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madeEmmasatisfied.Thestudentsbehavedwellinclass,whichmadeEmmasatisfied.Thestudentsbehavedwellinclass,makingEmmasatisfied.Thestudentsbehavingwellinclass,Emmawassatisfied.PolishthesentenceMakeupasentencebasedonthekeywordskeywords:HuaHua;astonished;hearthat;openedhismouthwideAstonishedtohearthat,HuaHuaopenedhismouthwide.Hearingthat,HuaHuawasastonishedandopenedhismouthwide.HuaHuawasastonishedtohearthat,openinghismouthwide.keywords:theman;shoutinexcitement;AoLiGei;hislipscurvedintoasmileThemanshoulted“AoLiGei”inexcitement,with

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