专题08-读后续写(解析版)

专题08读后续写 难度：★★★★☆建议用时：40分钟得分：2022年全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone’sjoy,hereachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.【解析】【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。2.续写线索：鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛3.词汇激活：行动类：①深呼吸：withadeepbreath/breathedeeply②坚持做：insistedondoing/besticktodoing情绪类：①热情：enthusiastically/withgreatpassion②骄傲：beproudof/takepridein【点睛】[高分句型1].Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2].Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.(现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)[高分句型3].Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.(含有Itwas…that结构的强调句型)2022年全国高考新高考IⅠ卷Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone’sjoy,hereachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.【解析】【导语】本文以赛跑为线索展开。作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句内容”我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。2.续写线索：鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛3.词汇激活：行动类：①深呼吸：withadeepbreath/breathedeeply②坚持做：insistedondoing/besticktodoing情绪类：①热情：enthusiastically/withgreatpassion②骄傲：beproudof/takepridein【点睛】[高分句型1].Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2].Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.(现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)[高分句型3].Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.(含有Itwas…that结构的强调句型)3．（2023·安徽·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It’samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(断奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.”Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn’tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Butthefamilywasnonetoohappyabouthisvisit.Theyscoldedandswattedathim.AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.Andthenhequicklylearnedsomesocialskills.Hewouldtakesomesnackstomeetthem.Forseveraldaysheplayedalldayinthetreessurroundingourhousebutcamedownatbedtime.Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgirlsfretted.TheywantedtoseekSquirt.Wepreventedthembecauseitwastoodangerous.Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.Andthatremainedthepatternforweeks.Theexperiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfamily.Inthewildandsomewhatsillymomentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirrel,ourchildrenlearnedtovalueandappreciatelife.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决定收养它，看着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可描写Squirt遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。②由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。2.续写线索：遇到灰松鼠——与灰松鼠一家交往——没有回家，担心它——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①责骂：scold/blame/rebuke②拍打：swat/slap/hit③寻找：seek/find/lookfor/searchfor④阻止：prevent/putastopto/headoff情绪类①高兴的：happy/delighted②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing【点睛】[高分句型1]AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)[高分句型2]Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.(when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)4．（2023·吉林·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasneververyneat.LaterinlifeIlearnedtoattribute(把……归因于)thisshortcomingtomycreativegenius,sayingthatmydisorganizationwassimplythesideofmyuniquegiftsandtalents.Yet,backathighschool,Ihadn’tcomeupwithanyimpressivereasonsformybigmesses.Asfatewouldhaveit,myteacherpairedmewithKimasmyroommate.I’mnotsurewhyhestuckustogether.Idon’tthinkhecouldhavepossiblypickedtwomoredifferentpeopletoroomtogether.Kimwasextremelyorganized.Shelabeledeverythingandeachitemsheownedhaditsplace.Well,Ithinkmybitsandpiecesofpaper,oddsandends(零碎物品)wouldfindtheirwaysintoplacesautomatically.Andapparently,myroommatedidn’tseemtobeonthesamepagewithme.Astimewentby,shegotneater,whileIgotmessier.Shewouldcomplainaboutmydirtyclothes.IwouldcomplainaboutLysol(杀菌消毒剂)headaches.ShewouldpushgentlymyclothingovertoonesideandIwouldlayoneofmybooksonhertidydesk.OneOctoberevening,thingsgotugly.Kimcameintotheroomandlosthertemperrightawayafterseeingoneofmyshoeshadfounditswaybeneathherbed.Shepickeditup,castittowardmysideoftheroomangrilyandmanagedtoknockthelayerofclothesontothefloor(bytheway,Ihadplannedtofoldthemlater).Ijumpedoffthebedandimmediatelystartedyellingaboutherrudeness.Sheyelledback,“Lookatthemessyou’vemade!Couldyouatleastcleanupyourowntable!”Iwassittingonmybed,fuming(发怒).Shewassittingonhers,fuming.Theroomwasthickwithanger.Itcouldhaveendedawithaviolentfightifithadn’tbeenforthephonecallshereceived.注意：续写词数应为150左右。ShepickedthephoneupandIcouldtellitwasbadnewsfromherfamily.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfoundmyselflostforwordsandIdecidedtodosomething.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:ShepickedthephoneupandIcouldtellitwasbadnewsfromherfamily.WhenKimhungup,sheburiedherfaceinherhands,herbodyshakingasshesobbed.Herdadwasbadlyillinhospital.Obviously,thatwassomethingsheshouldnotgothroughalone.Iwalkedtowardsherandpattedherontheback.Obviously,mypatwasoflittlecomfort.Instead,shethrewherselfontothebedandcriedintoherpillow,sinkingintoherdeepsorrow.Paragraph2:IfoundmyselflostforwordsandIdecidedtodosomething.Istartedtocollectmyoddsandends,clothesandshoes,sweptthefloorandtidiedthetable.Ievencleanedherside.IwassoabsorbedthatIdidn’tevennoticeKimstopcryingandsitupstaringatmeindisbelief.Isteppedtowardsher,sayingsoftly,“ItwillbeOK.”Kimreachedherhandovertograspmine,murmuring“Thankyou?”.Suddenly,Irealizedthegoldenrulebetweenfriendswasputtingyourselfintoothers’shoes.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。文章讲述了作者不爱整洁，不爱收拾，但她遇到了一个非常爱干净的高中室友。两个人不同的生活习性导致了矛盾。就在僵持不下的时候，室友接到了一个电话。【详解】1.段落续写①根据第一段首句“她拿起电话，我知道这是她家里传来的坏消息。”可知，接下来的段落可以描写这通电话的接通，带给室友Kim痛苦，让她伤心。②根据第二段首句“我发现自己无言以对，于是我决定做点什么。”可知，接下来的内容可以描写作者开始整理东西，并且也把室友Kim那边也收拾了。这使得两人最终合好。2.续写线索接电话——挂断电话——Kim哭泣——决定做些事——整理——相互理解——感悟3.词汇激活行为类摇晃：shake/movebackandforth/moveinvoluntarily哭泣：sob/cry/weep步行：walk/step/goonfoot情绪类悲伤：sorrow/sadness/misfortune说不出话，不知所措：lostforwords/ataloss【点睛】【高分句型1】Instead,shethrewherselfontothebedandcriedintoherpillow,sinkingintoherdeepsorrow.（运用了现在分词作状语）【高分句型2】IwassoabsorbedthatIdidn’tevennoticeKimstopcryingandsitupstaringatmeindisbelief.（运用了so...that...的句型）5．（2023·广东佛山·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iranafterthetrain,shouting,“Heymister,can’tyouseeme?”Itwashopeless,asnoconductorisgoingtoslowdownfora60-year-oldmanwhogottothestationseveralminuteslate.Theyabsolutelydidn’tknowhowimportantthatday,thattrainridewastome!Iwasonmywaytoaninterviewforwhatcouldhavebeentheopportunityofalifetime.Ithrewbothmyhatandmyartcasedownindepression,andsatdownonthenearestchair,wiping(擦掉)thesweatfrommyfaceandbreathingheavily.Iwouldhavetowaitawholedayforthenexttrain,andbythenmyappointmentwiththegalleryownerwouldhavegivenuponme.Perhapsitwasforthebest.Itwas,afterall,thefirsttimein40yearsanyonehadshownsuchaninterestinmyart.Maybeifthegalleryownerhadseenallmypaintings,hewouldhavechangedhismindaboutofferingmespaceonhiswalls.Disappointmentfilledmysoul.ShouldIdialthegalleryandgetaninterviewonadifferentday?ButPierreGianniwastheownerofthemostwell-knowngalleryinNewYorkCity.Whywouldhegiveararesecondchancetoanelderlynobodywhenhehadthenewest,coolestyoungartiststochoosefrom?Cometothinkofit,perhapstheseinsecuritiesweretheveryreasonIhadneverbeenofferedashowbefore.Iwastooafraidtotry.Ifoundcountlessexcusesnottooffermyworkuptobeseenandperhapscriticized.ItoldmyselfitwouldhurttoomuchifIfailed,butthetruthwasthatIhadnevertried.Finally,Igatheredallmycouragetodialthegallery,onlytofindmyantiquecellphonehadbrokendown.ItwasattheverymomentthatIwasintotaldespairanddecidedtogohome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SuddenlyIfeltatouchonmyshoulder.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The