英语写作技巧与写作注意事项

1、文档编码 : CP5Z10Z4I9O4 HI3N4A9P4F1 ZZ2Q8J3J5Z4. 第 七 讲：英语 写 作 （二）大作文往年试题：Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below. Sample 1 My View on Playing Computer Games 1. 有人认为同学打电脑玩耍有利于智力开发；2. 有人认为同学打电脑玩耍阻碍学习；3. 我的观点；Sample 2：对贫富差距加大现象谈谈看法评分标准Global scoring a.

2、 Content b. Language 2 分: 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破裂或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严肃错 误；5 分：基本切题；表达思想不清,连贯性差；有较多的严肃语言错误；8 分：有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字将就连贯；语言错误较多,其中有一些严肃错 误；11 分：切题；表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误 14 分：切题；表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上没有语言错误,仅有个 别小错；注：白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个独立的词而无法表达思想,给 0 分；严肃错误语法错误 There are many reasons caused the accident.

3、 1 / 8 . The driver of the car no in. The life is becoming gooder and gooder. That day rain bigly. The man who through the street The car which in a fast speed hit him. The car which in a fast speed hit him. I got the place where happened the accident. Our city would happen many traffic. 写作留意事项1. 审好

4、题,想好再写,不要写了又划掉,也不要写完了发觉字数不够有写,这样整篇 文章就不联贯了；2. 把握好文章的重心,一般“ 我的观点” 应当是重心；3. 留意写作的格式缩进式或齐头式；4. 拿不准的词、短语或用法应防止使用；5. 表达要清楚、简洁,不必一味追求结构的复杂而尽可能多的使用从句,这样文章会 显得很罗嗦；如： The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast. 6. 留意用词和搭配；7. 检查 -s 和-ed ,尽量防止严肃错误；Choice of Words 1. Three levels of English words E

5、nglish native words core informal oral French or Spanish words Latin or Greek words academic words Examples formal written English French or Spanish Latin or Greek ask inquire royal interrogate break sever separate fire flame conflagration house abode residence kingly regal manly male masculine rise

6、 mount ascend time age I am aware that epoch I know that I believe that I am convinced that I have a good idea. A good idea occurs to me. Cause give rise to Emphasize lay emphasis on 2 / 8 . Because of due to, owing to Stop, end come to a stop/end Suddenly all of a sudden Often more often than not 2

7、. Connotation of Words English explanation common, peasant, assassinate, gay, acquire, date, property, enemy, problem, issue 3. General Vs Specific terms overuse of general terms beautiful, delicious, famous, Chinas English小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表 简洁用错的词孔子、孟子、老子1. 词性 lack, serve, contact, last, marry, con

8、cern, like 2. 汉语影响 more perfect, very excellent, return back, repeat again, good memory power, listening ability, high quality goods learn the knowledge 常见错误 1 two predicates in one simple sentence Every year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious meal. There have

9、 many people like SFG. My mother cooks food is very delicious. 2 Omission and overuse of Be Nowday peoples life level is arise. Many person are like watch SFG in the eve. SFG was appeared since 1984. SFG is liked by many people. How fast time was gone. SFG can divide into several parts. We very busy

10、. 3 Comparative degree more and more better become gooder and gooder, 4 Conjunction 3 / 8 . because .so although .but While 5 I very like SFG. Very hate 6 Part of speech most of we Chinese, make me surprise, with the quick development of economic and social, In my s opinion, I advice to keep SFG. ea

11、ting good, drinking good, playing good; good plays, good look, good use; I think it dues to the development, Let s analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes. To men, women just liked clothes. they like it like me like it. two weeks past choose, choice, succeed, success, successful,

12、 die, dead, death 7 Choice of words The whole family assemble to have a dinner. congratulate Spring Festival, abolish stop, give up SFG, sit behind the TV to look SFG, Many people fall in love with watching SFG. We can elect other programs to see. celebrate SFG with bomb, stand in the shadow/shade m

13、osquito bite/sting It s a gay meeting/party 8 Phrases in all in; one hand, another hand, third hand; at one hand, at second hand, at last hand; in one hand, from other hand; last but not the last, last but not most; on my opinion; A coin has two hands coins. Everything has two hands coins. 9 Spellin

14、g We cant cansle cancer, cancle it. SFG is watched by hole word. happyness, include ing SF, Every student include me enjoys Poor people maybe very angry hungry. eat the soap soup; Benefitial 4 / 8 . Drived Dispite I will adopt to the campus life 联 贯1. 并列：and, as well as on the one hand on the other

15、hand for one thing . for another firstly .secondly .thirdly finally subsequently, then, thereafter, afterward, in the following at first, initially, originally at last, eventually 2. 递进：Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, Additionally What is more Besides Apart from 3. 转折But Yet However Nevertheless

16、 While Whereas On the contrary In contrast 4. 结果So Therefore, Thus Hence As a result （consequence）Consequently 5 / 8 . 5. 缘由Because of Due to Owing to On the account of In view of Thanks to On the grounds that 6. 假设If .Given that Provided that Unless On the condition of As so long as 7. 其他1Sentence

17、adverbs: absolutely, alternatively, currently, undoubtedly, certainly, consequently, subsequently , obviously 2 PP: in general, on average, in fact, in effect, in theory, in practice, in reality, in particular, 3 Adv speaking: generally speaking, broadly speaking, strictly speaking, theoretically sp

18、eaking 4 precisely because, mainly because, merely because, only because 段落用语Beginning: With the development of As is well known to We all know that As we all know As a proverb says, As a saying goes As for some people hold the opinion that . While others 6 / 8 . argue maintain that Every coin has t

19、wo sides. It has merits and demerits. It has pros and cons. Supporters and opponents Development Recent researches have proven/shown/indicated that My arguments/reasons/ideas will be listed as follows: In the following paragraph, I will Firstly, secondly, and finally Why is it that .Ending All in all In a word In conclusion In short In summa