中考高频写作话题专题复习

1、中考高频写作话题专题复习1. 主系表 e.g. I am a student.2. 主谓 e.g. I ran fast.3. 主谓宾 e.g. I love playing chess.4. 主谓宾补 e.g. We keep our classroom clean 5. 主谓双宾 e.g. I will give you some advice.简单句：* there be 句型 e.g. There are some advantages.* 形式主语句型 e.g. Its important to have enough sleep.* 动名词作主语： e.g. Reading boo

2、ks in the sun is bad for our eyes.善用简单句：1. 善用定语*e.g. Beijing is one of the liveliest cities2. 善用状语 e.g. By taking notes, you can concentrate more in class.e.g. In the past few months, my life has changed a lot.简单句+定语+状语1. 并列 e.g. I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.2. 转折

3、e.g. I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.3. 因果 e.g. He is good at English so I often ask him for help. 并列句并列 *Enjoy it, and youll live a happy life.2. 转折 *Some agree with it while others dont. 3. 因果 * I love reading, for I can learn a lot without experiencing hard. 善用并列句主从复合句： （

4、一）简单句+状语从句1. 时间 when，notuntil，as soon as2. 条件 if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)3. 原因 because 4. 目的 so that , in order that (in order to do)5. 结果 so that (too to do)6. 比较 asas，not soas，than7. 让步 though，although，even though， even if, no matter what /when /where /who /which /how（二）主句+宾语从句： *e.g. I think / b

5、elieve that he is helpful.*e.g. I hope I can be a volunteer some day. *e.g. I understand why you are worried. （三）主句+定语从句： *e.g. I love music that I can dance to.*e.g. My parents are the people who I love most.* e.g. I love places where the people are friendly.1.表文章结构顺序：first of all, firstly/first, s

6、econdly/ second, next, and then, finally, in the end, at last, the last but not the least,2.表并列补充关系：what is more, besides, moreover, in addition, furthermore，3.表转折对比关系：however，on the contrary，but, after all, although / though, in spite of +n /doing, for one thing, for another, on one hand on the oth

7、er hand, while 4.表因果关系：because, as, so, thus, therefore, as a result5.表换一种方式表达：in other words, that is,6.表举例说明：for example / for instance, such as+n./doing7.表陈述事实：in fact, actually, 8.表达自己观点：as far as I know，in my opinion, in my point of view9.表总结：in all, in short, in a word, in conclusion, in summa

8、ry常用连接词： 五.写作训练的具体流程根据话题，分类汇总教材知识根据例文，分部细化写作过程根据话题，分子话题补充例文例文审题头脑风暴翻译单句连句成篇亮点提升主题升华实践练笔评价修改一、环保提建议话题第1段：Beginning: 引入话题（环境正变得恶劣）+过渡句第2？段：Body:分层展开顺序连接词+建议句型(我们)+合理建议+评论最后1段：Ending：总结自己的观点+号召记住加入好句子提升文章水平：It seems that if we try our best to.it can not onlybut also, sothat, its our duty to， 定语从句等复杂句中文

9、模板：第1段：beginning: As we all know, the environment is getting worse and worse引入. Its our duty to protect the environment. We must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment过渡句. 英文模板：第25段：body: First of all, 建议we should so that目的Besides, in order to目的, we are supposed to.instead of建

10、议, Whats more, to reduce thepollution,目的 wed better建议In addition, 建议its important for us to Only in this way can we目的 Last but not the least important, dont forget toto make.目的英文模板：1. 交通方式(自己、告诉他人)In order to reduce the air pollution, 1) we should either walk or take the bus to school. 2) we are sup

11、posed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway as much as possible.2. 水(节水方法)To make the limited water last long,1) wed better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teeth.2) its good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet冲厕所.环保建议素材(6大项)3.

12、 电(节电方法)Dont forget to turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room so that we can save the energy目的.4. 纸In order to make full use of paper, 1) its necessary for us to collect used paper and books and recycle them. 2) we need to use both sides of it.环保建议素材5. 购物袋To reduce the white pollution, we ar

13、e supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. 6. 植树造林 Wed better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down. Only in this way can we make the world green and the air fresh目的.环保建议素材最后1段：Ending: As a result/ All in all / In a word, its time for us to ra

14、ise peoples environmental awareness and take actions. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have. / Lower carbon, happier life(低碳话题用这句). 英文模板：First of all, we should either walk or take the bus to school as much as possible so that we can reduce the air pollution. Besides, in or

15、der to make full use of paper, we are supposed to not only recycle the used paper and books but also use both sides of it. Whats more, to reduce the white pollution, wed better take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.In addition, its important for us to plant trees as many as p

16、ossible instead of cutting them down. Only in this way can we make the world green and the air fresh. Last but not the least important, dont forget to turn off the lights and taps when we dont use them to make the limited energy last as long as possible.相关例题一、节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学

17、生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life” 为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。二、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是学生Peter，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题13方面; 2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施， 举例13方面进行说明，字数80一、环保话题二、难忘的/感动的/感激的（校园生活/人)特点：1、事离不开人、人离不开事（既是写人也是叙事）2、选材内容必须积极向上，发自真心。3、混合时态： 描述过去我现在感受对于我今后的启迪4、“难忘”与“最令我感

18、动”话题相似，素材可通用，只需要变换关键词。 unforgettable难忘的moving感人的grateful感激的相关考题分析相关考题： 知恩、感恩是人类的美德。父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象。请你写一篇短文，表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助，如何使你感动的，以及你的感受。要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词。相关考题分析读题目要求：1、“父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象”从上面列举的人物中选一个来写一般现在时2、“表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助, 以及你的感受”叙事文体一般过去时审题确定写作内容第1段：beginning:引入话题（身边很多人都

19、帮助过你以及你对他们的感激之情）+过渡句（引出其中最令你感动的人物）第2段：body: 叙事手法描述与该人物有关的让你感动的某一件或某几件事。 时态：一般过去时 注意：选择事件时，突出“感动”，紧扣主题，详 略得当第3段：ending: 总结全文：由“感动”“感谢”给我今后的启迪 Outline提纲第一段：There are many people in my life who helped or are helping me now. I feel grateful to them引入话题. Without their help, I cant imagine how my life wil

20、l be like感激. Among them, I should give my special thanks to Miss Wang, my English teacher, who helps a lot with my English(定语从句).过渡句Sample 范文第二段：I remember the first day when I came to the school as a middle school student. I was both shy and short at that time. Everything was new to me. Whats more,

21、 my English was rather poor. I had trouble learning English. I didnt dare to speak or to answer the questions in class. I didnt know how to learn English. In order to help me with my English, Miss Wang not only encouraged me to be brave and active in class but also told me many useful ways to learn

22、English. With her great help, I changed a lot and became more interested and confident in English. I tried my best to study English so that I wouldnt let her down. In this way, my English became better and better.范文第三段：Thank you, Miss Wang. Thanks a lot感激. I will learn from you and become a both car

23、ing and helpful person like you启迪. Sample 范文三、志愿者话题1、敬老院（老人） visit the old peoples home;1) not only sing songs but also perform a play for them to make them happy.2) help the old people do some cleaning and washing so that we can make the old peoples home clean and tidy.2、公共场所（公园、公交车站）1) clean up th

24、e city parks 2) assist people to stand in line while waiting for the coming bus志愿者活动素材3、儿童医院（患病儿童）visit the Childrens Hospital give them some toys and tell funny stories to them to cheer them up4、孤儿院(orphanage孤儿院/ orphan孤儿)visit the orphanage have a birthday party with the orphans so that they can f

25、eel the care and love from other people who are like their family. 5、志愿者宣传（演讲、报告） give a speech to others and ask more people to join us志愿者活动素材考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：上周日，你所在的志愿者小组参加了社区的志愿者活。请你描述你们所有的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。相关考题分析1第1段Beginning:引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）第2段Body:描述上周日你们志

26、愿小组的活动（一般过 去时） 过渡句+ 顺序连接词+活动第3段Ending: 总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时） 提升+好句子Outline Im a member of a volunteer group. As a volunteer, I always try my best to help others. Last Sunday, our volunteer group took part in the volunteer work in a neighborhood. First of all, we helped clean up the yard. After that, we

27、 went to a local hospital to visit the sick kids. Whats more, we visited an old peoples home and sang songs for some lovely old people to make them happy. Finally, we gave a speech to children so that we could ask them to join us. We all thought we put our time to good use. On one hand, being a volu

28、nteer is great. Its a good experience for us. On the other hand, it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social skills. Lets be a volunteer today! 范文考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：暑假要到了，你所在的志愿者小组要参加社区的志愿者活。请你描述你们要做的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。相关考题分析2第1段Be

29、ginning: 引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）第2段Body:介绍暑假你们志愿小组的打算（一般将来时） 过渡句+ 顺序连接词+愿望打算句型+活动愿望句型：1. sb will do 2.sb be going to do 3. sb plan to do 4. sb want to do第3段Ending: 总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时） 提升+好句子Outline Im a member of a volunteer group. As a volunteer, I always try my best to help others. This summer holiday, our

30、 volunteer group will take part in the volunteer work in a neighborhood. First of all, we will help clean up the yard. After that, we want go to a local hospital to visit the sick kids. Whats more, we plan to visit an old peoples home and sing songs for some lovely old people to make them happy. Fin

31、ally, we are going to give a speech to children so that we can ask them to join us. We all believe we will put our time to good use. On one hand, being a volunteer is great. Its a good experience for us. On the other hand, it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social

32、 skills. Lets be a volunteer today! 范文考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：假设你是初三1的王林，你想要参加社区的志愿者小组。给他们写一封自荐信，介绍你平时的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。相关考题分析3第1段Beginning: 自我介绍+过渡句（一般现在时）Body:第2段介绍暑假平时的志愿者活动（一般现在时） 过渡句+ 顺序连接词+活动第3段: 总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时） 第4段Ending: 表达你希望被接收的迫切愿望提升+好句子Outline Dear Chai

33、rman, I am a student from Class 1, Grade 3. Id like to be a member of the volunteer group自我介绍. I like helping others and I always do something helpful in my spare time. For example, I help clean up the yard and go to a local hospital to visit the sick kids. Whats more, I often visit an old peoples h

34、ome and sing songs for some lovely old people to make them happy. Besides, I sometimes give a speech to children with my classmates so that we can ask them to join us. We all think we put our time to good use by doing volunteer work. On one hand, being a volunteer is great. Its a good experience for

35、 us. On the other hand, it can not only develop our interests but also improve our ability and social skills. I will be glad if I can become a member of your group. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours sincerely,WangLin四、回信建议劝告1.Why not (do) 2.Why dont you (do) 3.Youd better (do) 4.You should

36、/can/could/need (do) 5.How / What about doing ? 6.Would you mind doing7.You are supposed to (do) 8.If I were you, I would (do) ing is helpful.10.Its helpful for you to (do)11.Its a good idea for you to (do) 提建议句型总结：1.要点：齐全enough2.内容：建议合理、具说服力 reasonable /3.结构：文段连贯、逻辑4. 语法：标点词句准确correct5. 语言：词句多样 colorful作文修改对照评价表convincingcoherent/logical Finally, youd better understand your parents. First of all, you can ask teachers for help. Second, you can take exercise. In my op