中考英语作文高分技巧ppt课件.ppt

1、,将过程变得美丽 让结果更加辉煌,中考英语书面表达应对技巧,1,(一）初中生写作“现状”,2 初中生写作“六大病症”： 1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； 2) 单词拼写错误； frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite believe) 2. 加强中考课标词汇、短语的听默写。 3. 鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用“积累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。,词汇短语“攻关秘笈”,12,4. 鼓励学生使用“高端”的词汇。,=endless/oceans of,Playing too much computer is bad for our study.,

2、=gets in the way of = have a bad influence on,Eg: I am very interested in pop music.,I have lots of homework to do every day.,= show/take great interest in,13,词不离句，完整、准确、 新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好文章的必备条件。,句子,14,1. 帮助学生掌握认清“五大”基本句式。 2. 加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读、听写、背诵、仿写、句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累。 3. 让学生在“多样”的句式变换中不断积攒实战经验。,有效的句式教学,1

3、5,3. “多样”的句式变换,句子,1）合并为简单句； Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress. I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .,2）学会使用感叹句； It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others！,16,3) 善用复合句； a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble. We need

4、 to help the people who are in trouble. b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.,4）巧妙使用强调句； We can achieve our dreams by working hard. Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams.,17,5) 积累丰富的谚语 (一周两至三句） 英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，

5、在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章的说服力和感染力。,As the saying goes, “ .” 1) 锻炼对学生有好处 As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise. 2) 集中注意力于学习 As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate our mind on our studies. 其他谚语: 1.Think twice before

6、 you do. 2.Practice makes perfect. 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 4.Failure is the mother of success. 5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 6.All roads lead to Rome. 7. Every coin has two sides.,18,1. 水(节水方法) To make the limited water last long, 1) wed better turn off the taps or showers

7、 while we are washing hair or brushing teeth. 2) its good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet冲厕所. 2.交通方式(自己、告诉他人) In order to reduce the air pollution, 1) we should either walk or take the bus to school. 2) We are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway

8、as much as possible.,19,3. 电(节电方法) Dont forget to turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room so that we can save the energy目的 4. 纸 In order to make full use of paper, 1) its necessary for us to collect used paper and books and recycle them. 2). we need to use both sides of it,20,5. 购物袋 To reduce

9、 the white pollution, we are supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. 6. 植树造林 Wed better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down. In this way ，we can make the world greener and the air fresher.,21,词不离句，句不离篇。 能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训

10、练学生写作的最终目的。,篇章,22,如何运用已有的“遣词造句”能力在写作实践中学会“谋篇布局” “战无不胜” 呢？,23,1）表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides， 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however 3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while,

11、 then, after that 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside ,24,5) 表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as 6) 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spit

12、e of, even though 7) 表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, so, therefore ,as a result 9) 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually ,She came in spite of her cold. Force a laugh in spite of pain.,We met some friends

13、 and other people in addition.,I can help you.Moreover,you should rely on yourself.,25,10) 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列举的过渡词：for exampl

14、e , such as 13) 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, in a word, in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking He has his faults, but, all in all, he is a good helper.,26,英语写作中用好“四心”,1.精心审题，沉着写稿 2.耐心修改，提炼句子 3.细心检查, 消灭错误 4.虚心抄写，一丝不苟。,27,议论文写作技巧,议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场

15、、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文有三要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是:观点正确,认真概括,有实际意义;论据的基本要求是:真实可靠,充分典型;论证的基本要求是:推理必须符合逻辑。 英语议论文的结构一般较为固定,通常包括以下三部分: 1. 在导语部分提出需要议论的议题; 2. 在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论; 3. 在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。,28,lets see some examples,Shall we send children to study abroad? With more and more people becoming rich in recent

16、 years, it is a new tendency for them to send their children to study abroad. But I dont think it is a good idea. First of all, children are too young to look after themselves. Second, the language barrier is a serious problem. Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going ab

17、road. As a result, they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about. Third, they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in the strange land. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country

18、, which might cause a heavy burden to the family. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad. So, wed better not do it.,29,Learn To Respect Our Parents Nowadays, more and more families have only one child. As most of the students today are the only child in the f

19、amily, they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become selfish, without caring too much about their parents.,30,So we should learn to respect our parents. Firstly, we are supposed to remember our parents birthday and express our best wishes to them. Secondly, we should say hello

20、to our parents when we see them returning home. Thirdly, we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home.,31,In a word, respecting parents is our Chinas traditional values. No matter how old we are, its necessary for us to respect our parents.,32,On the one hand, computer has many

21、 advantages. It can help people finish work quickly. And it also can help people to do more and more work. Its not noly a good way for students to receive education but also its very convenient for people to communicate with others by using computers.,33,On the other hand, it has some disadvantages.

22、 Computer can work out difficult math problems that students cant. But it may make them be lacking in thinking. And if you often work with computer, maybe you will get sick. Some people surf the Internet all day, they waste much time and have no time to care for the real people.,34,So we should have

23、 a right way to deal with the greatest invention computer.,35,常见例文,36,My Favorite Places,Many people have favorite places they like to go to when they are feeling sad or bored. I also have favorite places that I go to as often as I can. Here are the three places that I like most. First of all, I lik

24、e the zoo.The animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly! I like to pet(宠) them,feed them and watch them perform. Museums are cool places, too. They have good exhibits(陈列品)and fascinating displays(吸引人的展品). I like the works of art( 艺术品)there. Some museums teach me a lot about h

25、istory and science. From dinosaurs to robots, I love them all. Finally, theme parks are my favourite place. I think the roller coasters are the best. Its fun to scream and get scared. These places always cheer me up(快活）. I try to go to each of my favorite places once a year. I am going to find more

26、favorite places to go to when I grow up.,37,作文走向预测及参考范文,1. 最近，老师布置了一道作业，就 “Can parents be friends?” 这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：45%的同学可能父母太忙，没有时间关心他们。55%的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像朋友一样。你的观点? 请根据以上调查数据，写一份80词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。 I recently surveyed (调查)my classmates about their views(观点) on whether parents can be

27、 friends. According to the survey, 45% of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as theyre always too busy to show their concern. On the other hand, 55% of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with th

28、em like friends at home. In my opinion, its just natural for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other, the parents often talk with their children and know how to share.,38,2. 爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。 要求：1.文

29、中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 2.80100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving is Receiving My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a

30、 month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?,39,3. 假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调

31、查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。 求助对象：同学、朋友，58%，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，30%，有爱心、有经验、可以 信任。无，12%，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。 注意：1内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连 贯，可适当增加内容。2词数：90词左右。 Dear editor, Im a student . We have made a survey“Who do you turn to when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their cl

32、assmates or friends when in trouble as theyre almost of the same age, so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much.

33、They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others. They have few friends. In my opinion, when in trouble wed better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help. Yours Li Hua,40

34、,4、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题，实现祖国的完全统一，是中华儿女的共同期盼。假定你们正举行“我心中的台湾”主题班会，请你根据提示写篇短文。 1：台湾是中国的一部分 2：我所知道的台湾（地理位置、人口或其他资讯）3：台湾与祖国大陆的民间交往（走亲访友、商业往来、兴办工厂等） 4：愿望。 词语准备： Taiwan Island, Taiwanese, the mainland, many kinds of , beautiful , relative, shop ,factory, lie. Visit, build , run. There is but one C

35、hina and Taiwan is part of China. Taiwan, the biggest island, lies to the southeast of Fujian Province. The weather there is warm and wet.So many plants grow very well. The fruit there are really delicious,like bananas,oranges and so on. It has a popolation of 23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds o

36、f products,especially seafood. It is a very beautiful island. Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali are very famous places of interest , Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and some of them build factores and run shops, I love Taiwan very much and I hope I can visi

37、t Taiwan some day. China is getting stronger and stronger. All the people hope Taiwan can come back quickly. Im sure Taiwan will come back in the future.,41,5.阳光运动工程(Sunshine sports program)Dear Jane, Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports program.Now I tell you some sports

38、in our school. Many students doing sports one hour everyday. Different students have different interests. Some boys like playing football, because they love it. Most girls like shopping, because they think it relaxing. But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu, because they believe it can help they

39、keep healthy. And some girls like dancing, because they want to keep fit. I think the sunshine sports program is very important for us. Because the study of students very hard. Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective. And it can help you relax.,42,7. 许多学习

40、生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括： 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 我的压力是什么； 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 参考范文: Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too

41、 much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank