英语写作常见错误课件

英语写作常见错误与分析

AddSubtitlesHere..英语写作常见错误与分析AddSubtitlesHere一．不一致（Disagreements）

Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)

..一．不一致（Disagreements）Whenone二．修饰语错位（MisplacedModifiers）

IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.

IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillknowtheworldoutsidethecampus

better.

..二．修饰语错位（MisplacedModifiers）

三．句子不完整（SentenceFragments）

Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.

Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper...三．句子不完整（SentenceFragments）T四．悬垂修饰语（DanglingModifiers）

Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.

Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.

..四．悬垂修饰语（DanglingModifiers）

T五．词性误用(MisuseofPartsofSpeech)

Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.

Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.

..五．词性误用(MisuseofPartsofSpe六．指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns)

Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.Wecanalsoknowsocietybyservingitourselves...六．指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceof七．连接间断的句子(Run-onSentences)

Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.或：

Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecanbecomeacquaintedwiththeoutside

world

..七．连接间断的句子(Run-onSentences)

T八．措词毛病(TroublesinDiction)

Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.

Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.

..八．措词毛病(TroublesinDiction)T九．累赘(Redundancy)

Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.

Diligent,caringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.

..九．累赘(Redundancy)

Forthepeop十.不连贯(Incoherence)

Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.

Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.

..十.不连贯(Incoherence)

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