高考英语应用文写作表达微技能（全国）09慰问信

09慰问信（2013年，山东卷）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.词数：120-150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本书面表达考查提纲类作文。从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。【范文点评】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：不定式作目的状语：Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.

非谓语动词和定语从句：Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.【经典套路】第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分第四段：补充说明+客套话慰问信（含抗“疫”慰问信）开头句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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句子

(your

teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

I

amtohearabout

sth.

(yourloss

…)4.

Knowingyoursituation,

I

feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中间段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特别能理解你现在的感觉，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和时间3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是众所周知，做...本身就极其困难4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.为了准备这次...,你已经尽了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的错结尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

If

I

candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.（交代事由）It’sunderstandableforyouto.（表明主要观点）However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.（提出建议）First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto（直面）theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供帮助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表达愿望与祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________一、题型特点慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。二、写作思路第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；第三步：表达愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然发生了一场惊人的、未曾预知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.听到地震的消息我们很难过。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我们非常遗憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…当我听说……时，我非常关心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我们是多么担忧。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我们真心希望你早日康复。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的帮助，请告知。1．假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括：1.你所了解的灾情；2.你的担忧；3.你的帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被烧毁，他现在住在临时避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他，内容要点如下：1.询问受灾情况，表示关心；2.鼓励他振作起来，重建家园。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：山火mountainfireDearBill,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李华。你的英国好友Joe竞选篮球队队长失败了。他给你来信说他很受挫败。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封慰问信。要点：1.得知消息；2.安慰并鼓励他；3.表达自己的关心和祝愿。提示：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：不少于100词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。3.参考词汇：竞选runforDearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Zack来邮件告诉你说，他未能通过"朗诵唐诗"选拔赛。请你用英文给Zack写一封慰问邮件，主要内容包括：1.点明得知的情况；2.表达理解和安慰；3.鼓励对方。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加情节和连贯语。参考词汇：

"朗诵唐诗"选拔赛thetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．据报道，7岁的美国男孩Trump得知自己身患癌症（cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Trump收到一封慰问信，就多为他分担3美元的治疗费。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Trump写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.表亦鼓励；3.祝他早日康复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你叫王红，得知你的英国朋友Andrew的爱犬Sparky发生了意外永远离开了他，请你给他写—封慰问信。注意:1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假设你是李华。重阳节即将来临，校学生会决定组织大家去敬老院开展慰问活动。请你给你的外国朋友一来自英国的交换生John写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括;1.活动简介;2.具体安排（出发时间、地点等）。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:重阳节“DoubleNinthFestival”;敬老院“nursinghome”DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假定你是某国际中学的李华，将参加校志愿者协会慰问社区的留守儿童。请写信邀请你校交换生Cathy一起参加，内容包括：1．活动内容；2．发出邀请。提示词：留守儿童left-behindchildren注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCathy,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua9．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1.向Jenny表示问候和慰问。2.针对她的问题提出几点建议。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假如你是红星中学学生李华。得知英国好友Jim在他们学校运动会的接力赛(therelayrace)中摔倒，导致腿部骨折，请你用英文写一封邮件给他，内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.康复建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头语和结语已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua12．假设你是李华，你的网友David刚随父母搬家并换了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交朋友的建议（至少两点）。要求：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假定你是李华，上周与交换生Henry一起参加为期三天的社区志愿者活动，但Henry因故缺席了最后一天的活动，请根据以下要点向他介绍相关情况：1.表示慰问；2.活动内容及流程；3.个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1．DearMike,Howareyoudoing?Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.I’mreallyworriedaboutyou,yourfamilyandallyourfriendsthere.I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.Bestwishestoyouall!Yoursincerely,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike写一封慰问信，需描述自己所了解的灾情，表达担忧，并说明自己的帮助。【写作分析】1.词汇积累难过的：sorry→sad,sorrowful糟糕的：terrible→dreadful,awful,horrible发生：happen→occur,takeplace困难的：difficult→hard,tough为……担心：beworriedabout→beconcernedabout一定程度上：tosomeextent→insomeway,toacertainextent,tosomedegree克服：getover→conquer,overcome困难：difficulty→obstacle,barrier2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.拓展句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates,which,tosomeextent,mayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.(运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hear的宾语)[高分句型2]Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.(运用了连接副词how引导名词性从句作imagine的宾语)[高分句型3]I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.(运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hope的同位语)2．DearBill,Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.Areyouoryourfamilyinjured?Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.Howabouttheconditionsthere?Doyouhaveenoughclothesandfood?Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.Cheerup!I'msureyouwillrebuildyourhometownsoon.Anyway,tomorrowisanotherday!Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被烧毁，他现在住在临时避难所，现要求你根据所给要点写一封邮件慰问他。【写作分析】1.词汇积累非常：extremely→badly担心的：worried→anxious损害：damage→harm导致：cause→leadto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.拓展句：Becauseyourhousewasburneddown,youarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）【高分句型2】Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）3．参考范文：DearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeel.However,wecanlearnmorelessonsfromfailurethanfromsuccessMaybeitisagoodthingforyourfuture.Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.Learnfromtheexperienceandthinkaboutwhattodonext.Tobeexact,first,didyoumakegoodpreparationsforthecompetition?Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.Second,whatareyourstrengthsandshortcomings?Thisisanotherquestionforyoutothinkdeeplyabout,becauseitwillmakeyournextattemptmoresuccessful.Havefaithinyourself.Youareacapable,wisepersonandIbelieveinyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Joe写封信，对他竞选篮球队队长失败，予以安慰。并简要分析失利的原因。【写作分析】1.词汇积累竞争（岗位）：competefor→runfor聪明的：smart→wise有能力的：able→capable确切地说：exactlyspeaking=tobeexact2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.拓展句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities,whichrangefrompracticingyourspeechestodrawingupafutureworkplan.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.(运用了由what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2]Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.(运用由that引导的宾语从句)4．DearZack,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.YouhavedevotedyourselftolearningChinese,especiallyChinesepoetry.Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficultforChinesethemselvestolearnChinesepoetrywell,muchlessaforeigner.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.It’snotyourfault.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大朋友Zack写一封慰问邮件，对他未能通过“朗诵唐诗”选拔赛表示理解和安慰。【写作分析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时,少量一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.点明得知的情况；2.表达理解和安慰；3.鼓励对方。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）devoteto,asweallknow,madeeveryeffort,getreadyto,makeit,bestwishes,第三步：连词成句1.I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.2.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.3.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.4.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.5.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表转折对比关系：but,2.表因果关系：So,连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.（运用which引导非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.（运用that引导宾语从句）5．DearTrump,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.Pleasecheerupandholdon!I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.Don’tworryaboutthemoneybecausetheACSwilldonatethreedollarsforeachcomfortletteryoureceive.Iwillalsotellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyourtreatment.Hopeyouwillrecoversoon.Yours,LiHua【分析】这是一篇应用文中的书信写作。【写作分析】题目要求假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Trump写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.表示鼓励；3.祝他早日康复。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【典型句式】这封书信的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.定语从句的运用；I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.宾语从句的运用。6．DearAndrew,I'msosorrytohearthenewsaboutyourdog.Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.Ourpetsgiveusmuchenjoymentandpleasantcompanionship.Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.Iknowthatourpetsarenotonlyanimalsbutalsoourchildren.Theyareloyaltousandwewillfinditinterestingtoplaywithourpets.Theycanknowouremotionsasamanthinks.Theycanbringusjoyandpositiveeffectsaswell.Ihopethegoodmemorieswilleasethefeelingsofloss.YourssincerelyWangHong【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【写作分析】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信：假设你叫王红，得知你的英国朋友Andrew的爱犬Sparky发生了意外永远离开了他，请你给他写—封慰问信。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：sadnessandloneliness（悲伤孤独）；enjoymentandpleasantcompanionship（快乐和陪伴）；warmgreeting（热烈欢迎）；not…but（不是而是）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【典型句式】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.使用了定语从句；Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.运用了状语从句。显示出作者扎实的英语功底。值得大家学习与借鉴。7．DearJohn,Nextweekend,anactivitythemedtheDoubleNinthFestivalwillbeheldbytheStudentUnion.Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.Thisyear,we'regoingtovisittheoldinthelocalnursinghome.Livingawayfromtheirchildren,theyoftenfeellonelyandunhappy.Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.We'llgatherattheschoolgateat8amnextSaturdaymorningandgobybus.Iwouldbegladifyoucouldcome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华。重阳节即将来临，校学生会决定组织大家去敬老院开展慰问活动。请你给你的外国朋友一来自英国的交换生John写一封邮件，邀请他参加。【写作分析】1.词汇积累喜欢：beinto→befondof参观：visit→payavisitto计划：plan→arrange肯定：surely→definitely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.拓展句：TheDoubleNinthFestival,whichfallsonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,isheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.（运用了现在分词作状语）【高分句型2】Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.（运用了不定式作目的状语，which引导定语从句）8．DearCathy,Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolvolunteerassociationplanstovisittheleft-behindchildreninthecommunitythisweekend.Wearewonderingwhetheryoucanjoinus?Withtheirparentsworkingfaraway,thoseleft-behindchildrenareinneedofloveandcare.Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.Yourparticipationwillsurelyaddpleasuretothismeaningfulday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信邀请你校交换生Cathy一起参加校志愿者协会慰问社区的留守儿童活动，内容包括：活动内容；发出邀请。【写作分析】1.词汇积累因此：Therefore→Thus计划做：bescheduledtodo→plantodo玩得开心：havefun→enjoyoneself真诚地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.拓展句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem,whichcanmakethemfeelwarm.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.(notonly…butalso连接句子时，notonly位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)[高分句型2]Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.(运用了since引导的状语从句，不定式作宾语补足语)9．DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.Youcanbuildupagoodrelationshipwiththembyrespectingyourteachersandhelpingyourclassmates.Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.Inaddition,itisalsohelpfultodevelopvarioushobbies,whichcanmakeyourlifemorecolorful.Allinall,Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourhighschoollife.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求给朋友提出建议帮助她更好的适应高中生活。【写作分析】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion适应：adjustto→adaptto此外：beisides→what’smore重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.拓展句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementwhichwillrelieveyourpressure.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型2】Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句。）10．DearEric,I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.Firstly,youshouldstopeatingtakeoutfood.Instead,it’sagoodideatocookbyyourself.Inaddition,regularexerciseisalsonecessarybecauseworkingoutproperlyhelpsyoudigestbetter.Lastbutnotleast,keepagoodmoodeveryday,whichcanpositivelyaffectyourphysicalhealth.Ifyoustilldon’tgetbetteraftertwodays,youshouldseeadoctor.Ihopemyadvicewillworkforyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，给出建议。【写作分析】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion紧急的：urgent→pressing独自：byoneself→onone’sown此外：inaddition→moreover2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.拓展句：It’surgentforyoutomakesomechangesbecauseitisbadforyourhealth.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.(运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导