高考英语复习读后续写练习：从个人到群体：垃圾收集行动的传递

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从个人到群体：垃圾收集行动的传递1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwas16,myparentsandImovedtoasmalltownofArizona.Sincemyparentswereverybusyatthattime,myAuntJuliaoftentookcareofmeduringtheirabsence.Onerainyday,whenJuliaandIwereheadingtowardhome,Icaughtsightofanoldladywearinganorangejacketwithahugebagandawalkingstick.Outofcuriosity,IaskedJulia,“Whoisshe?Whatisshedoingwiththathugebag?”Juliacaughtaglimpseather,thentoldme,“SheiscalledMelinda.Shehasbeencollectinggarbagewiththathugegarbagebaginthetownforseveralyears.Nobodyknowswhyshe’sbeendoingit.Maybejustforfun.”Hearingherwords,Icouldn’thelpexclaiming,“Wow!It’ssostrange!Whydoesshefinditfunnytocollectgarbage?”4续写原文Sincethatday,Ihadcomeacrossherformanytimesonmywayhome.Shealwayscarriedthehugegarbagebagwhetheritwasrainyorsunny.Gradually,Ididn’tfindherstrangeforcollectinggarbage.Instead,Ibegantogreetherwithasmile.Twoyearslater,IwasadmittedtoChicagoUniversity.Tomydisappointment,Ioftensawtrashonthelawnoncampus.“Whyshouldpeoplelittereverywhere?Whoisresponsibleforthetrash?”Afewdayslater,itoccurredtomethat,sincenobodytookresponsibilityforit,whynotcollecttrashmyself?Thatway,Icouldwalkpastthelawnwithoutfeelingguilty.5续写原文Then,Itookaction.IalwaystookatrashbagandcollecttrashonthelawneverytimeIwalkedpastit.Afewstudentsalsofollowedsuitsoonafterwards,keepingtheschoolcleanerandprettierthanbefore.Oneday,anideapoppedintomyheadwhenIfinishedcollectingtrash——maybewecouldhelpmakethecitycleanerandprettiertoo!Despitethethoughtthatcollectingtrashinfrontofsomanypeopleoutsideschoolwasawkward,Iknewitwastherightthingtodo.SoIdecidedtogiveitago.6段首句Paragraph1：Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.Paragraph2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析916岁时，“我”随父母搬到亚利桑那州的小镇，常受朱莉娅阿姨照顾。一天，“我”和阿姨在雨中看到一位叫梅林达的老太太常年收集垃圾。两年后，“我”进入芝加哥大学，校园草坪垃圾多，于是“我”开始收集垃圾，带动了部分同学。后来，“我”又萌生帮助美化城市的想法，并决定付诸行动。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.一天，我在校外收集垃圾。刚开始，周围的人投来异样的目光，有的小声议论，似乎觉得我这样的行为很怪异。但我没有在意，继续认真地捡起地上的纸屑、烟头和塑料瓶。过了一会儿，一位牵着小狗的老奶奶走过来，她微笑着对我说：“孩子，你做得对，城市就需要你这样有公德心的人。”受到鼓励，我更有干劲了。这时，一个背着书包的小学生跑过来，好奇地问我在做什么。我耐心地解释后，他说：“姐姐，我也想帮忙。”于是，我给他找来一个小袋子，我们一起在街道上清理垃圾，吸引了更多人的关注。11续写思路分析Para2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.然后我意识到，我应该鼓励更多学生参与。我先是在学校的论坛上发布了捡垃圾行动的帖子，详细介绍了行动的意义和目前取得的成果。接着，我制作了精美的海报，张贴在学校的各个角落。在学校的广播中，我也呼吁大家一起为美化城市出一份力。没想到，同学们的响应十分热烈。大家纷纷报名参加，我们还成立了专门的环保社团。从那以后，每个周末，我们都会组织大规模的捡垃圾活动。在大家的共同努力下，城市变得越来越干净、美丽，我们也在这个过程中收获了满满的成就感和责任感。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.Atfirst,peoplearoundcaststrangelooksatme.Somewerewhispering,asiftheythoughtmybehaviorwasreallyweird.However,Ididn'tcareandcontinuedtopickupthepaperscraps,cigarettebutts,andplasticbottlesonthegroundcarefully.Afterawhile,anoldladywalkingherdogcameuptome.Shesmiledandsaid,“Kid,you'redoingtherightthing.Thecityneedspeoplelikeyouwithasenseofpublicmorality.”Encouragedbyherwords,Ibecamemoreenergetic.Justthen,aprimaryschoolstudentwithaschoolbagonhisbackranoverandaskedmecuriouslywhatIwasdoing.AfterIpatientlyexplained,hesaid,“Sister,Iwanttohelptoo.”So,Ifoundasmallbagforhim,andwecleanedthegarbageonthestreettogether,attractingmorepeople'sattention.14范文呈现ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.First,Ipostedathreadaboutthegarbage-collectingactionontheschoolforum,introducingindetailthesignificanceoftheactionandtheachievementswehadmadesofar.Then,Imadebeautifulpostersandputthemupineverycorneroftheschool.Ialsoappealedtoeveryonetocontributetobeautifyingthecitythroughtheschoolbroadcast.Tomysurprise,thestudentsrespondedenthusiastically.Everyonesigneduptoparticipate,andweevenestablishedaspecialenvironmentalprotectionclub.Sincethen,everyweekend,wewouldorganizelarge-scalegarbage-collectingactivities.Withourjointefforts,thecitybecamecleanerandmorebeautiful,andwealsogainedafullsenseofachievementandresponsibilityinthisprocess.15升级版范文呈现Oneday,asIembarkedonmygarbage-collectingmissionoutsidetheschool,Iwasmetwithabarrageofcuriousandoftenquizzicalstares.Whisperstrailedinmywake,asonlookerspuzzledovermyunorthodoxactivity.Undeterred,Iremainedfocused,meticulouslypluckingpaperscraps,cigarettebutts,andplasticbottlesfromtheground.Momentslater,anelderlylady,accompaniedbyherfurrycompanion,approachedwithawarmsmile.“Youngster,”shecommended,“you'remakingarealdifference.Ourcitythrivesonthededicationofindividualslikeyou,withadeep-seatedsenseofcivicduty.”Emboldenedbyherwords,Iredoubledmyefforts.Justthen,ayoungpupil,backpackbouncing,boundedover,eyesalightwithcuriosity.“Whatareyouupto?”heinquired.Afterapatientexplanation,heeagerlyvolunteered,“Iwanttolendahand,too!”Equippedwithasmallbag,wesetaboutourtaskside-by-side,graduallydrawingmoreeyesandkindlinginterestamongpassers-by.16升级版范文呈现Subsequently,therealizationdawnedthatbroaderparticipationwaskey.Itooktotheschoolforum,penningadetailedpostthatnotonlychronicledourongoingeffortsbutalsoelucidatedtheprofoundimpactofourgarbage-collectinginitiative.Complementingthis,Icraftedeye-catchingposters,whichweresoonplasteredacrosseverynookandcrannyoftheschoolcampus.Throughthe