中考英语高分作文秘诀1

中考英语书面表达训练学习目标1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。Revision记叙文的写作要素议论文和说明文要素应用文写作要素记叙文的写作要素：5W1H

WhenWhereWhoWhat开门见山，交待事情的.......HowWhy说明事情的经过，描述原因What总结议论文和说明文要素:2W1HWhat--提出观点（文章的中心句）Why--论述观点（正面和反面或多方面）How—如何做（围绕观点，说明要求）What—总结全文（观点首尾呼应）Revision记叙文的写作要素：5W1H议论文和说明文要素:2W1H应用文写作要素:基于5W1H根据具体要求来确定中考作文高分秘诀1.谋篇布局—篇章结构(三段式)2.化繁为简—降低难度、减少错误3.化简为繁—赋予语言灵气（连接词的使用、感叹句、反意疑问句、被动语态、名言…)4.主谓结构、找主语范文1：在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。

提示：1.扔垃圾2.扫地3.帮助妈妈做饭

4.洗衣服5.为花浇水6.饭后洗碗

要求：语句通畅，语法正确。

不得逐句翻译。谋篇布局——写好篇章结构满分作文（10分）Asweallknow,it’simportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.

Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisalsomyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.

Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即总括又阐明看法）

谋篇布局——写好篇章结构

Middle正文Ending

结尾concludingsentence结论句----对全文的总结和概括。supportingsentences支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论topicsentence主题句

----说出文中的要点、核心问题Beginning开头Goodbeginningishalfdone.1.仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2.开头万能句型：1)....playsanimportantpartinthe...2)Asweallknow,...becomesmoreandmore....3)Aseverybodyknows,...isoneofthemost...in....4)Manypeoplesaythat....ButIdon’tthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe....Makeatopicsentence.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.1、SmokingAsweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdon’tthinkso.Makeatopicsentence.ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdon’tthinkso.IwillneverforgettheSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.2.TheSpringFestivalMakeatopicsentence.Asweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.Manypeoplesayit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdon’tthinkso.3.LearningEnglishMakeatopicsentence.4.Tobeavolunteerforthe26thUniversiade5.ASchoolTripAsweallknow,the26thUniversiadeiscomingsoon.Iwanttobeavolunteerforit.Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinthe26thUniversiade.Iwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek.1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：

Atlast/Finally...最后

Inaword,...总而言之

Inshort,...简言之

Wehopethat···我们希望Let’stryourbestto....Ibelieveifwecan...,...willbe....Whata...!/How...!结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应MakeaconcludingsentenceKeepinghealthyHelpingothersLet’stryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,it’simportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.Ibelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.MakeaconcludingsentenceBeijingTobeagreenconsumerLet’stryourbesttobeagreenconsumer.Inoneword,it’snecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.HowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?范文2：2007年天津市书面表达考题

日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动”启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文.内容感想1.学校师生收看了启动仪式;2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等1.锻炼有利于强健身体;2.运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高.3.每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子.注意:词数80~100个左右.2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯.4.文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.参考词汇：thelaunchingceremony启动仪式buildupone’sbodystrength强身健体Moreeffective效果更好

“Millionsofyoungstudentsnationwidesportssunshine”launchedonApril29,2007.Theteachersandstudentsinourschoolwereorganizedtowatchthelaunchingceremony.Afterthat,allofuswenttotheplayground.Wehaddifferentkindsofsportsforanhour.Sometookpartinrunning,someplayedbasketballandfootball,andsomedidexercises.Weenjoyeddoingsportssomuchthatweallforgotthetime.Wereallyhadagoodtime.学生满分范文优秀范文讲评

该文结构严谨,思维清晰。在内容及感想间使用了不同的时态:一般过去时及一般现在时。发挥适度,长句短句交叉使用,句式赋于变化,用词得体,有很强的可读性,做到了naturallyandclearly.正文：语言简洁，层次分明长句短句交叉使用最好。基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。把握要点，层次清晰。注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become等等。正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finally3)soon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not...until,before,after,when,while,during表示并列notonly...butalso,both...and,either...or,neither...nor，on(the)onehand…ontheotherhand表示举例或补充1）forexample2）besides/what’smore/what’sworse表示转折however,but，although,insteadof表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because表示结果asresult(of),so，so...that,such...that,表目的inorderto,sothat表比较thesameas,than,ofall...Whichsentenceisbetter?Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.2.WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.

正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气(good)(better)句式富于变化Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhelpeachother.2.Wearegoodfriendsandweshouldhelpeachother.3.Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.(best)(good)(better)IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldn’tsayaword.(good)2.Iwas_____

moved______

sayaword.(better)句式富于变化tooto写作训练生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Oneday,Iplayedfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmetoth