中考写作 感恩作文 课件

“感恩”主题写作课典例分析初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,临近毕业,区实验中学将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,届时请全体师生及家长参加，请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点提示:1.感谢父母,教我如何生活;2.感谢老师,教我许多知识;3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆。注意:词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,

不计入总词数;

Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

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That’sall.Thankyou.一审要点二构框架三列重点五美文章01020305四连成文写作五步法04一审要点初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,临近毕业,区实验中学将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,届时请全体师生及家长参加，请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点提示:1.感谢父母,教我如何生活;2.感谢老师,教我许多知识;3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆。

Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

______________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.文体：_____________________人称：_____________________时态：___________________________________________演讲稿第一人称、第二人称时态不唯一：一般现在、一般过去时态、现在完成时态二构框架初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,临近毕业,区实验中学将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,届时请全体师生及家长参加，请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点提示:1.感谢父母,教我如何生活;2.感谢老师,教我许多知识;3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆。

Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

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That’sall.Thankyou.感谢父母,教我如何生活;感谢老师,教我许多知识;感谢同学,给我美好回忆1._________2._________3._________感谢父母,教我如何生活;感谢老师,教我许多知识;感谢同学,给我美好回忆;1.表达感谢2.回忆过去3.列举事例二构框架thanksb/…感谢父母,教我如何生活;感谢老师,教我许多知识;感谢同学,给我美好回忆;WhenIwas…,you…/You’ve…inthepastthreeyears./Irememberdoing…/Iwon’tforget…1.offertohelp2.studytogether3.pulltogether4.wintheEnglishcompetition5.sweetmemories…1.takecareofme/…2.provideacomfortable

cateme/teachme4.staybymyside5.cheermeup

…1.bepatient2.teachusknowledge3.explain…clearly4.guide/encouragemeto…5.solve…differently6.alwaysbetheretohelp…三列重点列举事例（短语）表达感谢（短语）回忆过去（句型）thanksb/saythankstosb/bethankfultosb/begratefultosb感谢父母,教我如何生活;感谢老师,教我许多知识;感谢同学,给我美好回忆;四连成文Iwanttothank…/Iwanttosaythanksto…/Iamthankfulto…/Iamgratefulto…WhenIwas…,you…/You’ve…inthepastthreeyears./Irememberdoing…/Iwon’tforget…1.offertohelp2.studytogether3.pulltogether4.wintheEnglishcompetition5.sweetmemories…1.takecareofme/…2.provideacomfortable

cateme/teachme4.staybymyside5.cheermeup

…1.bepatient2.teachusknowledge3.explain…clearly4.guide/encouragemeto…5.solve…differently6.alwaysbetheretohelp…使用连接词①.表示并列或递进:and,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor…②.表示结果:so…that,too…to……③.表示转折:but,however,although,though...④.表示因果:because,so,therefore,asaresult…⑤.表示条件:if,unless…⑥.表示对比:ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…⑦.表示解释:forexample,suchas…⑧.表示顺序:first,first(ofall),tobeginwith;second,next,later,finally,intheend…⑨.表示目的:to,inorderto,inorderthat…⑩.表示结论:allinall,inaword…

LevelA:

Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.LevelB:

Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

First,Iwanttosaythanksto_____.Inthepastthreeyears,you’ve_______.IrememberwhenIwas________,you___________.Then,_______________________________________________________

Finally,_____________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.

……First,Iamthankfultomyparents.Inthepastthreeyears,you’vetakengoodcareof

meandprovidedacomfortableemvironmentforme.IrememberwhenIwasdown,youtriedyourbesttocheermeupandwasalwaystheretolisten.Next,Iamgratefultotheteacherswhoarehard-working.Inotonlygotknowledgefromyoubutalsolearnthowtobeabetterperson.Youwerepatient

andencouragedmetostudyhard.Becauseofyou,Iwasalwaysfullofenergy.Lastbutnotleast,Iwanttothankmyfriends.Westudiedtogetherandwentthrough（经历）

thehardtime.Wepulledtogetherandmadegreatprogress.Iwon’tforgetwinningthefirstprizeintheEnglishcompetition.AlthoughIamgraduatingfromShiyanMiddleSchool,Iwillalwaysrememberthebesttimeinmylife.……使用连接词避免使用同一句式多用固定搭配、谚语等

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