单元主题写作

单元主题写作Unit3Familyties一、主题分析本单元的话题为“家庭”，通过介绍自己的家庭，探究家庭的意义及家人之间的和谐友爱。本单元的书面表达围绕此话题展开。二、素材积累(一)常用词汇：care//hug//kiss//growth//seldom//touching//strict//silent//alive//harmony//solve//relationship//parent//finish//serious//disease//pull//move//inreturn//notonly...butalso//takegoodcareof//lookafter//fallill//alldayandallnight//Father’sDay//Mother’sDay//birthday//humorous//kind//inhospital//better//deeply//healthy//happy//forever(二)常用句型：开头句1.Heishumorous,kindandoutgoing.2.Inmanyotherpeople’seyes,heseemstobeveryordinary.Butheisquite...tome.中间句1.WhenIwasyoung,I...2.OnceIwasseriouslyillinhospital,he...3.I...withhisgreatcare.4.Iwasmoveddeeplyby...结尾句1.Ihopehe’llbe...forever.2.Hisloveisthesuninwinter,whichkeepsmewarmandhelpsmegrowuphappily.3.Hehelpsmeovercomedifficultiesandteachesmehowtolove.三、以读促写6月15日是父亲节。请你以“MyFather”为题，写一篇短文。从性格、爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。写作要求：1.短文详略得当，条理清楚，行文连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数：60左右。参考词汇：movev.感动recoverv.恢复inreturn回报____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导1.一描二叙三表达——从性格、爱好描述父亲，叙述曾发生的感人故事，表达对父亲的爱；2.人称：第一人称；3.主题：人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通；子主题——和谐家庭；4.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。写作提纲描写父亲感人故事表达父爱Myfatherisa...Heis...Henotonly...,butalso...Father’sDayis...Ihope...AndI’ll...WhenIwasyoung,I...OnceIwas...He...After...,I...Iwas...范文赏析Myfatherisateacher.Heishumorous,kindandoutgoing.Henotonlytakesgoodcareofme,butalsohelpsmebeabetterperson.WhenIwasyoung,Ioftenfellill.OnceIwasseriouslyillinhospital.Helookedaftermealldayandallnightwithoutanyrest.After10days,Irecoveredwithhisgreatcare,buthefellill.Iwasmoveddeeplybyhisgreatlove.Father'sDayiscoming.Ihopehe'llbehealthyandhappyforever.AndI'llmakegreaterprogressinreturn.名师点评作者运用“一描二叙三表达法”介绍父亲的伟大，结构清晰，行文流畅。添彩点：亮点词汇：notonly...butalso...不但……而且……；takegoodcareof好好照顾；once曾经；fallill生病；alldayandallnight整日整夜精彩句式：Iwasmoveddeeplybyhisgreatlove.(运用了被动语态这样的高级句型)；Ihopehe'llbehealthyandhappyforever.(运用了宾语从句)四、迁移写作请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记叙爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。注意：1.可适当发挥，增加细节；2.词数：不少于60。参考词汇：goonabusinesstrip出差；immediately立即；medicine药_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihaveahappyfamily.Myparentsarekindandtheylovemesomuch.Ilovethemdeeplyandalwayswanttodosomethinginreturn.LastMonday,myfathersaidgoodbyetomymotherandmeandwentonabusinesstrip.Hewouldbeawayforthreedays.Justthenextmorning,Ifoundmymotherwasn’tfeelingwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shehadacold.Iimmediatelywenttogethersomemedicineandthenmadeab