高考英语复习读后续写练习：以表姐为榜样鲁比逐梦同校

高考英语读后续写语篇练习以表姐为榜样，鲁比逐梦同校1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ruby,al6-year-oldgirlinChicagoNo.1HighSchool,alwayslookeduptohercousinWanda,whowastwoyearsolderthanherandwasstudyinginauniversity.Rubywastheonlychildinherfamily,sosheregardedWandaasher“immediate”sister.Wandawasnotonlybeautiful,butalsosmart.Shealwayshadbestgradesintheexamsandshecouldplayseveralkindsofmusicalinstruments,especiallythepiano.Therefore,shewasverypopularinherschoolandshehadalotoffriends.InRuby'seyes,WandawasaperfectgirlsosheconsideredWandaasherexample.RubywasstillinhighschoolbutshewantedtogotothesameuniversityasWandadid.RubywaseveninthesameclubsinthesamehighschoolasWandausedtobe.WandaknewthatRubylookeduptoherandsheappreciatedthat.OnChristmasDay,WandasentRubyasweaterwithheruniversity'slogoonitasagift.Rubywassohappywhenshegotthesweater.Sheputitonrightawayandworeitalmosteveryday.4续写原文Onedayinclass,Rubyraisedherhandtoanswertheteacher'squestionandtheteacher,whohadeverbeenWanda'sheadteacher,accidentallycalledherWanda.“Oh,I'msorry,butyoujustlookalittlelikeher,”theteachersaid.“I'msoglad,"Rubysaid.Fromthatdayon,RubystudiedharderandharderbecauseWandadidwellinallhersubjects.Rubyjustwantedtocatchupwithher.Whencollegeadmissionresultscameout,Rubywassonervoustovisitthewebsitetoseeifshegotadmitted.Sheclosedhereyesandslowlyopenedthem.Shefoundoutthatshegotaccepted!5段首句Paragraph1：ShecalledWandaatonce.Paragraph2：Thenextday,WandapickedRubyupandtheydrovetotheiruniversity.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析816岁的鲁比是芝加哥第一高中的学生，她独爱表姐万达，视其为完美典范。万达美丽聪慧，成绩优异，擅长乐器，在学校备受欢迎。鲁比渴望像万达一样，不仅想考入万达所在大学，还加入万达曾参加的高中社团。万达知晓鲁比的崇敬，送她带大学校徽的毛衣。鲁比受激励努力学习，最终成功被该大学录取。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ShecalledWandaatonce.她立刻拨通了万达的电话。电话刚一接通，鲁比就抑制不住内心的激动，大声喊道：“万达表姐，我被录取啦！我真的考上咱们梦寐以求的大学了！”电话那头的万达先是一愣，随即传来她欢快的笑声和祝贺声：“太棒了，鲁比！我就知道你肯定行！这一路你付出了太多努力，能有今天的结果，完全是你应得的。我为你感到无比骄傲！”鲁比兴奋地跟万达分享自己此刻的心情，还说起自己对大学生活的各种憧憬，比如参加更多有趣的社团活动，挑战高难度的课程。万达耐心地听着，不时给出一些实用的建议，像哪些课程比较有趣且能提升能力，哪些老师教学风格独特，如何合理安排学习和社交时间，让大学生活更加充实。10续写思路分析Para2：Thenextday,WandapickedRubyupandtheydrovetotheiruniversity.第二天，万达早早地开车来接鲁比，两人一同驶向大学。一进入校园，鲁比就被眼前的一切深深吸引，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。万达像个贴心的导游，带着鲁比开启校园之旅。她们首先来到图书馆，高大的书架上摆满了各种各样的书籍，仿佛一座知识的宝库等待着鲁比去探索。接着，她们来到音乐楼，万达曾在这里用钢琴弹奏出美妙的乐章。鲁比感受着这里的艺术氛围，心中满是对未来大学生活的期待。最后，她们来到食堂，品尝着各种美食。鲁比觉得自己仿佛置身于梦想的天堂，她深刻地意识到，以万达为榜样的这段历程，不仅让她踏入了这所理想的大学，更让自己在成长的道路上不断蜕变，成为更好的自己。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现ShecalledWandaatonce.AssoonasWandaansweredthephone,Rubycouldn'tholdbackherexcitementandshouted,"Wanda,Igotadmitted!I'mreallygoingtotheuniversitywe'vebeendreamingof!"Wandaontheotherendofthelinewasstartledatfirst,andthenhercheerfullaughterandcongratulationscame,"That'samazing,Ruby!Iknewyoucouldmakeit!You'veputinsomucheffortalongtheway,andthisresultiswell-deserved.I'mextremelyproudofyou!"RubyexcitedlysharedherfeelingsatthemomentwithWandaandtalkedabouthervariousvisionsforcollegelife,suchasparticipatinginmoreinterestingclubactivitiesandtakingchallengingcourses.Wandalistenedpatientlyandgavesomepracticalsuggestionsfromtimetotime,likewhichcourseswereinterestingandcouldimproveabilities,whichteachershaduniqueteachingstyles,andhowtoarrangestudyandsocialtimereasonablytomakecollegelifemorefulfilling.13范文呈现Thenextday,WandapickedRubyupandtheydrovetotheiruniversity.Assoonastheyenteredthecampus,Rubywasdeeplyattractedbyeverythinginfrontofher,andhereyessparkledwithexcitement.Wanda,likeaconsideratetourguide,ledRubyonacampustour.First,theycametothelibrary,wheretallbookshelveswerefilledwithallkindsofbooks,likeatreasuretroveofknowledgewaitingforRubytoexplore.Then,theyarrivedatthemusicbuilding,whereWandausedtoplaywonderfulmusiconthepiano.Rubyfelttheartisticatmospherehere,andherheartwasfullofanticipationforherfuturecollegelife.Finally,theywenttothecafeteriaandtastedvariouskindsoffood.Rubyfeltasifshewasinadreamparadise.ShedeeplyrealizedthatthejourneyoffollowingWandaasanexamplenotonlyledhertothisidealuniversitybutalsomadeherconstantlytransformandbecomeabetterpersononthepathofgrowth.14升级版范文呈现ShecalledWandawithoutdelay.TheinstantWandapickedupthephone,Rubyeruptedwithunrestrainedexcitement,exclaiming,"Wanda!I'vebeenadmitted!I'mactuallygoingtotheveryuniversitywe'velongyearnedfor!"Wanda,initiallytakenaback,wassoonovercomewithelation,herjubilantlaughterandheartfeltcongratulationsfillingtheairwaves."That'strulyremarkable,Ruby!Ihadfullfaithinyourcapabilities.Yourarduouseffortsthroughouthavebornefruit,andthisachievementisnothingshortofwell-earned.Icouldn'tbeprouderofyou!"Ruby,brimmingwithenthusiasm,pouredouthercurrentemotionstoWanda,eagerlysharinghervividaspirationsforcollegelife.Shespokeofhereagernesstoengageinaplethoraofintriguingclubactivitiesandembarkonchallengingacademiccourses.Wandalistenedattentively,interjectingpracticaladviceatintervals.Sherecommendedcoursesrenownedfortheirenrichingcontentandability-enhancingpotential,highlightedprofessorswithdistinctiveteachingstyles,andofferedinsightsonhowtostrikeaharmoniousbalancebetweenstudyandsocialendeavors,ensuringafulfillingcollegeexperience.15升级版范文呈现Thefollowingday,WandaarrivedpromptlytopickRubyup,andtogethertheysetofffortheuniversity.Themomenttheysteppedontothecampus,Rubywascaptivatedbythesightsthatunfoldedbeforeher,hereyesalightwithexhilaration.Wanda,assumingtheroleofathoughtfultourguide,ledRubyonanexplorationofthecampus.Theirfirststopwasthelibrary,ahavenwheretoweringbookshelvesgroanedundertheweightofcountlesstomes,resemblingavastrepositoryofknowledgeawaitingRuby'sdiscovery.Next,theymadetheirway