作文11 2012年考研英语一大范文

2012年考研英2012年考研英语一写作真Directions:writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.InyouressayyoudescribethedrawinggiveyourYoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20【参考范文Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure,onthegroundliesabottlewiththefluidinitflowingout.Whatmakesmestartledisthatonemanisprettypessimistic,thinkingthateverythinghasbeenruined,whiletheothermanisstillsmiling,sayingthat“fortunately,thereisstillsomeleftintheTheimplicationconveyedbythepicturetousisthatinordertomaintainapositivespiritinlife,itisnecessaryforustohavethequalityofoptimism.Withcompetitionbecomingincreasinglyfierce,weshouldalwaysbearitinmindthatnoonecanachievesuccesseasilywithoutoptimism.Althoughthewaytosuccessisfilledwithinevitablesetbacks,itisoptimismthatleadsustothedestinationweareeagertoreach,bringsoutthebestinusandinspiresus.Thereisnodenyingthatoptimism,directlyorindirectly,playsanindispensableroleinourpersonalgrowth.Fromtheaforementioned,atnotimeshouldweoverlooktheimportanceofoptimism.Besides,holdinganoptimisticattitudeisthesinglebestthingyoucandoifyouwanttoavoidthenegativeemotionsinlife,whichisthekeytoachievingsuccess.Onlyinthisway,canwebecomeahighachieverinourchosen【参考译文个人非常悲观，认为一切都已经毁了，而另一个人仍在微笑，说“幸运的是，瓶子里还剩一些。面情绪，那么保持乐观的态度是你能做的最好的事情，这是取得成功的关键。只有这样，们才能成为我们所选领域的高成就者【句子分析1.Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure,onthegroundliesabottlewiththefluidinitflowing【解析】Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure常用于开头，本身是一个定语从句；onthegroundliesabottle为介词短语置前的倒装句；withthefluidinitflowingoutwith的独立主格结构2.Whatmakesmestartledisthatonemanisprettypessimistic,thinkingthateverythinghasbeenruined,whiletheothermanisstillsmiling,sayingthat“fortunately,thereisstillsomeleftinthe【解析】Whatmakesmestartledisthat……用于对图画内容继续补充描述；while……前两句话表示对比，thinking和saying均为现在分词作为伴随状语；left作为后置定语为生“余的，剩下的”3.Theimplicationconveyedbythepicturetousisthatinordertomaintainapositivespiritinlife,itisnecessaryforustohavethequalityofoptimism.orderto为了；主句为itisnecessaryforustodo我们有必要……4.Withcompetitionbecomingincreasinglyfierce,weshouldalwaysbearitinmindthatnoonecanachievesuccesseasilywithoutoptimism.that……牢记……；其中it为形式宾语，that引导真正的宾语从句5.Althoughthewaytosuccessisfilledwithinevitablesetbacks,itisoptimismthatleadsustothedestinationweareeagertoreach,bringsoutthebestinusandinspiresus.的强调句；包含Although引导的让步状语从句和一个省略了关系代词that的定语从句we6.Thereisnodenyingthatoptimism,directlyorindirectly,playsanindispensableroleinourpersonalgrowth.【解析】Thereisnodenyingthat……毫无疑问；playanindispensablerolein发挥不可或缺7.Fromthe7.Fromtheaforementioned,atnotimeshouldweoverlooktheimportanceof【解析】Fromtheaforementioned综上所述；主句为否定词atnotime置前的部分倒装句8.Besides,holdinganoptimisticattitudeisthesinglebestthingyoucandoifyouwanttoavoidthenegativeemotionsinlife,whichisthekeytoachievingsuccess.【解析】holding……为动名词作为主语；youcando为省略关系代词that的定语从修饰之前的thing；if……引导条件状语从句；whichisthekey