英语书面表达公开课

WelcomeEnjoyEnglish,Enjoylife!EnglishWriting书面表达中常见的一些错误PartOne一.汉式英语（误）Goodgoodstudy，daydayup.（正）

Studyhardandyou’llmakeprogresseveryday.1.Studentstakeexercisearenotenough.2.Educationisonlycarefultogradesthansports.3.Thereisapicturethataboyandagirlsittingonthetrackandtiresout.Students

don't

take

enough

exercise.Education

onlyfocuseson

gradesratherthansports.Asisshowninthepicture,aboyandagirlaresittingonthetrack,tiredout.二.词性混用Moreimportant,peoplearebeginningto

realizehowseriouslythepollutionis.2.Thestudents’physicalqualityisbecomingpoorbecausethelackofexercise.3.Inordertoourhealth,wearesupposedtoworkoutregular.Moreimportantly,peoplearebeginning

to

realizehowseriousthepollutionis.Thestudents’physicalqualityisbecomingpoorbecauseofthelackof/forlackofexercise.Forthesakeofourhealth,wearesupposedtoworkoutregularly.三.句子不完整Healthtoahumanbeingwhatwatertoafish.2.Ascanseeinthepicture,twostudentsbothtiredoutafterrunning.3.Personally,I

stronglyagainstthatbehavior,thereasonsasfollows.Healthis

toahumanbeingwhatwateris

toafish.Ascanbeseeninthepicture,twostudentsare

bothtiredoutafterrunning.Personally,I

am

stronglyagainstthatbehavior,thereasonsare

asfollows.四.无连词1、Practisemorereading,youwillimproveyourreadingability.2.Thecompositioniswellwritten,

thereisroomforimprovement.3.Takethechance,

youwillregretit.4.Wewerehavingameeting

someonebrokein.andbutorwhen其它常见的语法错误（一）therebe句式1．It’sreportedthattherehasaschooldecidedtocancelthelong-distancerunningproject.2.Inshort,it’snodoubtthatreadingnewscanbenefitusalot.

It’sreportedthatthereisaschooldecidingtocancelthelong-distancerunningproject.Inshort,there’snodoubtthatreadingnewscanbenefitusalot.（二）代词使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以

及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

1.HersbeingadmittedtoBeijingUniversitymadeherparentsexcited.2.Therefore,weshoulddosports

toimproveourselvesphysicalquality.Herour（三）形容词和副词形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

Thestudents’physicalqualityis

moreandmoreworse.2.Weshouldbringhometopeoplethe

valueofkeepinghealth．1)Thestudents’physicalqualityis

worseandworse.2)Thestudents’physicalqualityis

goingfrombadtoworse.healthy（四）动词的时态和语态

1．Asweknown,theglobalwatershortagebecomingincreasinglyseveremainlyduetoglobalwarming.2．I’monlytoogladtolearnthatyouhaveadmittedintoQinghuaUniversity

.

Asweknow/Asisknowntousall

,theglobalwatershortageisbecomingincreasinglyseveremainlyduetoglobalwarming.I’monlytoogladtolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoQinghuaUniversity.

3．Thereisnodenyingthataccidentsarehappenedwhendriversusecellphoneswhiledriving.4.Itwidelybelievethatpracticemakesperfect.Thereisnodenyingthataccidentswillhappenwhendriversusecellphoneswhiledriving.It’swidelybelievedthatpractice

makesperfect.（五）非谓语动词

1．Thestudentshavetodevotealltheirtimetotheirlessons,leavenotimeforsports.2．Inaddition,lackphysicalexerciseandcommunicationisamainfactoraswell.

Thestudentshavetodevotealltheirtimetotheirlessons,leavingnotimeforsports.Inaddition,lackof/lacking

physicalexerciseandcommunicationisamainfactoraswell.（六）名词性从句

1.Peopleholdtheviewiftheyarehealthytheywillowneverything．2．Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenon

moreandmorehighstudentsstarttheirown

blogs

on

theInternet.Peopleholdtheviewthat

iftheyarehealthy,theywillowneverything．

Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenon

thatmoreandmorehighstudentsstart

their

ownblogsontheInternet.（七）定语从句

1．Thereasonstudentsignorethevalueofsportsismainlytheyattachtoomuchsignificancetostudies.2.Someofthemevencontinuetomakemoremoney,itmeanseverythingtothem．

Thereasonwhy

studentsignorethevalueofsportsismainlythat

theyattachtoomuchsignificancetostudies.Someofthemevencontinuetomakemoremoney,whichmeanseverythingtothem．

（八）倒装

Onlyeveryonerealizestheimportanceofhealthcanweleadahealthylife.2.Onnoaccountcan’tweignorethevalueofknowledge.

Onlyif/when

everyonerealizestheimportanceofhealthcanweleadahealthylife.Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.（九）虚拟语气

1．Thesituationcouldhavebeenchangedifwetookactionearlier.2．Itishightimethatthissituationmustbechanged.

Thesituationcouldhavebeenchangedifwehadtakenactionearlier.Itishightimethatthissituation(should

)

bechanged.

（十）强调句

1.Itisyourattitudetowardslifewhichmatters.2.ItwasintheparkwhereIsawtwoyoungmenthrowinglittereverywhere.

Itisyourattitudetowardslifethatmatters.ItwasintheparkthatIsawtwoyoungmenthrowinglittereverywhere.Parttwo高级词汇1.多实少虚

:A

nice

person2.短语优先：Icannotbearit.Wewant

peace.

generous,warm-hearted,considerateIcannotputupwithit.Iamfedupwithit.Wearelookingforwardtopeace.３.弃旧取新:Therearemanytreesinthestreet.

较高级词汇Thestreetislinedwithmanytrees.我们应加强对学生的交通安全教育。Itisofgreatimportancetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.较高级词汇(Exercises1)较高级词汇

(Exercises2)Asaresulttheplanfailed.

SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.

Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Allofasuddenagoodideaoccurredto/flashedon/dawnedon/hit/struckme.Partthree语法结构的运用方法一：使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档1.面对困难时，他从不放弃。2.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductenjoyedagreatsuccess.

方法二.尝试多样化表达方式

他直到昨天下午五点才到达这里。

1.not---until

Hedidnotcomehereuntil5:00p.m.yesterday

.

2.倒装句

Notuntil5:00p.m.didhecomehereyesterday

.

3.强调句

Itwasnotuntil5:00p.m.thathecamehereyesterday.方法二.尝试多样化表达方式

他成功地通过了考试，这使我们感到很惊讶。

1.非限定性定语从句

Hesucceeded/wassuccessfulin

passingtheexam,whichsurprised

usgreatly.

2.主语从句&表语从句

Whatsurprisedusgreatlywasthathesucceeded

/

wassuccessfulinpassingtheexam.Howcanweorganizethepassage?PartFour根据图画内容写一篇关于校园浪费的英语作文。要点如下：1.目前校园内浪费的现象；2.不应该浪费的理由；3.你的看法和建议。4.词数：120词左右。

Para.1MeasuresPhenomenaHarmPara.3Para.2Para.1

Phenomenahavelightsonordertoomuchfoodandleaveleftoversonthetable

Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.leavetapwaterrunningPara.2Harmhaveabadeffectonone’scharacterbuildingaddfinancialburdentoone’sparentsuseuptheworld’slimitednaturalresources

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Para.3

Measureshaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituationeducatestudentsinschoolsetrulesstartfromoneselftaketheleadinreducingthewaste

Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.110wordsHowcanwegetourpassagepolishedup?Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavemuchleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.Thestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandhavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeansahugewasteofwaterandelectricity.Somestudentsgetintothebadhabitoforderingmuchdeliciousfoodinthecanteenbuttheydon’teatallthefood,leavingmuchonthetable.Soitishightimewehadtodealwiththeproblem.Thereasonsareasfollows:在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;Tips

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.

Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,theworld’slimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity,willbeusedupsoon.FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,What’smoreFinally,What’sworse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;Tips

Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.

Buthowcanwereducewaste?Inmyopinion,itiseverybody’sdutytofightagainstwaste.Ontheonehand,Ishouldstartwithmyselftosaveeverything.Ontheotherhand,I’dliketoremindmyfriendsheretotaketheleadinreducingthewaste.在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。Tips

Nowdays,itisacommonphenomenonthat

thestudentshave

/leavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandleavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeans

a

h