2014百校联考试卷讲评课件

1、基础写作讲评你很荣幸地成为2014年巴西世界杯的一名志愿者,负责编写世界杯的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下信息编写世界杯的英语介绍,内容包括:1.足球运动是一项古老的体育活动,源远流长。它起源于中国古代的一种球类游戏蹴鞠(cuju),后来经过阿拉伯人(Arab)传到欧洲,发展成现代足球;2.世界杯(World Cup)是最具影响力的全球性英式足球赛;3.首届世界杯足球锦标赛于1930年在乌拉圭(Uruguay)举行,以后每隔4年举办一次;4.目前世界杯历史上已经举办了18届。本次在巴西(Brazil)举办的世界杯有32支球队参加。 信息整合+构思表达+连句成篇+修改+完成写作1.足球运动是一项古

2、老的体育活动,源远流长。它起源于中国古代的一种球类游戏蹴鞠(cuju),后来经过阿拉伯人(Arab)传到欧洲,发展成现代足球;Football, as an ancient sport, originated from one of ancient Chinese ball games, cuju, which was brought into Europe by Arabs and developed into the modern football. 起源于_传到欧洲_发展成_originate from/in+地点; come from; be brought to/ spread to

3、 Europedevelop into2.世界杯(World Cup)是最具影响力的全球性英式足球赛;World cup generally refers to the worldwide games of British soccer with the greatest influence. World Cup is the most influential global soccer match.最具影响力的_ _全球性_英式足球赛_the most influential with the greatest influenceglobal; worldwidesoccer match;

4、British soccer game3.首届世界杯足球锦标赛于1930年在乌拉圭(Uruguay)举行,以后每隔4年举办一次;The first World Cup was held in Uruguay in 1930 and after that it is held every four years. 首届世界杯足球锦标赛_举行;举办_ 每隔4年_2014年世界杯是继1978年阿根廷足球锦标赛之后第一次在南美洲举办的世界杯，也是继1950年后巴西第一次举办的世界杯。The2014WorldCupwasthefirstinSouthAmericasinceArgentinahostedt

5、he tournamentin1978,andthefirstinBrazilsince1950.the first World Cupwas/were/will be held (hold-held-held)every four years4.目前世界杯历史上已经举办了18届。5. 本次在巴西(Brazil)举办的世界杯有32支球队参加。 Up to now it has already been held 18 times. The 2014 World Cup was held in Brazil, with 32 teams competing in it. The 2014 Wor

6、ld Cup was held in Brazil and 32 teams took part in/participated in it. Football, as an ancient sport, originated from one of ancient Chinese ball games, cuju, which was brought into Europe by Arabs and developed into the modern football. World Cup generally refers to the worldwide games of British

7、soccer with the greatest influence. The first World Cup was held in Uruguay in 1930 and after that it is held every four years. By now it has been held 18 times already. The 2014 World Cup was held in Brazil, with 32 teams competing in it. 范文欣赏读写任务阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Speaking of campus club

8、s, people usually think of conventional ones like roller-skating or music clubs. But now, society and club culture is seeing more diversity, with students interests covering a wide field. Yu joined the club a month ago after he saw a big paper elephant on display at the society and club recruiting f

9、air (招新大会). “It was made by the club chairman, who is my age,” says Yu. “His work aroused my interest in origami (折纸).” According to Yu, the club was formed by a group of students who love the art of origami. “Though Ive never tried origami before, Im impressed by their love of it and I want to lear

10、n it myself,” he says. Other than treating societies and clubs as a way of entertainment, some students now use them to broaden their horizons, help their studies, and prepare for a future career. Some societies and clubs like this include extra tuition clubs, straight-A student clubs, and start-up

11、business clubs. Cui Ye, 19, is the co-founder of the straight-A student club at Beihang University. The economics major student wanted to improve her academic performance, so she set up the study club together with her friends. “The club has attracted dozens of students. We urge each other to study

12、hard and practise self-study activities after class,” says Cui. “I think the club has made studying less boring and difficult.”写作内容1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.用约120个词就“学校里的社团活动会不会影响到学习?”这个主题进行讨论,内容包括:(1)你参加社团活动的情况;(2)谈谈学习和社团活动之间的关系;(3)你认为学生应该要怎么才能平衡好学习和社团活动。概要部分要求能抓住文章所含的大意：通过两个学生的经历来说明参加学校的社团活动给学生带来的好处。应包括

13、以下要点：1. 学生参加社团活动的好处2. 两个学生Yu 和Cui Ye的例子(经历）概要部分出现的问题1. 要点不全：只写了例子没有写参加社团活动的好处；或者只写了好处，没有点到例子。2. 未能把握文章大意，只是照抄原文的一些词句生。3. 表达错误多：单词拼写，搭配，时态和语态等。正文部分出现的问题：段落层次不分明: 有学生没有分段；仍有少数同学在summary和正文之间隔了一行任务二没有讲清楚学习和社团活动之间的关系，只单方面列举了社团活动的好处或者举了一个例子。Other than treating societies and clubs as a way of entertainmen

14、t, some students now use them to broaden their horizons, help their studies, and prepare for a future career.Joining campus clubs provides students with entertainment, enlarges their scope of knowledge, helps students with their studies and prepars for a future career through the experience of two s

15、tudents.利用文章中的素材，移花接木写好summary结合任务提到的主题“学校里的社团活动会不会影响到学习?”用自己的话转述：Many students consider societies and clubs a way of entertainment. They also enable students to widen their horizons, improve their studies and prepare for a future job. By providing us with experience of two students, the passage sho

16、ws the benefits of joining campus clubs, including helping with their entertainment, broadening their sight and imagination, helping with their studies and preparing for a future career.Summary参考答案写作内容1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.用约120个词就“学校里的社团活动会不会影响到学习?”这个主题进行讨论,内容包括:(1)你参加社团活动的情况;(2)谈谈学习和社团活动之间的关系;(3)你认为

17、学生应该要怎么才能平衡好学习和社团活动。读题确定主题分析任务列出要点进行写作写作步骤：(1)你参加社团活动的情况;这个任务完全可以利用文章的两个例子和素材，具体介绍你本人参加学校社团活动的情况（社团名称，参加目的，简单经过和影响），可以写一个或者多个，但建议写一个活动足够。原文素材： extra tuition clubs, straight-A student clubs, and start-up business clubs2. 本校社团活动：（写自己熟悉的或者参加过得）例如：the English Clubimprove my English, arouse my interest i

18、n English(学习方面的）The Music Club make friends with those sharing the same interest with me, relax myself,enrich my school life（艺术类的）Foodball (Basketball,Table Tennis) Clubbuild up my body, refresh myself（运动类的）3. 目前没有参加社团活动：（分析了原因：学习忙，抽不出时间；因为懒惰，怕苦怕累)（1）你参加社团的情况；可写你因为而参加了那个或哪些社团, 还可以再简单写写你从中获得什么？ When

19、it comes to campus activities, I immediately remember the first day when I came to this school. The bicycle club was taking in its new members by promoting itself. I learned that it was good for me to develop my interest and build up my body, and therefore I signed up my name to join it. I took exer

20、cise every day. Gradually, I felt energetic and performed better in my studies, which inspired me and other students. (1)你参加社团活动的情况;(2)谈谈学习和社团活动之间的关系; From my perspective, proper campus activities are beneficail to our studies. Firstly, we can relax ourselves and ruduce our study pressure throught t

21、he activities, which will help improve our study efficiency. Secondly, being engaged in campus activities broadens our horizons, making our study less boring and difficult. Besides, it enriches our life experience, cultivate good character like patience as well as perseverance, which motivates us to

22、 face up to the problems we come across in our study and never give in.Relax ourselvesreduce our study pressure, improve our study efficiency broaden our horizonsenlarlage our scope of knowledge, find fun in our study(make our study less boring and difficult) enrich our life experiences,combine know

23、ledge with practice, cultivate our imagination and inspirationmaking our study more interesting and easier（2）谈谈学习和社团活动之间的关系；社团有助于学习：参加社团-身心放松-提高学习效率社团活动可以开拓视野-学习到课堂上没学到的东西-更全面掌握知识(3)你认为学生应该要怎么才能平衡好学习和社团活动。put our studies in the first place arrange our time properly, make a proper schedule on study a

24、nd campus activities avoid joining in too many campus activities In order to balance campus activities and studies, I think the following suggestions will be helpful to you. To begin with, it is necessary for us to put our study in the first place as a senior three student. Furthermore,we are suppos

25、ed to arrange our time in a proper way. It is wise of us to join a club once a week or twice a month.Besides, it would be better if we just join in one campus activity in case it will influence our study.（3）你认为学生应该要怎么才能平衡好学习和社团活动。 When it comes to campus activities, I immediately remember the first

26、day when I came to this school. The bicycle club was taking in its new members by promoting itself. I learned that it was good for me to develop my interest and build up my body, and therefore I signed up my name to join it. I took exercise every day. Gradually, I felt energetic and performed better

27、 in my studies, which inspired me and other students. From my perspective, proper campus activities are beneficail to our studies. Firstly, we can relax ourselves and ruduce our study pressure throught the activities, which will help improve our study efficiency. Secondly, being engaged in campus ac

28、tivities broadens our horizons, making our study less boring and difficult. Besides, it enriches our life experience, cultivate good character like patience as well as perseverance, which motivates us to face up to the problems we come across in our study and never give in. In order to balance campu

29、s activities and studies, I think the following suggestions will be helpful to you. To begin with, it is necessary for us to put our study in the first place as a senior three student. Furthermore,we are supposed to arrange our time in a proper way. It is wise of us to join a club once a week or twice a month. In addition, it would be better if we just join in one campus activity in case it will influence our study.参考范文 By providing us with experience of two students, the passage sho