03 劳动教育 中考英语满分作文赏析

03劳动教育NO.1（2022·黑龙江·中考真题）话题作文：近期，教育部调整课程体系，把劳动教育从综合实践中单列出来，纳入中小学课程。请以“Howtodeveloplaborhabits”为题，按照提出的问题谈谈你的看法。1.Whathouseworkdoyouusuallydoathome?2.Whatkindofactivitiesaboutlaboreducationdoyoutakepartinatschool?3.Youradvicetostudentsabouthowtodeveloplaborhabits.提示词：laboreducation(劳动教育)注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。HowtoDevelopLaborHabitsAguidelineonlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestodeveloplaborhabits.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】HowtoDevelopLaborHabitsAguidelineonlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestodeveloplaborhabits.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.Iusuallydohouseworkathome,suchaswashingclothes,sweepingthefloorandcookingmealsandsoon.Ithinktheycanhelpmelearnlifeskills.Atschool,Itakepartintheactivitieslikeplantingtrees,collectinglitterorcleaningthecitypark.Theyaregoodforbothourhealthandtheenvironment.Inmyopinion,weshouldhavelaborclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschoolonceortwiceaweek.

Allinall,weshouldtrytodevelopgoodlaborhabitsandvaluetheimportanceoflaborthroughourlaborexperiences.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据问题提示内容，以“Howtodeveloplaborhabits”为题，谈谈自己的看法。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主；文章可分为三段，第一段已给出，点明主题：欢迎劳动教育指导方针；第二段对照三个问题展开叙述；第三段再次点明主题。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词拼写及语法错误。NO.2（2022·海南·中考真题）为创造美好的生活，青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能（如烹饪、种植、救护方法……)。请结合下列提示和自身的需求，以“LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelp”为题写一篇短文，在英语课堂上分享。提示：1.Whatlifeskilldoyouwanttolearn?2.Whydoyouwanttolearnthisskill?3.Howdoyoulearnthisskill?要求：1.内容须涵盖所有要点；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；4.80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelpLifeskillsarenecessaryforusteenagers.Tolivemorehealthilyandhappily,wearesupposedtolearnmorenewskills...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelpLifeskillsarenecessaryforusteenagers.Tolivemorehealthilyandhappily,wearesupposedtolearnmorenewskills.Asforme,Iwouldliketochoosecooking,whichisabasicskillinourdailylife.It’swonderfultocreatemyowndishes.Besides,learningtolookaftermyfamilyisalsomywish.Inordertodevelopmycookingskill,Iwillfirstaskmymotherforhelp.Ithinkthedishesshecooksarethemostdeliciousintheworld.Andit’salsoagoodideatolearnfromthecookingvideosonline.Littlelifeskillsareabighelp.Let’stakeactionnow.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelp”为题，并结合题干中的三个问题，描述自己想要学习的生活技能，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍自己想要学习什么样的生活技能以及为什么要学习这项技能；第二段描述如何学习这个技能；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.3（2022·湖南怀化·中考真题）国家提出将“劳动教育（laboreducation）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：1.你对劳动教育的看法begoodforhealth;relaxfromthehardstudy…2.你自身的劳动经历及感受athome:dothedishes;sweepthefloor…atschool:cleantheclassroom;waterflowers…3.你对劳动教育课程的建议offerdifferentkindsoflaborclasses;holdcompetitionsaboutlaborskills…要求:1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；2.包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；3.词数：80词左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithink___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithinkit’snecessary.Becauseitisgoodforourhealth.Wecanrelaxfromthehardstudybydoinglabor.Iusuallydolaborathomesuchasdoingthedishes,sweepingthefloorandtakingouttherubbish.AtschoolIoftencleantheclassroomandwaterflowers.Icannotonlykeephealthy,butalsodevelopgoodhabitsfromit.Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool.Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanofferdifferentkindsoflaborclassestoteachushowtodothecleaningandgrowplants.What’smore,theschoolcanalsoholdcompetitionsaboutthelaborskillstoseewhoisthebest.Suchactivitiesmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Iamlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.IbelieveIwilldowellinit.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动教育”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍劳动对我们的好处；第二段介绍自己在家里和在学校的劳动经历；最后一段提出对劳动教育课程的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.4（2022·浙江宁波·中考真题）为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(aseriesoflabouractivities)，假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数80-100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。TimeThingsIlearnedMyfeelingsMarchgrowvegetablesandplanttrees…Aprilrepairthingslikeelectricfans…May…Let’sEnjoyWorking________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】Let’senjoyworking!Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingclothes.Ithinkthelabouractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.【解析】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己参加的学校组织的一系列劳动实践活动的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。NO.5（2022·贵州毕节·中考真题）劳动课即将走进我们的课程中，你作为一名即将完成义务教育阶段学习任务的学生，请你为在校同学写一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你对新课程方案的看法和建议。词数80左右。内容包括：1.初中学生的学习任务应该有哪些?（写2点）2.课程方案规定，初中学生能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。对此你有何想法?（2点）3.你对在校同学的倡议（2点）作文要求：1.文章的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；2.语句连贯，书写工整；不得出现单位或个人真实名称。参考词汇：课程方案：curriculumplan；设计食谱designrecipes；AnewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschoolThenewchangeaboutthelaborclassinschoolhashadaheateddiscussiononline._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】AnewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschoolThenewchangeaboutthelaborclassinschoolhashadaheateddiscussiononline.Accordingtothenewcurriculumplan,studentsshouldlearnthebasicsubjectswell,suchasChinese,Math,Englishandsoon.Besidesthat,studentsshouldalsohavelaborclassessothatstudentscankeephealthy.Thenewcurriculumplanalsosaysthatstudentscandesignrecipesforthreemealsadayandmake3-4dishesforlunchordinnerindependently.Ithinkitnotonlyhelpstodevelopstudents’independence,butalsoitcanmakestudentsbetterunderstandtheirparents.Asstudents,weshouldtakeanactivepartinlaborclassesandlearnsomeusefullifeskills.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“Anewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschool”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要谈论初中学生的学习任务有哪些；第三段谈论对中学生设计食谱以及做饭的看法；第四段讲述对学生的倡议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.6（2022·贵州贵阳·中考真题）劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此，青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期，育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历，以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。要求如下：1.请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动；2.重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议；3.文中不得出现真实个人信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________