfor

thisdevelopmentAsaresult,wildlifehasnoplacetolive.

Thelastreasonisthattheenvironmentforwildlifehas

beenpolluted,andmanyspeciesdied.

Inmyopinion,weshouldeducatepeopletolovethe

wildanimals,nottokillandeatthem.Wealsoneedto

providewildlifewithagoodlivingconditions.Wemust

alsolaydownalawtoprotectthewildanimals.

得卷3.得分8分

Asisshowninthetable,thenumberofpeople

increasedfromlessthanonemillionin1800to250millon

in1990inU.S.Accordingtothefiguresintable,wealso

canseethattherehasbeenasharpdiclineinthewildlife

species.It'sclearthatthecountry'sgrowingpopulation

haveaharmfuleffectonwildlife.

ThepossiblereasonIthinkareasfollows:Forthefirst

place,thepopulationgrowthmakestheroomofthe

wildlife.Secondly,thepollutioncausingofpeoplegetsrid

oflargenumberofwildlife.Maybetherearesomeother

reasontoshowthewildlifedowns,butpeoplegenerally

believethattheabovereasonarecommonacceptable.

Fromtheabove,wecanseethatitisurgentto

protectthewildlife.Inmyopinion,weaskthe

govenmentstotakemeasurestokeepthepopulation

growthundercontrolling,theotherpolicythatistowork

onnewregulationsforwildlife,themanwhogetridofthe

wildlifeshouldbepunished.I'msuremyopinionisboth

soundedandgrounded.

样卷4.得分5分

Accordingtothegraphsgivenbythetable.Theare

showntheeffectofthecountry'sgrowinghuman

populationonitswildlife.Thenumberofpeoplehavebeen

ontherisefrom1800to1980.Butthenumberofspecies

hadbeenontherisefrom1600to1900,andthespecies

haddiedoutsince1900.

ThereareIthinksomereasonsfortheupsanddowns

ofpopulationgrowth.Onthefirstplace,asapeoplewith

thedevelopmentofsociety,thestandardofliving

conditionscontinuestoimprovement.Thebirthratesis

increcasedandthedeathratesisatthedeclined.

Secondlythespecies,ontheotherhand,arelivedonthe

ruralareas.Theirconditionsofliveswereslowandthey

wereabletoprotectthemselves.Sospeciesisdecrease.

AsfarasIconcern,Isuggestthatwedidourbestto

protectwildlife.Thegovernmentshouldmakeeffective

measurestoprotectwildlife.Everyoneshouldeducatedto

propectwildlife.

样卷5.得分2分

Fromtables,wecanseethatthecountry'sgrowing

humanpopulationonitswildlife.Itrise250from1800to

1900.Ithink,thereatleasttworeasons.Foronething,

somepeoplewanttoreturnthenation.Theyfreethemself

fromhardworks.Foranother,somepeopleloverthe

wildlife.People'slifeleverhasrisenfastly.Onthesecond

table,itisclearthattherisenratefasterfrom1800to

1900thanfrom1600to1800.

But,therearedegened.Firstly,therearenotsecured.

Theremanyharmfulthingsinthewild.Secondly,thelead

totrafficintheweekend.Beacausemostlypeopleare

freedinthesametime.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthatpeopleshould

paidmuchattentiontothewildlifeprotection.

样卷6.得分0分

Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthebarcharts,it

tookfromthebeginningofhumanlifetotheyear1830for

thepopulationoftheearthtoreachonebillion.That

representsatimespanofatleasttwomillionyears.Then

theworldpopulationincreasedrapidly,addinguptotwo

billionin1930.Thenextbillionwasaddedby1960,only

thirtyyears.Fromthenontheglobalpopulationwason

therise,amountingto4billionin1975,whichisanother

billionpeopleinonly15years.

Thereareatleasttworeasons,Ithink,forthesharp

increaseinworldpopulation.Inthefirstplace,thebirth

rateiscontinuouslyclimbinginmanycountries,especially

indevelopingcountries.Generallyspeaking,peoplethere

holdtheopinionthatchildrendon'tcostmuchandwhen

theygetoldenoughtoworktheywillbringinmoneyand

thatwhenparentsareold,theywilltakecareofthem.

Secondly,thedeathrateimostdevelopedcountries

declinessteadilybecausepeople'sstandardsoflivingare

raisedandhealthcareimproves.

Inmayopinion,thechiefreasonforthepopulation

growthisnotsomuchariseinbirthratesasafallin

deathratesasresultofimprovementsinmedicalcare.

第二部分2002年写作真题

studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwritean

essayentitled"Cultures--NationalandInternational".

Intheessayyoushould

1)describlethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,and

2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWER

SHEEF2.(20points)

第三部分2001年写作考题评分标准及样卷

76.Directions:

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herown

understandingofit.

Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueina

newspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto

1)showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaning

ofthepicturebelow,

2)giveaspecificexample,and

3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshow

love.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET

2.(20points)

2001年作文范文

Whenweusetheworld"love"wedonotsimply

meananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,which

isaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelow

illustratestherealmaningoflove,bystressingthefact

thatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusno

matterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,

throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshave

regardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.

Asanexampleofthepoweroflove,weshould

rememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalities

respondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasters

everyyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowby

internationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonot

hesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan--beitmoneyor

goods--tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,

theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.

Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelp

peoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshould

alwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoare

introuble,nomatterwhethertheyarefarmilymembers

orcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomake

theworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,the

darkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightly

thelampofloveshines.

样卷的评分和评语

Sampie1,Sampie2

给分：（17—20分）

评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；文章通顺，语言

流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本

功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。

Sampie3,Sampie4

给分：（13—16分）

评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚，

文字连贯；句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误；长度符合

要求。

Sampie5,Sampie6

给分：（9—12分）

评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚；

但结构与用词错误较多，有少数是严重错误；长度符合要求。

Sampie7,Sampie8

给分：（5—8分）

评语：内容切题，包括题中所列要点；语句尚可理解，但结构与用词

错误多；有些是严重错误；长度基本符合要求。

Sampie9,Sampie10

给分：（1—4分）

评语：与题意勉强有关，但条理不清，不成篇章；语句错误多且严重;

词不达意。

（注:文章长度低于180词扣1分，低于170分扣2分,依次类推。）

（1）

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest.Itisoftheutmostimportancetothe

humanbeings,Everybodynotonlyneedslove,butalso

shouldgivelove.

Asisdescribedinthepicture,"loveisalampwhichis

brighterindarkerplaces."Thisisindeedtrue.Peoplein

darkerplacesneedmorelightthanordinarypeople.Maye

evenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlife

andprogress.Maybejustathreadoflightwillcallforth

theirstrengthandcouragetostepoutoftheirdifficulties.

Forinstancewhensomeoneisstarvingtodeath,just

alittlefoodandwaterfromyoumaysavehislife.Or

whenalittlegirlinapoorruralareadropsoutofschool

becauseofpoverty,justasmallsurnofmoneyfromyou

maysupporthertofinishherschoolingandchangeher

life,youhavegivenlovewhichislikealampinadark

placewherelightismostneeded.

Sotosumup,weshouldofferourhelptoallwhoare

inneed.Weexpecttogetlovefromothersandwealso

givelovetootherssowhenyouseesomeoneindifficulty

orindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogive

yourlovetohim.Ibelievethentheralationshipbetween

peoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetter

placeforustolivein.(20分)

(2)

Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichis

mosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalso

inothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountries,speak

differentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontous

all.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferent

peopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshould

givemorethoughtto.

Asshowninthepicture,loveislikealampwhich

shinesbrightestindarkplaces.Thistellsusasimpletruth:

Loveislikaalamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismost

needed.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostin

thestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobody

seemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnot

verygoodandIamashyperson,Ithougthsheneeded

helpverymuch.Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetold

meshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherhotel.

Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuch

becausemyhelpwasneededverymuch.Myhelpwaslike

alampinadarkplace.

Ithinkweallshouldbelikealampinadarkplace,

showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,evento

strangers.Inthiswaywecanmakethisworlda

harmoniousandpeacefulworld.(18分)

(3)

Isawapicturerecentlyinyournewspaper.Thereisa

smalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,which

issmiling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itwillbe

brightestinthedarkestplace."Ithinkitshowsusavivid

picture:Whereandwhoneedlive,loveisthenoblest

feeling.SoIbelievethatweshouldgiveourlovetothose

whoareinneed.Ifeveryonecangivehislovetowhomin

need,thentheworldwillbefilledwithlove.

Forexample,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsof

pupils,whocan'taffordtoattendschool.Someofthem

neverattendschool.Theyareunfortunate,butnowthere

aremanywarm-heartedpeoplewhogivehelptothe

pupils.Ofcourse,wecanalsoshowourloveinmany

otherways.Forinstance.Asafriend,weshouldhelpour

friendswhentheyareintrouble.Thereisasaying:A

friendinneedisafriendindeed.Asayoungman,we

shouldrespecttheolder.Whenwewalkonthestreet,we

canhelptheblindoroldpeopleandchildrentocrossthe

road.

Inaword,Therearemanywaystoshowourlove.

Thepeopleallovertheworldshouldloveandrespecteach

other.Thebestwaytoshowourloveistohelpothers

whentheyareindifficulities.(16分)

(4)

Everyonemayagreethatamongalltheworthy

feelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.But

peoplehavedifferentunderstandingofit.Ascanbeseen

fromthepicture,thereisonepointofview.Itsaysthat

loveislikealamp,whichisbrighterwhenthedarkis

heavier.Thismeansthatloveshouldbegiventowhereit

ismostneeded.Iagreewiththispointofview.

Takemyexperienceforaexample.Beingpoor,Ihave

todosomepart-timejobstosupportmystudyinBeijing.

Ialwaysfeellovefromotherfriendsandfamilieswhen

theyhelpmeeitherinmaterialorinspiritualaspects.I

lovethemandwanttogivemyhelptootherpeopleatthe

sametime.Butsomeofmyclassmatestaketheirparents'

helpforgranted.

Theynevertrytosupportthembyworkingonthe

side.Theyhavenoideaofdifficultiesinone'slife.

Therefore,theydon'trealizethevalueoflove.

Asforthebestwaytoshowlove,Ithink,firstofall,

everyoneshouldbecouragedandrequiredtotrytobe

self-reliant.Secondly,whenoneisintrouble,others

shouldhelphim.Finallyweshouldeducatepeopleto

appreciatehelpfromotherpeople.Onlyinthiswaycan

oursocietybecomeabighappyfamily.(14分)

(5)

Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlythat

loveislikealampandthedarkertheenvironmentis,the

brighterloveis.Anditisnodenyingthatamongallthe

worthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisthenoblest.Actually,

becauseoflove,manypeopleintroublegethelpand

encourage,sotheywilltrytheirbesttoovertakethe

difficultyandlookforwardtoabetterfuture.What'smore,

whenothersareintrouble,theytakehelpingthemfor

granted.Therefore,lovewillbefoundallovertheworld.

Severalyearsago,someareassufferdisasterbecause

ofheavyrain.ThePLAhelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies.

Thisyear,Taiwanalsosufferdisasterbecauseoftheearth

quake.Manypeopleinourcountrydoourbesttohelp

them.

Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasuretospreadthe

love.Foronething,weshouldencouragepeoplewhohave

loveandarehappytohelpothers.Foranother,weshould

enhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitfor

allofthissociety.AlsoImakesurethatbythisway,we

haveabrighterfuture.(12分)

(6)

Inthepicturebelow,inthefulldarksituation,alittle

ofsparkenlightensthedark.Thenaivesparksmilesso

sweet.Itseemstobesaying,asthecaptioninthepicture

reads,Iamalightoflove,themoredarkwhereIam,the

moreenlighten.

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest.Asamatteroffact,allofussurvive

inaloveworld.Weofferlove,moreimportant,weneed

love.Iamahardworkingstudentthatisspecializedin

ComputerScienceandApplication.Onceatime,Ilostmy

mindaccidentallyasaresultIdroppeddownfromthe

downstairs,badlyinjured.Butformyroomates'helpI

couldn'tliveupnotonlyinphysicsbutalsoinspirits.I

thankthemgenuinly.WhatIaccomplishedtodayparty

attributetoallofthemgivingmeahandtomyschool

work.IhopeIcanliveuptomyselfaswellasmy

roommates.

AsfarasIamconcerned,loveshouldbeshowedby

twomeansasfollow.Atthefirstplace,weshouldkeepa

criticaleyeonothers'loveshowedtous.Ofcourse,most

oftheloveisgoodforus,nevertheless,somedoesharm

tous,suchashelpingtocheatinginexams.Thelastbut

notheleast,weshouldshowloveheartstothoseneeding

them.Asweknow,HopeProjectisthelargestloveproject

inourcountry,weshouldpayhighlyattentiononitrather

thanneglect.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatethe

awarenesstohelpothersinourdailylife.Let'sholdour

handstobuildourcountryfilledinlovehearts.（10分）

⑺

Thispicturetellsusarealitythatlovecanbringup

lightingandlightwillmakeeverywherebright.Although

thelightisweak,itplaysagreateffectwhichwillmake

peoplemorefirmlythanbefore.

WhenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentwereboth

outofemployee.MyparentfeltdisappointedandIwas

greatlyworriedmyfuture.Ourlifebecameveryterrible,I

evendicidedtosuicide.Ourneighbourlearntaboutmy

family'sconidition,andtheybegantohelpus.Theylenta

fewmoneytomyparentandmyparentusethesemoney

toopenashop.Theyhelpmetostudy.Myparentfinally

gotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.

Ithinkthattherearesomewaystoshowlove.You

maygivemoneytothepoorandhelptheolddosome

workingandgiveyourlovetothedisable.Thebestway

showloveisfromheartratherthanfromappearance.By

thiswaythosepeoplewhoacceptedhelpswillfeelwarmly.

Ourworldwillbrightifeveryoneshowlove.(8分)

(8)

Thepictureimplythatloveisveryimportanttothe

needy.Lovelikealampwhichisbrighterinthedarker

place.Let'shavenaexample.Whenaperson,whois

aroundus,hasaseriousillandneedasummoneytopay

forthemedicalfeebutheorhisfamilycan'taffortit,well

willmakeoureffortstohelphim.Itisclearthatloveis

importanttoeveryone,inparticular,totheneedy.

Itiswellknowntoall,loveisprobablythenoblest

amongalltheworthyfeelingofmankind,buteveryone

hashis/herownunderstandingofit.AsfarasIam

concerned,Ithinkthebestwaytoshowloveisour

suitablehelpwhenothersarefacingwithdifficultyand

needourhelps.Ifwehelpotherswithoutthinking

whetherothersneed,itperhapsdecreaseother's

confidentandatthesametimetakeusintroubles.

Asisknowtoall,everythinghastwosides.Showlove

properlywilltakeeffectivefunction,otherwiseitwilltake

negativefunction.Asaconsequence,weshouldnotonly

havelovebutalsoshowitproperly.（6分）

（9）

Thepictureshowthatloveisalampwhichleada

brightlightandhopewhenoneinvolvedindark.InChina,

wecanseemanystoriesaboutlove,forexample,From

newspaperwecanoftenreadabout"TheProjecthope."

Therearemanypeopledelvatehimselftohelpothers.In

remotecountry,somechildrencan'tgotoschoolbecause

nomoney.However,inotherdistrict,therearemany

peopletoprovidemoneytohelpthesechildren.

Fromthispicture,asmalllightbrightsomearea.We

canreadmuchfromit.Asauniversitystudents,wecan

domuch,dobest.Wecanstudyhardscienceknowledge.

Weshouldimproveourfromallkindofaspect.Aslongas

wedevoteoneselftohelpthosetroublesomeman.（4分）

(10)

Thesymbolicisalight,itwillbemorepowerfulwhen

thecircumstancesismoredark.Everyonehassymbolic

andsymbolicisaverygoodmattertous.Itcomefromus

anditcanhelpus.Thesymbolicisnotonlyafeeling,but

alsoisacharacter.

MrsBingxinisagoodwriterwithsymbolic.Shegave

allshecandotothesociety,includemoney,bookandher

heart.Shetriedherbesttohelpthosepeoplewhoneeds

help.

Weshouldshowourlovetothepeople,furthermore,

weshouldshowourlovebythebestway.Ibelievewe

havetodoisnotonlytheword,butalsoistheaction,not

onlythemoney,butalsotheheart.Ifallofushavegive

oursymbolic,theworldcanchangemorebeautiful.(2分)

第四部分优秀作文范文精选

范文一

最新大纲样题：

Directions:

Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograve

consequences,yetthetobaccocompaniesstillclaimthat

theymakeavalbuablecontributiontotheworldeconomy.

Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwo

viewpoints.

Writeanessaytothenewspaper

1)criticizingtheirviewand

2)justifyyourstand.

Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformation

providedinthepidcturesprintedbelow.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET

世界烟草单产量世界吸咖人口比例

世界人口58亿.

19941995

世界每年吸烟损失

Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarette

smokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobacco

companiesinsistthattheycontributegreatlytotheworld

economybypayingtaxestothegovernmentand

employinghundredsofworkers.

Personally,Ibelievethatcigaretteproductionand

consumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstly,

smokingisresponsibleformanyfataldiseasessuchas

lungcancer,heartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothe

survey,tobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%ofthe

worldpopulation,andamongthem,threemillionpeople

diefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear.Thefact

thattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom

143.64billionpoundsin1994to142billionpoundsin

1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethe

negativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondly,tobacco

consumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asis

indicate!inthepictures,200billionUSdollarsislostdue

tosmokingeachyear.Obviously,thetotallossofmoney

aroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceedsthegaininthe

industry.

Inconclusion,astheeconomicdevelopmentaimsat

makingourlifebetter,wecannotsacrificeourhealthfor

short-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmore

andmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewho

sufferfromsmoking-relatedillnesses,thenotionof

promotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnot

justifable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotal

tobaccoban.

范文二

Directions:

A.Writeanessaythatconveystheinformationinthe

followingchart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoon

accompaniedbyourcomments.

B.Timelimit:40minutes

C.Wordlimit:nolessthan150words

D.YouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWER

SHEET

Qodnng

32.7%

(HK$69447ramicn)

(FK$8691MHG

Thispiechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe

exportsofmanufacturingindustriesinHongKongin1996.

Thefirstthingwenoticeisthatthesearealllight

industries.Theyarealsowhatiscalled"labor-intensive",

meaningthattheyemploylargenumbersofpeople.

Theclothingindustryaccountsforthemostexports一

一32.7percent,worthHK$69.447million.Theelectronics

industryisinsecondplacewith26percentoftheexports,

worthHK$55.067million.Textiles,timepieces,chemicals

andjewelrytogetheronlyaccountforabout18percentof

theexports,buttheyproduceitemsworthatotalofover

HK$50million.

ItseemstomethatHongKong,whichhasasmalll

territoryandfewnaturalresources,hasmadetheright

choiceindevelopingtheseindustries.Theyproduce

mainlyexportgoods,whichbringinmuch-neededforeign

currency.Atthesametime,theyprovideemploymentfor

themaximumnumberofpeople.

范文三

Directions:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteand

essayinatleast150words.

B.Youressaymustbewrittenne