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评卷实例,题目： Bicycles An Important Means of Transport in China.提纲： （1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途,Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kingdom of bicycles.Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.,Score: 11There millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the riders strength, biycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of Chinas bicycle will be kept for the long run. Becuse it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that its quality will be improved.,Score:8Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isnt too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oil, and it cant cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.,Score:5Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the world. Why was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much cheaper. The third answer is that the bicycle is easier in using than other transportations.Comparing with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than that of the car. The bicycle will be remained for a long time in China but in the end it will be disappeared with the improval of peoples living level.,Score:2As every body know, China a big developing country. So, the living standard of people not very high at present peoples income is not enough for they to buy cars motorcycles. And bike is easy to ride. Bicycle is cheaper be made. And I think bicycle the useful tool of transport in China now. So, it is quite porpular and wildly used in Chinas cities and country sides than the personal transportation tool.Bike is a kind of clean tools of transport. It not use gas and other energers. For this reason is not creat polution. But in fact in any way Bicycle is not advanced than car. If it is raining, the rider will suffer from wet, on the other hand, bike can not carry much goods.According to the our countrys developing rate, I firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in that nearly future. But undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long time.,作文模板,命题作文：一、说明利弊题型TOPIC:（1）说明事物现状 （2）事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） （3）你对现状（或前景）的看法，或者是应采取的措施注：摸板中的“A”表示所讨论的事物摸板1Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, a) A的优点之一 . Besides, b) A 的优点之二 . But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that c) A的缺点之一 . To make matters worse, d) A的缺点之二 .Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to e) 我的看法 .,摸板2A is a convenient way for people to a) 说明现状 .But things are always unexpected. There are some disadvantages that we have not noticed before. Firstly, b) 弊端一 . Secondly, c) 弊端二 . The worst is that d) 弊端三 .In my opinion, we should e) 采取的措施 .The more we do, the better this world would be.,摸板3In recent years A has become a) A的现状 . However, there are both positive and negative points associated with it.The most important advantage of A is b) A 的第一个优点 ; you can c) 举例说明 . Furthermore, d) A 的第二个优点 . You will e) 举例说明 . Another point in favor of A is f) A 的第三个优点 . You can g) 举例说明 .On the other hand, A has its disadvantages. Perhaps the most obvious is h) A的缺点一 .Undoubtedly, i) 缺点二 ; obviously j) 缺点三 . In addition to these points, k) 缺点四 .To conclude, although l) 概述A 的缺点 , I would say that the advantages outlined above outweigh the disadvantages.,常用表达,1. Recently the rise in problem of/（phenomenon of）has cause/ aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern. 2. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon ofhas been brought into focus.（has been brought to public attention） 3.Inflation/Corruption/Social inequalityis yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.,1. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that . 2. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable . 3. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of . , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of . 4. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that . will be put in danger . 5. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of . 6. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency . 7. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is . Another method is . Still another one is . 8. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.,例文,Attending Schools Abroad出国留学的优点出国留学的缺点我的观点Attending schools abroad has many advantages. In the first place, by looking our own country from the outside, we can best see the strong points and weak points of our nation and therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds. Second, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly, we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly. But the most important thing is attending a foreign university is to get acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and technology and make use of the first-rate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile to go abroad for education.However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign university. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most of the students who are ready to go abroad do not have adequate proficiency in the language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult to understand what the instructors are saying. Besides, for lack of knowledge of the customs and way of life of the local people, they may run into trouble in dealing with various situations. Therefore, misunderstandings often arise; furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-time jobs in order to help support themselves. Faced with these difficulties, many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and some students may even fail in their courses and learn little.Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole, it is a good thing to go and study abroad particularly when the subject is very weak or not available in our country. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.,video Games电子游戏十分普遍。电子游戏有其优点。电子游戏也有其缺点。Video games have become very popular in recent years. Many teenagers are being attracted by video games. Every day after school some teenagers will bury themselves in video games at home or in video arcades. They concentrate all their attention on video games, with their hands busy operating.Video games are a kind of wonderful entertainment. They bring great pleasure to teenagers, train them to respond quickly, stimulate their imagination and interest in electronics and computer science.Just as a coin has two sides, video games also have some disadvantages. School children spend too much time on video games, which would do harm to their eyes and affect their school achievements. Also, playing video games does not allow them to use their natural creativity. Some of them even commit crimes in order to get enough money for the games. Only if one has enough self-control can he benefit from video games.,A Five-day Week从1995年起我国实行了五天工作制五天工作制的好处结论For the first time in history, a five-day week was officially adopted across China in May, 1995. It was found an immediate welcome and much popularity ever since.Indeed, there are many obvious advantages to a five-day week. First, it provides an individual with time and leisure for personality development. With it, he is able to pursue his intellectual interests and other personal hobbies, a thing he has long desired but found impossible in the past when he only had one day off in a week and could barely arrange the household. Second, the quality of life has greatly improved. A long holiday makes it possible for people to go traveling around the country and abroad. Finally, a two-day weekend has promoted the growth of the consuming market. For an increasing number of people choose to go traveling and shopping at weekends instead of staying at home a new habit which is beneficial to nations economy.A five-day week benefits more than individually and economically, and with the passage of time, it will show more profound significance.,Stop Using Disposal Products人们喜欢用一次性产品。这种做法带来的害处。措施Disposal products are gaining increasing popularity in China. Now they practically become part of our life; we have disposal chopsticks, disposal cups, disposal clothes, disposal cameras Indeed we are in a throwaway society.However, the wide use of the so-called “convenience goods” is extremely harmful in many ways. In the first place, though man has achieved an unprecedented level of production, our resources available are on the decline. If this trend continues, the limited resources on earth will be exhausted soon. Furthermore, disposal products cause serious pollution in our environment which is already threatened by our unhealthy life styles. It is reported that many scenic spots are losing their appeal because of “white pollution” caused by numerous plastic rice-boxes. Finally, people are getting more extravagant than thrifty, which is harmful to our social atmosphere. In fact, in many developed countries disposal goods are banned.Stricter measures should be taken to prevent disposal products from widely using. People should be further educated to increase their awareness of conservation. Laws must be executed to ban the use. Most importantly, new technology must be used to produce more recyclable products.,模板2,二、对比观点题型TOPIC:（1）有人认为 （2）另一些人认为 （3）我的看法 注：在摸板中，将使用“A”与“B”表示相对立的两个方面。,摸板1Some people think that (1)观点一 . They claim that (2) 理由一 . Whats more, (3) 理由二 .But (4) 观点二 as other people may believe. Although (5)条件限制 , still (6) 理由 . However, each of them has its own disadvantages. (7) 观点一 的缺点，while (8) 观点二的缺点 .In case of myself, I prefer to (9) 我的观点 because (10) 理由 .,摸板2The topic of (1) 主题 is becoming the most popular one recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of (2) 支持A的理由一 . Whats more, (3) 理由二 . Moreover , 理由三 .While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly, (5) 支持B的理由一 . Secondly, (6) 理由二 . Thirdly, (7) 理由三 .From my point of view, I think (8) 我的观点 . The reason is that (9) 原因 .,摸板3Some people believe that (1) 观点一 . They point out the fact that (2) 原因 .However, other people believe (3) 观点二 . They point out that (4) 原因 . I prefer the former, and the main reason is that (5) 我支持前者的原因之一 . For example, (6) 举例说明 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.,摸板4Nowadays, (1) 主题 becomes popular in our daily lives. But (2) 提出疑问 ? Generally, there are two opinions toward it. One opinion is that (3) 第一种看法 because (4) 理由 .The other is (5) 第二种看法 . People who hold it argue that (6) 理由一 , so (7) 理由二 .In conclusion, I may say that (8) 我的看法 , because (9) 理由 . So (10) 总结，指出自己的看法 .,常用的表达,1、引入部分 A) . has become a heated topic among people today. Opinions vary from person to person. 今天，已经成为人们讨论的热门话题，不同的人对此有不同看法。 B) Nowadays, people are divided on the question as to whether . 如今关于，人们的观点很不相同。 C) When asked about . different people will offer different answers. 当被问及时，不同的人会给出不同的答案。 D) The issue of whether or not . has been widely argued (debated) currently. 关于的问题，现在已经展开了广泛的讨论。 E) . is a common occurrence in our daily life, but different people hold different attitudes towards it. 在生活中经常发生，但不同的人对它有不同的态度。,2、陈述观点1部分 A) Some people suggest (think / maintain / believe / hold the opinion / argue / feel) that . 有些人认为（坚持/相信/以为/觉得） B) Some people are inclined to (tend to) think that . 一些人往往认为 C) Those who criticize (object to / oppose) . maintain that . 批评（反对）的人坚持认为 D) Those who hold (advocate / are in favor of) . believe that . 赞同（同意）的人相信 E) To most people (To the general public / to the majority of people), . 大多数人都认为,3、陈述观点2部分 A) However, (But, / Yet / Nevertheless, / While) other people hold a different point of view. They insist that . 然而，其他人持不同的观点，他们坚持认为 B) On the contrary ( In contrast), there are still many people who do not agree, and they claim (argue / believe, etc.) that . 相反，许多人并不同意，他们认为 C) While others think . is a better choice. 但其他人认为是更好的选择。 D) However, not everyone shares the opinion. 然而，并不是每个人都赞同这个观点。,4、“我的观点”部分 A) for my part (As to me / As far as I am concerned), Id like to agree to the former (latter) opinion. 就我而言，我赞同前（后）一种观点。 B) In my opinion, both sides are partly right ( there is some truth in both sides). 我认为双方都有一定道理。 C) Only after we have taken into consideration all aspects of the problem can we make the right decision. 只有当全面考虑这个问题之后，我们才能做出正确的决定。 D) To me, the former opinion is more attractive in that . 我认为，前一种观点更有吸引力，因为,例文,Should Euthanasia Be Legalized?有人赞成实行安乐死有人反对安乐死合法化我的看法Should euthanasia be legalized? Answers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the idea of euthanasia. In their opinion, it can benefit both the patient and his family. To a terminally ill person who is suffering unbearable pains day and night or living like a “vegetable”, to be allowed to end his life painlessly is a good release. To his family it is also a big relief considering the financial and emotional drain on them that have to sustain his life.However, other people think that the legalization may bring with it problems our society has not previously faced. They argued that it is not humane to make a terminally ill person who does not want to die feel guilty for remaining alive. And it is also unwise that a patient is killed simply because of a mistaken terminal diagnosis. Whats more, it is possible that euthanasia could be taken advantage of for criminal purpose.There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of euthanasia outweigh its advantages. The legalization of it will raise serious moral and social issues. Without euthanasia, I wonder, cant doctors come up with better ways to lessen the pain of the terminally ill persons?,The Objective of Study大学生中许多人把拿到文凭作为学习目的另一些人认为大学应该以发展个人兴趣和培养特长为目标我的看法After entering colleges, students hold quite different opinions about the object of study. Some of them hold that having a diploma is certainly the objective of study in college. In their opinion, the diploma will guarantee favorable opportunities in the job-hunting campaign. This idea may be the reason why their college life is almost focused on reading books, which helps them pursue decent scores in exams.But a good many college students are inclined to challenge this belief. They argue that it is most important to develop the personal interests and rewarding specialties in the college study. For this purpose, they often have every reason to pride themselves on excellent academic achievements in the subjects they take great interest in, while they may flunk in other cour