三模英语读后续写个人成长类 帮助老人实现去丰收节的愿望 讲义

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

On

asunnyafternoon,myfriendOllieandIwereenjoyingskateboardingatourlocalpark.

Ourmoodwaslight

untilOlliespottedaposterfortheupcomingHarvestFair.Theideaofattendingitwasthrilling,buttheticketpriceof$50quickly

icedourenthusiasm.

Whilewewerethinkingoverthecost,ourattentionwasdrawntothelistofattractions.

Among

thevariousactivities,wenoticedthatourfavoriteband-Eagleswasgoingtoperform.

Wecouldn'thelpbutbreakintosingingourfavoritesongbythem.

Whataddedtoourexcitementwasthepiecontestintheposter,adelightfulreminderofoursharedmemory.

Itusedtobethemostpopulareventinourcommunity.

Butthinkingoftheexpensivetickets,whichseemedtobeashadowoverourexcitement,weallsighed.ThenIsuggestedgoingtomyparents'storetoseeiftheycouldhelp.

Upon

arriving,mydadtoldushehadsomegoodnews,showingsometicketstous.Theyweretheveryoneswehadseenintheposter!MydadexplainedthathisoldpartnerhadmadearequesttohangaposterherefortheHarvestFair,andinreturn,heofferedusfreepasses.

Muchtomydelight,thereweresixticketsforfivepeopleinourfamilyandanextraoneformyfriend!

Thenewswaslikeabreathoffreshair,bringingunexpectedjoyintoourday.Wecouldallsetouttoexperiencethefairtogether,noonemissingout.

Justthen,Mrs.Smith,anawesome80-year-oldneighbor,walkedunsteadilytowardsus."Ijustsawtheposterinyourwindow.HowIusedtolovegoingtofairs!"Shepaused,withhereyesdroppingbeforeshecontinued."Butit'shardformetogetaroundnow,andticketscostsomuchthesedays..."

注意:

1.续写词数应为150个左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para1.Ollieapproachedme,seeminglytosaysomething.

Para2.Afterthefair,IcameupwithaplantomakeupforOllie'sabsence.原文译文:在一个阳光明媚的下午，我和我的朋友奥利在我们当地的公园里享受滑板运动。我们原本心情愉悦，直到奥利看到了一张即将举行的丰收节的海报。参加丰收节的念头令人兴奋，但50美元的票价迅速冷却了我们的热情。在我们考虑票价的时候，我们的注意力被海报上的一系列活动吸引了。在众多活动中，我们注意到我们最喜欢的乐队——老鹰乐队将会进行表演。我们忍不住开始哼唱他们的一首我们最喜欢的歌曲。而海报上的馅饼比赛更是增添了我们的兴奋感，这唤起了我们共同的回忆。它曾经是我们社区最受欢迎的活动。但想到昂贵的票价，它似乎给我们的兴奋蒙上了一层阴影，我们都叹了口气。然后我建议去我父母的店看看他们是否能帮忙。到达后，我父亲告诉我们他有一个好消息，并向我们展示了一些门票。它们正是我们在海报上看到的那种！我父亲解释说，他的老朋友请求在这里张贴一张丰收节的海报，作为回报，他给我们提供了免费通行证。令我高兴的是，我们家五个人有六张票，还给我的朋友多了一张！这个消息就像一股清新的空气，给我们的一天带来了意外的喜悦。我们可以一起去体验丰收节，一个都不会错过。就在这时，一位了不起的80岁邻居史密斯夫人摇摇晃晃地向我们走来。“我刚在你家窗户上看到那张海报。我以前是多么喜欢去集市啊！”她停顿了一下，眼睛垂下，然后继续说。“但现在我行动不便，而且现在的票价这么贵……”续写写作提纲：续写第一段：丰收节邀请奥利---邀请史密斯夫人带有安慰的微笑提供多余的票史密斯夫人----感到惊喜感激地接受邀请多年来的愿望狂欢节体验---进入节日场地神奇的世界馅饼的香气现场音乐的旋律悲伤感觉无法摆脱奥利不在的感觉续写第二段：奥利的派对计划派对--弥补奥利的缺席召集朋友派对准备---奥利最喜欢的零食和饮料美丽的灯光和鲜花丰收节上的短视频派对活动---奥利眼中的喜悦泪水唱歌、欢笑、分享故事珍贵回忆美好的夜晚永远珍藏的回忆参考范文1：Para1.Ollieapproachedme,seeminglytosaysomething.

“Mrs.Smith,”shesaidwithacomfortingsmile,“WouldyouliketojoinusfortheHarvestFestival?Ihappentohaveanextraticket.”Uponhearingmyinvitation,

Mrs.Smith'sfacelitupingreatsurprise.

ShegratefullyacceptedOllie's

invitationandsaidithadbeenawishofhersformanyyears.

Thatevening,westeppedintothefestivalgroundslikechildrenenteringamagicalland.Theairwasfilledwiththescentoffreshlybakedpiesandthemelodiesoflivemusic.Nevertheless,Icouldn't

shakethefeelingofsadness

knowingthatOlliewasn'twithus.Para2.Afterthefair,IcameupwithaplantomakeupforOllie'sabsence.Thenextday,Igatheredafewfriendsandwedecidedtoorganizeasmallparty

specificallyforOllie.Wepreparedherfavoritesnacksanddrinks,decoratedthespacewithbeautifullightsandflowers,andevenputtogetherashortvideoofourbestmomentsattheHarvestFestival.WhenOlliewalkedin,hereyeswerefilledwithtearsofjoy,becauseshewasdeeplytouched

byourthoughtfularrangement.

wespentawonderfuleveningsinging,laughing,andsharingstories.

Withtheclockstrikingmidnight,weallknewthatthisnighthadbecomeamemorywewouldcherishforever.参考范文2Para1:Ollieapproachedme,seeminglytosaysomething.

Hiseyesshonewithamixofexcitementandhesitation."Hey,whydon'tIgivemytickettoMrs.Smith?"hewhispered,glancingattheelderlywoman.AwarmfeelingspreadthroughmeasIrealizedthethoughtfulnessbehindhissuggestion.Despiteourinitialdisappointmentovertheticketcost,theopportunitytobringjoytosomeoneelse'slifeoutweighedhispersonaldesires.GentlypattingOllie’sback,Inodded.Then,heturnedtoMrs.Smithandextendingthepreciousofferwithabrightsmile.

Para2:Afterthefair,IcameupwithaplantomakeupforOllie'sabsence.

Idecidedtoorganizeasmallgatheringatthepark,invitingourfamiliesandfriends,includingMrs.Smith.Wegatheredaroundacozybonfire,sharingstoriesandlaughter.WhileMrs.Smithrecountedhercherishedmemoriesofattendingthefair,Ollie’sfaceglowedinthedancingfire.L