高考英语复习写作第14讲如何写话题类记叙文牛津译林版

第14讲怎样写话题类记叙文第1页——巧记妙叙，难以忘记

一、魔法导航话题类记叙文要注意以下几点:第一,掌握记叙文“六要素”。普通按照事件发展时间次序来讲述,先交

代事件发生时间、地点以及事件所包括人物,然后叙述事件发生原

因、发展经过,最终交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙手法。第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日志或故事类记叙文通

常是统计过去发生事情,所以经常采取普通过去时;叙述当前事情或自

然、社会现象则用普通现在时。第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过

程;第三段说明结果或发表感叹。第2页二、惯用句式(1)Onemorning/day.../Lastweek/Saturday.../Onawinterday.../Thismorning.../It

wasJune20,.../OnMay4,...(2)...wasdoingsth....whensuddenly.../Assoonas...+主句/When...+主句/BeforeI

could...+主句(3)As/Because/Since+从句+主句(4)Aftersometime.../Afterawhile.../Afewminuteslater.../Amomentlater.../

Then...(5)Someweredoing...someweredoing...and/whileothersweredoing...(6)...justthen.../Atthatmoment.../Hardlyhad...when...(7)And.../So.../Therefore.../Asaresult.../Forthat...第3页三、典题示例

真题在线(课标全国Ⅱ)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后我”。请依据以下关键点和你

畅想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。第4页Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.

第5页文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主体时态普通未来时关键点布局1.引题句:我经常想象未来生活(已给出)。2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我生活将和现在大不相同。3.关键点或扩展句:

4.结尾句:总结全文,紧紧围绕主题,如我生活将丰富多彩。

审题谋篇第6页考场作文:Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthe

future.Intenyears,Iwillhavemyownfamily,

①leadahappylife.Asformyjob,Iwillbuild

upmyownbusiness.Notonlywillit②helps

memakealiving,butitwillalsocontributeto

thedevelopmentofthesociety.WhenIhave

freetime,Iwilltake③regularlyexerciseand

becomeavolunteertohelptheelderlypeople.It

isofgreatusetomylifequality.Inbrief,Iwill

sparenoefforttomakemyfuturelifemeaning-

ful.文章提升:1.修改错误:1)lead假如作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应

将①lead改为

。2)在notonly引导倒装句型中助动词will提

前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps

改为

。3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为

。2.提升提议:将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语形式:

。

阅卷现场第7页参考范文:Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentfrom

whatitistodayintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,

probablywithalovelybaby.IhopeIwillworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.I

willenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.IwilldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.

Inmysparetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvarious

ballgames.Duringmyholidays,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbericher

andmorecolorful.

答案1.修改错误:1)leading2)help3)regular2.提升提议:Whenhavingfreetime第8页四、高分秀场(山东临沂高三一模)假定你名字叫鲁沂,你打算高考结束后在暑假期间打工。现在请你

用英文写一篇短文介绍自己。内容关键点以下:★年纪、性别★性格、兴趣★打工理由注意:1.词数100左右。

第9页2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[我来试写]

第10页Inthesummervacation,Iamlongingtotakeapart-timejob.Thefirstreasonisthat

Icanearnsomepocketmoneytosatisfymydailyneedsandthusdevelopasense

ofindependence.Besides,Icanbuildupnewfriendshipandimprovesocialskills

sothatIcandevelopmyabilitytoadapttothesociety.

答案Onepossibleversion:I'mLuYi,ano