高中英语作文---如何写关注信

1、高中英语作文-如何写关注信教学目的：让学生了解如何写关注信。教学重点：掌握写关注信基本结构，亮点句式。教学难点：运用关注信基本结构，亮点句式及恰当的连接词。教学步骤：关注信(letter of concern)属于应用文的范畴。关注信 是作者就某一个问题或一些现象，表达自己对事件的关心，并提出自己的一些看法和解决办法。关注信(letter of concern)属于应用文的范畴。关注信是作者就某一个问题或一些现象，表达自己对事件的关心，并提出自己的一些看法和解决办法。一、基本结构开头：简单介绍写信的缘由。主体：针对对方问题(如生病等)进行有针对性的鼓励和安慰，并适当提出自己的建议。注意语气一定

2、要委婉，能体现出自己对对方的关切之情。结尾：简单的希望或祝福。二、 常用句式1.开头常用语： I'm shocked/awfully sorry to hear that. It was a great shock to hear that. It broke my heart to hear that. I just can't tell you how sad I was when I heard that. I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that. I am writing to express my

3、 deep sympathy/care for you.2.主体常用语： I understand how you feel now. I know the way you feel very well. You'll always have a support in me. It's true that attitude decides everything.So you should never give up no matter what happens. Please let me know if there is anything I can do. If I can

4、 be of any help,please don't hesitate to let me know.3.结尾常用语： I'm looking forward to. I hope our caring will help to comfort you. I hope that time will take away the sorrow of your recent loss. Remember that my heart and my thoughts are with you.五步写作规范题目要求为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“ HEAR-TTO-HEAR

5、T” 专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie收到一封署名为 Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1 .表示理解并给予安慰；2 .提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3 .信的开头与结尾已为你拟好。参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad timeat the momentYours,Jamie第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1 .确定体裁：本

6、文为表达关注建议信；2 .确定人称：本文以第二人称为主；3 .确定时态：本文主要时态为一般现在时。二、构思第一段（表示理解并给予安慰）：很遗憾听说对方有此问题，并指出每个人都可能遇到这样的问题，所以让对方不必担心，但要学会控制自己的脾气。第二段（提出建议）：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力；多参加各种户外活动，多和朋友玩球类运动；保持乐观的心态,和朋友及家人沟通。第三段（提出希望）：希望建议能够起到作用或对方的问题得到解决同时表达祝愿。第二步：可能用到的核心词汇1 .period/stage 阶段，时期2 .go wrong 变坏3 .unnecessaryF 需要4 .s

7、elf-control 自控5 .avoid/prevent 避免6 .share.with 与分享7 .remove negative emotion型区除7肖极情绪8 .effective 有效果的9 .keep an optimistic attitude 保持乐观态度10 .be of benefit 有益的11 .lift one's spirits 振作精神12.get rid of/do away with 去掉第三步：由词扩句1 .每个人都会有这么一段时间，一切好像都变得非常糟糕。（when引导定语从句）Everyone will have one of those p

8、eriods when everything seems to be going wrong.2 .没有必要担忧。（it 作形式主语）It is unnecessary to be worried.3 .你应学会自控，这会帮你避免去说或做你将后悔的事。（that引导定语从句）You should learn self-control and it can help avoid saying and doing something that you'll regret.4 .与老师和朋友分享心情是个不错的选择，因为这样做可以消除你的消极情绪。（it作形式主语，as引导原因状语 从句 ）I

9、t is a good choice to share your feelings with your friends and teachers as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.5 .你应当多锻炼身体，这可让你振作精神。（which 引导非限制性定语从句）You should take more physical exercise,which can lift your spirits.6 .保持乐观的生活态度，你将享受生活给你的快乐。If you keep an optimistic attitude towards

10、life,you wil enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.希望我的建议对你有益。7 hope my suggestion will be of benefit to you.8 .祝你很快消除烦恼。May you get rid of your trouble soon.第四步：句式升级造亮点1 .用which 引导非限制性定语从句改写句3You should learn self-control,which can help avoid saying and doing something that you'll regret.2

11、 .用动名词作主语改写句4Sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is agood choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.3 .用祈使句十and+陈述句”改写句6Keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that

12、 you're having such a bad time at the moment.Actually,everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong.Therefore,it is unnecessaryto be worried.You should learn self-control,which can help avoid saying and doing something that you'll regret.The following are three suggestions.To begin with,sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise,which can lift your spirits.Last bu