交通出行（词汇+句型+素材积累+操练）-2022年中考英语话题作文复习

主题四交通出行(TheWaysofTransportation)

随着城市现代生活水平的日渐提高，城市的交通问题也愈来愈成为人们必须关注的问题了。由于私家

车的增多，交通法规的遵守与否而引发的交通阻塞、交通事故等，已经成为我们亟待解决的问题。所以有

关这一主题的讨论也是中考作文的重要考核点之一。

一.主题词汇

begettingmoreandmoreconvenient

causeseriousairpollutionandnoisepollution

takebusesortheundergroundinsteadofdrivingcars

followthetrafficlaws

allthetime

befilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses

morefly-overs

二.有用句型

1.Itishardtosay...

2....isgettingmoreandmoreconvenient.

3.Inmypointofview,weshould...

4.Inthepast,...,butnow...

5.Inordertoimprovethetraffic,mysuggestionis...

三.模拟试题

请以“Trafficinourcity”为题写一篇短文。

参考句型：

1.Whatdoyouthinkofthetrafficinourcity?

2.Whydoyouthinkso?(Giveatleasttworeasons)

3.Whatis/areyoursuggestion(s)toimprovethetrafficinourcity?

要点分析

1.这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。

a.必须写出你眼中的城市交通状况（可以是好的，也可以是糟的）。

b.必须写出你为什么认为会是这样的现状。（至少给出两条理由）

c.必须写出你对改善交通现状的建议。

2.时态：一般现在时。

写作素材

(1)TrafficinShanghaiisveryheavybecauseShanghaiisaninternationalcity.

(2)It'shardtosaythetrafficinourcityisgood.Actually,it'sterribleenough!Everyday,therearelotsoftraffic

jamsinthisbusycity.

(3)Trafficplaysanimportantroleineverycity.

(4)Thetrafficinourcityisgettingmoreandmoreconvenient.

2.造成城市交通现状的原因的句子

(1)Thenumberofprivatecarsisbecominglargerandlarger.Moreimportantly,thissituationcausesseriousair

pollutionandnoisepollution.

(2)InShanghai,trafficisabigproblemnowadays.Thecityisalwayscrowdedinthemorningandintheevening.

Thestreetsarefilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses.What*sworse,somepeopledon'tfollowthetrafficlaws.They

makethetrafficevenmoreterrible.

(3)Inthepast,wecouldonlygettoChongmingIslandbyferryandittookusalotoftime,butnowwecango

therebycaranditonlytakesusanhour.Moretunnelshavebeenbuiltsothatwecantravelinthecitymoreeasily.

(4)Somecarownersdrivetheircars,eventhoughtheyhaven'tpassedthedrivingtest.Thisisagainstthelaw.

(5)Carshavepollutedtheenvironment.Peopleinfactoriessaytheywanttomakecarsthatpolluteless.Butothers

saymakingcarsthatpollutelesswillneverbeasgoodashavingfewercars.

3.提出一些合理建议来改善城市交通的

(l)Inordertoimprovethetraffic,mysuggestionistowidentheroads.Theroadsherearesonarrowandcrowded.

(2)1hopetherewillbemorefly-oversinthefuture.!thinkthetrafficinourcitywillbebetterandbetter.

(3)Inmyopinion,weshouldtakebusesorundergroundsinsteadofdrivingcarswhenwegoout.Wemustfollow

thetrafficlawsallthetimeaswell.

(4)Inmysuggestion,weshouldbegreenconsumers.Wecantrytoridebicycleseveryday.Itisthebasicwayto

improveacity*straffic.

(5)Tosolvetheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldlimitthenumberofprivatecarsandencouragecitizensto

choosepublictransportation.

(6)Thegovernmentshouldpassalawwhichasksallcarstotakeatesteverytwoyears.Thistestistomakesure

thatthecarissafeandingoodcondition.

(7)Isuggestpeopleusepublictransportduringtherushhours.

(8)Thegovernmentshouldalsotakesomemeasurestosolvethetrafficproblems,suchaswideningtheroads,

buildingoverpassesandsoon.

4.结束语

(1)Ifwedothisasmuchaspossible,Ibelievethatourtrafficandenvironmentwillbebetter.

(2)Weshouldobeythetrafficrulesaswell.Bettertraffic,betterlife!

(3)IfallthecitizensofShanghaicandothesewell,thetrafficwillnolongerbeaprobleminthefuture.

(4)Aslongaseveryonedoesitwellandthegovernmenttakeseffectiveactions,!believetheproblemabouttraffic

jamscanbesolvedsoon.

例文分析

TrafficinShanghaiisveryheavybecauseShanghaiisaninternationalcity.Withthedevelopmentof

transportation,thenumberofprivatecarsisbecominglargerandlarger.Theroadsarealwayscrowdedinthe

morningandintheevening.Thestreetsarefilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses.Inaddition,somepeopledon't

followthetrafficlaw.Theymakethetrafficevenworse.

Forthesereasons,Ithinkthattheproblemoftheheavytrafficmustbesolved.Wecangotoschoolbybusinstead

ofbycar.Ifwedothisasmuchaspossible,Ibelievethatourtrafficandenvironmentwillbebetter.

四.写作操练

1.现在由于种种原因，交通事故在逐年增加，所以我们每个公民都应遵守交通规则。请

以"Obeytrafficrules”为题写一篇短文。

参考范文与答案：

Obeytrafficrules

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,nowadays,moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars.Butmore

accidentscomewithit.Caraccidentsarehappeningaroundus.Wecanusuallyhearthenewsofthetraffic

accidentsbetweencarsandcitizens.Tokeepourselvessafe,weshouldobeytrafficrules.Whenwecrossaroad,we

shouldmakesurethetrafficlightisgreen,andthenweshouldnoticetherearenocarsdrivingfastorturningleftor

right.Ontheotherhand,driversshoulddriveslowlywhentherearepeoplecrossingtheroad,orwaitandletthem

gofirst.Inaddition,theyshouldneverdriveafterdrinking.Ibelieveifeveryonecandohispartwell,accidentswill

happenlesssothatwecanbesaferinthefuture.

2.拥有私家车的利与弊已经成为大家都热切关心的社会热点问题之一。请以“Myviewonowningacar”为题写

一篇短文。

Suggestedquestions:

a.Doesyourfamilyownacar?

b.Areyoufororagainstowningacar?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

参考范文与答案：

Myviewonowningacar

Todayfamilycarsarebecomingmoreandmorepopularbecausethey'reconvenientand

fast.Butcarsmaybringustrouble.SoIamagainstowningfamilycars.Firstly,trafficbecomesbusierandmore

accidentshappen.Trafficaccidentskillthousandsandthousandsofpeopleeachyear.Secondly,carsdrinkuphuge

amountsoffuelandthrowouthugeamountsofpollutants.Thenoisetheymakealsopollutesthe

environment.Furthermore,withtheincreaseofcars,parkingplaceswillbeabigproblem,too.Inaword,I'magainst

owningfamilycars.

3.请以“Sharedbike,anewwayoflife!”为题写一篇短文。

Questionsforreference:

a.Whydoyouthinkitisanewwayoflife?

b.Couldyougivesomesuggestionsonmakingbetteruseofthesharedbikes?

参考范文与答案：

Sharedbike,anewwayoflife!

Bicycle-sharinghascomeintopeople'slifeinChina.Itsclearthatbicycle-sharinghasalotofadvantages.It

enablespeopletosolvethe“lastmileHproblem.Sharedbikescanbefoundalmosteverywhereatanytime,soitisof

greatconvenienceforpeopletotravelaroundanditdoesn'tcostmuch.Mostimportantly,cyclingmeansagreen

wayoftransportation.Themoreyouusesharedbikes,thelesspollutionyou'llproduce.

However,aftertheuseofthebike-sharing,people'swrongdoingshavecausedsomeproblems.Someusers

parkthebikesinwrongplaces.Furthermore,somepeoplekeepthebikesastheirown.What'sworse,afewusers

evendamagethebikes.

Allofusshouldtrytoobeytherulesandtakecareofsharedbikeswhilemakinguseofthem.Thegovernment

andcompaniesshouldalsoimprovetheirmanagement.

4.社会发展与人们生活水平提高的同时也引发了不少问题，比如交通阻塞现象。那么如何解决这一问题呢？

你有哪些好的建议？请以“Howtosolvetrafficjams”为题写一篇短文。

参考范文与答案：

Howtosolvetrafficjams

Withthedevelopmentofthesocietyandtheimprovementofpeople'slife,privatecarsaregettingmoreand

morepopular.Asaresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams,andtheairbecomesmoreandmoreterrible.

Ithinktherearesomemeasurestosolvetheseproblems.First,weshouldrideabikeortakeabustogoto

schoolorworkfortheyaremoreenvironment-friendly.Isuggestweshouldusepublictransportduringtherush

hours.Thegovernmentshouldalsotakesomemeasurestosolvethetrafficproblems,suchaswideningtheroads,

buildingoverpassesandsoon.

Aslongaseveryonedoeshisbitandthegovernmenttakeseffectiveactions,!believetheproblemsabout

trafficjamscanbesolvedsoon.

5.每逢黄金周七天小长假，越来越多的人们涌入旅游者的行列。你觉得在黄金周旅游是否值得推崇？请发表

你的观点。请以"MyviewontravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday”为题写一篇短文。

Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:

a.IstravellingduringGoldenWeekholidayagoodidea?

b.What'syourview?(Givesomeadvantagesanddisadvantages)

参考范文与答案：

MyviewontravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday

Forthe7-dayGoldenWeekholiday,travellinghasalreadybecomeapartofpeople'srelaxationactivities.Some

peopleareinfavorofthisdecision,whileothersdonotagreewithit.Ihavemyownviewaboutit.

TherearesomeadvantagesfortravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday.First,theholidayeconomywillgreatly

raisepeople'sconsumption.Inaddition,itbenefitstourism,transportation,hotelsandserviceindustriesandenables

themtothrive,whichinturnaddsfueltotheoveralleconomicgrowth.

However,italsohassomedisadvantages.First,thetravelcrazeputsaheavyburdenonthetraffic

system,causingserioustrafficjams.Besides,thousandsoftouristsfloodintoscenicspots,jammingrailwaystations

andairports,causingsomesafetyproblems.

Aboveall,Isuggestthegovernmenttakeeffectivemeasurestosolvetheseproblems.Wehopetravellingin

GoldenWeekholidaywillmakeourlifemorewonderful.

6.交通与安全是息息相关、不可分割的两个大问题，如何安全出行、文明驾驶、解除危险

隐患是大家密切关心的。请以“Whosedutyisoursafety?”为题写一篇短文。

参考范文与答案：

Whosedutyisoursafety?

Therehappenedalotofaccidentstoourmiddleschoolstudentsinthepastfewyears.Ourteachersandparents

arealwaysworriedaboutoursafety.ManypeoplethinkitisourschooVsdutytokeepussafewhileothersthinkit's

ourfamilies'.ButIthinkitismainlyourownduty.Asweknow,ourteachersandparentsoftenaskustokeepsafe

whetherwhenweareatschoolorathome.Theyoftentellustokeeptotherightontheroad,nottoeatjunkfood,

nottotouchelectricitybuttons,nottoswimindeepwater,nottogotodangerousplaces.Wehaveaccidentsmostly

becauseweforgetwhatourteachersandparentshavetoldus.Sodon'tcomplainmuchaboutothers;thinkmore

aboutourownduty.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesatanytime.

7.随着社会的发展和进步，解决交通问题已经迫在眉睫，请你以LiLei的名义，以“A

letteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems”为题给CityDaily的编辑写一封信谈论这个话题。

Aletteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems

DearEditor,

参考范文与答案：

Aletteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems

DearEditor,

I'dliketoexpressmythoughtsondealingwithourcity*strafficproblems.Asyouknow,thestreetsinShanghai

areusuallycrowded.Therearehundredsofprivatecars.That'sbecausethepublictransportisn'tconvenientenough.

It*stooslowforpeoplewhoareinahurry.Asaresult,manycitizenschooseprivatecars.Butwithsomanyprivate

cars,theairpollutionwillbeworse.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldn'tdriveprivatecarstoooften.Ibelieveifthe

publictransportisimproved,therewillbelesstrafficinthecity.Ihopeyoucanhelpspreadtheimportanceof

publictransportbytheCityDailyNewssothatmoreandmorepeoplewilltakepublictransporttotravel.Andthen

Ithinkourenvironmentwillbecomebetter.

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiLei

8.为了缓解城市的交通压力，越来越多的城市引入了大量的共享单车，但之后出现了诸多问题，比如共享单

车被乱扔、被破坏等。请以“There，salwayshope”为题写一篇短文谈谈你对解决这些问题有什么想法。

参考范文与答案：

There'salwayshope

Torelievetrafficjamsandairpollution,manycitieshaveintroducedbike-sharingservices.Butproblemskeep

showingup.

Atfirst,whenpeoplearedoneusingthebike,someofthemjustthrowitontostreets,somebikesarestolenor

lockedupinchains.Besides,thedamagetotheORcodesonthebikeshasbroughthugelossestobike-sharing

companies.

Toimprovethissituation,there'salwayshope.NowIhaveagoodsuggestion.Bike-sharingcompaniesshall

have100creditscoresforeachuser.Penaltypointswillbetakenincaseofusers'badbehaviors.Furthermore,

bike-sharingserviceswillworkwellonlyifpeoplefollowtherulesandshowrespectforthebikesandotherusers.

However,punishmentmaynotbethebestwaytostopsharedbikesfrombeingstolenordam